Its Money Down and the Sun is Down (Tyzen / The Pharcyde / Five Deez )

[weirdgirl420]

You have nice lyrics, and your flow is tight. Idk if it's a freestyle or you studdered a bit, but just a couple of lines you kinda tripped on. Otherwise good job, hey, and you're pretty cute ; )

[Wtfitst2daj]

dope!

[iamcalledmatthew]

my mind just exploded. not really, but a little

[DrTHVaDeR535]

good shit homie

[DrTHVaDeR535]

2:27 hah

[djSpinege]

like if you held the flow you had at the start it would

sound as pro as pro can get. over you-tube that is...

though i mist say your fast flow by the middle is sick.

[djSpinege]

getting alot better my man. "water was it's power,Bright life was its chase."

real good stuff, just try to relax your delivery a tad.

if you slow it down a tiny tiny bit it will sound less stressed. 5 starts.