@eyesickill love the idea man, however if u want constructive criticism id have to say the bass sounds a little off at least to me...other than that this is definitely one of the best hip hop remixes of this song props :D
i like this...i also made a beat with that house of the rising sun sample be sure to check it out...and i also got some quality rap songs on my channel so go there and listen!!...peace!!
this is coming from someone who is an actual musician, and is in the business,
1) you wrote the bass line in a conflicting key, leading to dissonant notes which aren't pleasing to the ear
2) the guy who commented on your beat being in straight eighth notes is correct, he's not a weirdo for pointing this out, he's trying to help you out, as am I
3) you've got good Ideas, but music isn't about throwing sounds out for people to listen to, music is about expression
@TROMBONEBADASS no, music is about sounding good...which it did...it doesn't matter how much dissonants there is...if people like it, than it is right
@Eyesickill Hey man I really like this beat i was wondering if I can use it for a rap im writing...Of course u will get credit please respond,thnks man.
@Eyesickill he meant the beat and the complete rest of the song are offtime with each other. the beat is the ONLY thing in a song that needs to be on-time, and you still managed to fuck that up
The drums are in 4/4 and the sample is in 6/8... sounds like he did a bit to speed it up to fit in 4/4 but seriously just throw some 6/8 drums on there because that really switches up the flow of the beat.
hey this is a really dope instrumental no matter what anybody says, i wrote 4 verses and a hook to it i am looking for a download link is there 1, thanks for sharing. 5 starts too playa
i took alot of shit to much infact thats why im always lookin for a dime sack im to stressed out man i gottah relax so just take another blast of the shit that we pass The marijuana now i know you wanna take another long hit of the ganja theres nothing stronger then the shit that we launch up
nicorama on you hoes check out the channel look at my show catch my flow im about dough Im about to gas on these nigga so im comin for you this what i do this what i does this is my world and you gets no love i am above all you amatures so dont succom to all the hype that surrounds us killin beats you can say its unjust i been here for a while and you just rust
its soel i got you outa controal eat u like a egg roll smoke a bowl its my number 1 goal kill u like a mole take a stroll throught the park in the dark so dont make a remark im up like a arc kill u like a shark im lookn for flesh merkn so fresh never rap to a beat like thys butt shit im the best
i'm spitten i'm typin i'm rippen i'm writin i'm flippin i'm fightin i'm livin my life and i don't give a damn i ain't holdin your hand just controlin the sands and moldin the lands with my flows and my hands
im the poo doctor, that shit was sick, names mr fockter, like fucked er, you know how its spellt, im just dealin with what ive been dealt, written my stories no felt, no pens just in my head, step against me you will dread, the day youve been born like you need to be sworn, into my documentary to many stories your gonna need an eye piece to see nigga you dont know me but i know you oppose me nigga you dont gotta blues clue go ahead and look two more years ill be front page, whos who
who's who well i'm me so who's you nice to meet you some dood on youtube my views are to crude from disputes i've flew through i do what i'm used to and i'm used to what i do what i do is cofuse fools who are foolish enough to choose sproosin me up some booze and let's fuse up some fuckin tunes because dood i'm so fuckin bored i'm all outta some shit to do
1st of all,if yall wanna be rappers learn how to spell.2nd of all learn how to spit.ive got more of a challenge rappin against my mirror reflection.Kill All Wannabez!!!!CrossBone 2009!!!
how about stop sayin ur spittin when ur typin.. a "rapper" wouldnt type his lyrics down unless he's a retard.. n only way the name "crossbone" would work is if ur wit bone thugs n harmony..
yo yo to all the wack ass rappers. ive heard all ya shit b4 u ant never goona b hard 2 the core no more so plese beg 4 murcy of me when i stick my 9 where the sun dnt shit u av not been able to rhyme 4 sum time so take ya time while i count my dime wiv my 9 by the side n ya crew cummin 4 da ride away from the 5'0 dnt ruien ma flow ok i go but ill bk 4 more n ya can even bring ya crew n ill make um look like a bru and laugh wiv ma crew!!
Revive licks. you smug prick. Why u wanna put ur 9 milimeter dick where i shit? U fuckin faggot don't try and diss about your crew who's that? Ur fuckin mum and you. I turned the bitch blue. Sufication by cock in the mouth What I'm about. I rap heavy and fuck hard you got diessed by a 13 year old you fuck tard D:
Lol Playin around mate only jokin no disrespect to you or your mother. Feel free to diss back.
This is Vexman7 (THE LEGION) A.K.A Musashi, Cheese, One Dragon, Queer Eye (The Cuban)
We creep seep through crease deep you weep knees deep in shits creek we laugh smoke weed at your attempts to succeed Unison of absolution conclusion diffuser of confusion when strings loosen, we da chosen half a dozen that's 6 like 666 Lucifer in da mist !"THE LEGION"! risen from abyss to dismiss light dims street flow begins rewind pass time wind chimes soak the mind but not enough for the unwind
ayyy you noe.....ima let you off smooth after the beatdown ya boy got left him perilized and cant move, pandemical flu spreading clockwise, when the phone dies you will chemical denied.people pushing and shoving pulling roses by the dozens makin out with your cousins but this might sound crazy my pants are lazy and my draws are baggy but to keep safe my legs are starting to chafe mac 10s ina briefcase
Really nice, exactly what i was looking for. I play my native american flute with this beat and it sounds amazing. Really good job, where can i get more?
hey evryone check out my rap videos on my channel or search it on youtube POWER JAY FROM LA (FREESTYLE) THERE ARE 4 VIDEOS AM SOON GOING TO MAKE MORE!
