This is amazing! I'm holding auditions for Love Hina Abridged and I think you'd make a terrific Naru or possibly Motoko! Check out my channel for more details, and auditions end on Halloween!
Most of your voices were drowned by the music also. Make sure all your music and voices are on the same audio level. Also, increase how many lines you say for each voice. We can't get a feel for the voice with just one sentence.
Commit to the character. You're going to look foolish, but it's for a better performance. Be confident. Make the director say "WOAH! TOO MUCH! Take it back a notch!" Commit to emotions also.
Overall, you are definitely on the right track. Hope my critique is helpful!
@LullabySushi You might also want to play with ambience music and sound effects also. Try to think of each voice as a mini production. I'm glad you find this helpful. x3
Ok, technical stuff: Shave it down to a minute. Or as close to a minute as possible. You can definitely shave the bgm down a bit. Also, you need to fit music to your voices. Most of the music didn't add anything to the voice. Music adds atmosphere and a sense of setting. Most of it was quiet and soft. You had some loud voices, but no angry music behind it. You can be literal with your choices.
Acting: I felt like you were definitely holding back A LOT. You have a vivacious voice. Be loud. (TBC)
This is amazing! I'm holding auditions for Love Hina Abridged and I think you'd make a terrific Naru or possibly Motoko! Check out my channel for more details, and auditions end on Halloween!
AndySan 4 months ago
@AndySan Will do~
LullabySushi 4 months ago
Nice acting they are really good
kratosspartan101 4 months ago in playlist Liked
Most of your voices were drowned by the music also. Make sure all your music and voices are on the same audio level. Also, increase how many lines you say for each voice. We can't get a feel for the voice with just one sentence.
Commit to the character. You're going to look foolish, but it's for a better performance. Be confident. Make the director say "WOAH! TOO MUCH! Take it back a notch!" Commit to emotions also.
Overall, you are definitely on the right track. Hope my critique is helpful!
VioletxWing 5 months ago
@VioletxWing OMG Thank you so much! I'll work harder on my next one! This is really helpful. (: Thank you for being honest too.
LullabySushi 5 months ago
@LullabySushi You might also want to play with ambience music and sound effects also. Try to think of each voice as a mini production. I'm glad you find this helpful. x3
VioletxWing 5 months ago
Ok, technical stuff: Shave it down to a minute. Or as close to a minute as possible. You can definitely shave the bgm down a bit. Also, you need to fit music to your voices. Most of the music didn't add anything to the voice. Music adds atmosphere and a sense of setting. Most of it was quiet and soft. You had some loud voices, but no angry music behind it. You can be literal with your choices.
Acting: I felt like you were definitely holding back A LOT. You have a vivacious voice. Be loud. (TBC)
VioletxWing 5 months ago
I got chills ._______. It sounds so professional xD You're so awesome T^T
PlasticNotes 5 months ago
These were really good, nice work :)
goblinsrevenge 5 months ago