Development - Rivers Cuomo's Song Writing Dealio

[gamemasterzoomzoomom]

Back to The Future FTW!

[johnsthabest]

its too heavy..

[KuugaroxTV]

idk man....i meean i agreee its too heavy.....but in the 80's, it was about heavy metal.....so i see wat he was trying to go 4 though.........

[tsandtss]

the "chugga-chugga" and the bridge and odd solo are so out of place. some good ideas, some not so good ideas.

[bleed0range]

I was trying to be different and approach it as though you were "turning up the radio" once it gets to that part. I knew it didn't fit that well but I didn't want to do it the boring obvious way... I had more ideas that worked better but I chose to go the odd-ball route instead and I mixed in other ideas into one idea. It probably didn't work as well as I thought when I did it but oh well.

[scorinaldi]

jesus christ dude, your shit is awesome

[bleed0range]

ha, thanks

[AnActualWorm]

bangin' solo man.

and yes! back to the future ftw!

[theemachineproject]

cool twist

[superhface]

and how old are you?

[coldblooded005]

I'll be waiting.

[gymbabe12268]

i like this solo so much more

[gymbabe12268]

its really good just needs some work its def. the right idea tho

[klisk]

What movie is all of this from?

[mebe]

back to the future

[AndrewG4d]

even tho this wasn't chosen, this sounded really good. especially the vocal over the solo, that was really nice :D

cheers!

[jordanbridges]

Dude, very nice! The solo was super man.

[Giggens]

This was pretty chill dude! It needs a weeee bit of tightening up (the build up to the chorus,like, the high hat cymbal and snare+strumming of guitar could be a little more in synch)...but other than that...rock dude!

Your vocals sound like the dude from Beulah at times!

[andrewface]

bridge doesnt fit

guitar solo isnt nearly badass enough

[bleed0range]

Please friend, show me how it's done.

[whatsherface612]

haha back to the future ftw. but i'm not really into this.. at all, really. ):

[bsilfan]

you gotta start listening to ozma bro. it will change your life.

[steveguy]

YES.

[BaronVonReichbach]

BRO YOU ARE GARBAGE. you get more and more doodie every time. if pre-mental breakdown rivers heard this he'd tell you that youre DOODIE GARBAGE BRO. stop before your family sees this.

[danthewelch]

Whatever YOU think Rivers might have done at one point in time is irrelevant, as Bleed 1) has been consistent at every stage, and 2) Actual Rivers gave him a shout out.

Good Job Bleed!

[jmbretter]

i agree :D

[gredavideo]

we don't care what u say...we're turnin' up the RADIO........

[bleed0range]

I love you too Mr. BarconVonReichbach.

[ats5]

Yo bleed...let me know what you think of my development

[bleed0range]

No prob bob... err, ats5

[pinkertoe]

back to the future clip was perfect. nice work overall.

[Tzimisce00]

well best of those I've so far heard by a pretty good margin.

[ats5]

i like it Bleed...the "oh's" were fantastic

[andrewface]

dont like the beidge the solo is shit too

rest is good

[raistarr]

great job bleed, sounds great

[blinkoboy13]

Fantastic Work. I was waiting for your video ever since Rivers name-dropped you in step 8. I think you really did a great job with the song.

[lisam805]

You know that new sound you're lookin' for? Well LISTEN TO THIS!

Great work my friend.

[taylor2d2]

I enjoyed your version, its very ' in your face rock ' but more than that I enjoyed your use of bttf footage. cheers.

[jaynehat]

Hey man, I really like this. The beginning sounds so weezery with the key part, would kinda like to hear that more in this. I dono, perhaps coming in in the 2nd phrase of the 2nd verse? Or maybe experiment with pulling it in as the outro builds up. And btw, the outro was great.

[bleed0range]

I thought about it, I did a bunch of different versions of "my take" on it. I think putting keys in that part where the "Ohhhs" are, that little breakdown part, might be cool and then add them to the ending or something. *shrug*

[Weezernation215]

cool sounds awsome I loved the solo

[Bimbly]

This sounds pretty good. However, you took out the 'dissonant' chord completely? Also- I'd take out the part at 1:50 and just cut right into the muted part. And fading at 3 would be perfect.

[madcow312]

holy crap this makes the song sound crazy good.

[vorloxu]

Really liked this one, especially the guitar solo. This felt very weezer-like and 80's at the same time, so you nailed it!!

[afkDave]

Bleed, I've always been a fan of your work, and I really have to say, this is as close to perfect for development as 80's Radio will get. Great job.

[kkgas27]

Great! Just a tad too long, fade it out around 3 minutes and that's it. As for recording, sounds like you might have a bit of latency problem. ASIO drivers might help.

[bleed0range]

Thanks! It's supposed to just end at 3:34, I just threw in the "high hopes" song as a joke cause Rivers said he had high hopes for me on this step in the last video. That part doesn't count! lol.