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How long must I walk with my head down/I think its about time to walk with it in the clouds/Let people know what Im about/let em know Im coming threw don't move then I run you down/My voice will be heard yelling at the top of my lungs/So dope its like Im on drugs/I needa go to rehab Im turning into my damn dad/An alcholic know it all/Sometimes I feel like breakin his jaw/but he's family even tho he can't stand me/Il be a better man /Live a betta life then that wrk keepin my pockets fat
so were runnin faster straight up to the master finally there i put my blaster to the pastor step the fuck down is all i could hear like a nuclear fuckin bomb going off in my ear i cant let the tyranny go on for ever ive got to be clever seeking out help in this endeavor im askin u now will u join and assemble showing the powers that be that we dont tremble next time that we fuckin run up on their temple well make sure that THAT SHIT is eventful LLLLLLLLLLLL SSSSSSSSSSSS DDDDDDDDDDDD
lately ive been astonished,by tha dust that i gathered, on2 reliefz platter, till all waz scattered, 2 indifferent matter, that finances diff motions,of emotions,2 a potion, thatl b lethel in self defense,while tense,use my 6th sense,2 break into a residence,of pessilence, leadz 2 silence, wit a homicide, robbery n suicide,
i rip rhymes with eyes dilated like my peoples, i burn you up more then fake churchs steeples, im nasty like hiv infected hypodermic needles, cause im like kain cause i see no evil, but what i hear have you commiting phycological suicide, like aliens i leave you bleeding blueinside, having butt sex in jail is gay no where boarderline, my rhymes are angier then an orphins eyes, while being witness to rape as his mother dies, to top it of next to him his father lies.
pretty sure your dumb ass said something like that 10 months ago...jack ass. why do I have so many more hits than you with the idea....obviously you suck. plus this isn't even the completed version of it... Any way, why don't you check the new beats i posted, they blow you outta the water son.. be seated.
like a computer under invasion, the masses are wired to follow orders the goverments persuasion, letting everymother fucker in, from black, indian to asian, im not even racist , but its blatant its a universal enslavement ive no longer got patience im a make it, or i swear as god as my witness this system ill fukin break it tear open its legs and rape it its not even a statment its basic, pride rules, not yet gripped a gloc or a steel tool cos at the moment im still cool,
but for how long i cant keep on watching im no fool,
ive applied for university this year,
they wnna accept me, cos if they reject me
theyll see a mad me, if the system wants to refuse me prospects ill turn the whole of the uk into the projects, its logical , im more than knowlegleable, way beyond school, but if they keep moving the goals how am i meant to score, being eternally poor what for so i can work for these bitches, yeah right no more
Yeah, it was something I had an idea for..and I have a much better (I like to think) version of it. I was going to post it after about 300 Views maybe. I just wanted to see if I could get any hits before I post more! Thanks for the input though.
P.S. if you didn't realize it, it is sampled..all of it is samples other than drums.
The beat is dope,only if it had a chorus
martinfixed 3 weeks ago
@eyesickill love the idea man, however if u want constructive criticism id have to say the bass sounds a little off at least to me...other than that this is definitely one of the best hip hop remixes of this song props :D
stefanrom89 3 weeks ago
i like this...i also made a beat with that house of the rising sun sample be sure to check it out...and i also got some quality rap songs on my channel so go there and listen!!...peace!!
/watch?v=cYLoCmIGn2I
SkyHighh1994 3 months ago
Hey, can i use this beat to make a mash-up? I'll give you credit in it
Schmidttty22 4 months ago
Ew. Why.
gilmorespore 5 months ago
fucking raw.
420doobiedude 7 months ago
Boy can i use it for a classic rap song?like storyteller. it inspire me like the rising sun .
odisey93 7 months ago
While i do believe there are some tunes that should be left alone and this is one of them...this aint bad at all mate.
Wow, i sounded like an 18th century english gentleman there. Ectually.
TheSoldier0fortunE 8 months ago
Sounds like sumthing eminem would spit on
MrSpotlight101 8 months ago
like
IEPDirtyTruth 9 months ago
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facug10 9 months ago
great beat !!!!! check my tracks i gotta a song i wanna do 4 dis
leskidd91 9 months ago
this song is in 3/4 not 4/4
it just sounds wierd
trulafloyd 10 months ago
bass is slightly detuned!
Slamce1980 10 months ago
did any rapper sample this ?
