@jacobwhitnall Well, not a sestina, but an unusual ballad form. The stanzas are in pairs, the first being in iambs, the second in anapests. I don't know of anything else like it.
The repeated half rhyme of "love," and words ending in an "uff" sound, reminds me of a Dylan Thomas poem, addressed to his aunt (I can't remember the title) which he signs "lots of luff."
@junjinho1 The odd lines have three anapests and an extra unstressed syllable. The even lines have three anapests ending on a stressed syllable. But it's not that rigid. Count the syllables on your fingers - a syllable being the least amount you can utter and still make the poem sound intelligible.
Thank you for reading of these poems ... The world needs to hear more of the poems with heart , so we can begin to heal ourselfs with the magic they hold with in them ..
Although I would rather here the original poets' voices in these clips I think your voice is well suited for reading poetry aloud (the only way it should be read). You are doing a service here, putting these up on youtube which has been inundated by hate and triteness. They say there's no glory in poetry, only achievement. You sir, have definitely achieved something here.
is that a sestina?
jacobwhitnall 1 month ago
@jacobwhitnall Well, not a sestina, but an unusual ballad form. The stanzas are in pairs, the first being in iambs, the second in anapests. I don't know of anything else like it.
SpokenVerse 1 month ago
we have a word in Urdu for absolutely awesome things that brings you sudden and inexplicable joy, "zabardast!"
that was the first word i said as i finished listening to this one.. :)
sidrakhan202 5 months ago
I love that this poem was rhymin'
Snapped my fingers to the rythmic timin'
Melancholly at the ending above
Never told us the truth about love....T:)
agrlfmtx 6 months ago
Can you please explain the meaning of "the ham in a temperance hotel", especially "the ham" ? (an overacting actor or a piece of meat or neither?...)
Thank you for your beautiful readings !
FaDiezeMineur 6 months ago
This is fab, well done
EdNortonisMineLol 7 months ago
I'd like to hear the first-rate imitation on a saw.
audiofile7 1 year ago
@audiofile7 A saw is a musical instrument - but you knew that, right?
SpokenVerse 1 year ago
I love all your readings that i've come across--and i must say, this one is definitely a stand out. Well done.
Dapperdan2009 1 year ago
The repeated half rhyme of "love," and words ending in an "uff" sound, reminds me of a Dylan Thomas poem, addressed to his aunt (I can't remember the title) which he signs "lots of luff."
MrHeslopian 1 year ago
@MrHeslopian It's called "Letter to My Aunt"
SpokenVerse 1 year ago
@SpokenVerse Ah I see thanks. For some reason I imagined that it had some grand title.
MrHeslopian 1 year ago
anapestic tri meter, for the second stanza am i right?
junjinho1 1 year ago
@junjinho1 The odd lines have three anapests and an extra unstressed syllable. The even lines have three anapests ending on a stressed syllable. But it's not that rigid. Count the syllables on your fingers - a syllable being the least amount you can utter and still make the poem sound intelligible.
SpokenVerse 1 year ago
haha it's a really fun poem to listen to.
wanranma 1 year ago
thank you so so much !!!
redsonha 2 years ago
FANTASTIC READING! Oh, how I loved the way you read this poem. Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
surrected4526 2 years ago
Thank you for reading of these poems ... The world needs to hear more of the poems with heart , so we can begin to heal ourselfs with the magic they hold with in them ..
nelson587 2 years ago
Thanks very much.
You give these poems lives, as well as a great conductor do.
joehauz 2 years ago
Although I would rather here the original poets' voices in these clips I think your voice is well suited for reading poetry aloud (the only way it should be read). You are doing a service here, putting these up on youtube which has been inundated by hate and triteness. They say there's no glory in poetry, only achievement. You sir, have definitely achieved something here.
rader55555 2 years ago
Is it read by W. H. Auden himself?
Albatrostardust9 2 years ago
No, it was read by me - I read all the poems in this channel
SpokenVerse 2 years ago
@SpokenVerse You did an amazing job!!!! Really, truly, well done!!! LOVE IT!!
wasteland70 1 year ago