ChefRaekwon94 11 months ago
@ChefRaekwon94 Yes K.I.Z
GameplayLoader 7 months ago
yo this is sick could i use it
spiid3r83 11 months ago
sick beat dude! is there a way to download it to use it?
T3noR 11 months ago
To whoever wrote this,
this is coming from someone who is an actual musician, and is in the business,
1) you wrote the bass line in a conflicting key, leading to dissonant notes which aren't pleasing to the ear
2) the guy who commented on your beat being in straight eighth notes is correct, he's not a weirdo for pointing this out, he's trying to help you out, as am I
3) you've got good Ideas, but music isn't about throwing sounds out for people to listen to, music is about expression
TROMBONEBADASS 1 year ago 3
@TROMBONEBADASS no, music is about sounding good...which it did...it doesn't matter how much dissonants there is...if people like it, than it is right
Danielcory 11 months ago
How much for the rights to this beat?
jmoney358 1 year ago
sounds GREAT!!
biertje373 1 year ago
you made the beat with straight 8th notes, but the song is in triplets
davincidecoder754 1 year ago 14
@davincidecoder754 Thanks for noticing.... ?? weirdo
Eyesickill 1 year ago
@Eyesickill hahhaha funny shit yaw cool beat never heard it so it doesnt sound weird
SacSick 10 months ago
@Eyesickill it looks like to me he or she is a musician
KNthefogofdemise 2 months ago
@Eyesickill hahaha lol but i love this beat
NsiteAkaJoshuaMC 1 month ago
@Eyesickill Hey man I really like this beat i was wondering if I can use it for a rap im writing...Of course u will get credit please respond,thnks man.
bamcamproductions 1 month ago
@Eyesickill hey can I use this beat for a mixtape I am working?
ZeroXdan 1 month ago
@Eyesickill he meant the beat and the complete rest of the song are offtime with each other. the beat is the ONLY thing in a song that needs to be on-time, and you still managed to fuck that up
MrRupac 1 month ago
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denn ich bin psychisch krank:)
fatfighterxDDD 1 year ago
love it im using it
mattyboyz16 1 year ago
Old School! Nice thing!
Truadil 1 year ago
Like this man!
Frankie3112Nld 1 year ago
This is So Original ... Do You Mind if i Make a song to it??? If so please send me an email.... Message me on youtube for my email
InMyDomeMusic 1 year ago
hey eyesickill i love your song but i like the original at most:D
YOUR GRAT:D
AndKillwe123 1 year ago
The drums are in 4/4 and the sample is in 6/8... sounds like he did a bit to speed it up to fit in 4/4 but seriously just throw some 6/8 drums on there because that really switches up the flow of the beat.
sammorykwas 1 year ago 2
the added beat is just a little bit too fast.
ILikeDann 1 year ago
Amazing skill... keep it up! I was just telling my friends that I'm sick of mainstream. You gave me hope, and that's a ig word! Respect!
Revoluciona41 1 year ago
yo, this beats insane. this is sum classic shit.
14cgabner 1 year ago
its pretty tight but needs some work the only part thats bad is the rattle noise but profesianal job thnx for sharin
kingswagga39 1 year ago
wtf?
franci1304 1 year ago
hey this is a really dope instrumental no matter what anybody says, i wrote 4 verses and a hook to it i am looking for a download link is there 1, thanks for sharing. 5 starts too playa
ILLEGITIMATE01 1 year ago
this some bullshit man fuckin gay
tubzino22 1 year ago
u stole this beat off nasty u cant claim this shit
StonerJIm1 1 year ago
crap
JohnWelsch 1 year ago
nicely done man think i cud use it for a mix tape ?
ghetomonk 1 year ago
Now, this is a sample!! really like...
br0wng0d 1 year ago
It's about time I found a song with this sample!
Emphaysez 1 year ago
It's about time I found a song with this sample!
Emphaysez 1 year ago
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Emphaysez 1 year ago
This sucks! The original is "the shit".
cyberneticchaos 1 year ago
This beat is the truth. But you should add some of the vocals from the song as a hook then it would be explosive. But I live this track
Wyyldbillz09 1 year ago
stevomagliaro 1 year ago
im eye candy hard on the inside and out
ima do me and im gone stand out
tell my city stand up
your somebody in life until you got yo hands cuffed
tell them niggas man up
im kidnappin beats then i hold them for randsom
girls think im handsom
makin niggas gettin ghost like danny phantom
Nicorama007 2 years ago
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lilspow07 2 years ago
this is fucking pathetic...
rexdalewarrior 2 years ago
KISproductions 2 years ago
im the poo doctor, that shit was sick, names mr fockter, like fucked er, you know how its spellt, im just dealin with what ive been dealt, written my stories no felt, no pens just in my head, step against me you will dread, the day youve been born like you need to be sworn, into my documentary to many stories your gonna need an eye piece to see nigga you dont know me but i know you oppose me nigga you dont gotta blues clue go ahead and look two more years ill be front page, whos who
thorfoxxx 2 years ago
KISproductions 2 years ago
Nas did a rap over this beat, it use to be on youtube but i can't find it anymore, it was hot
mmdaddymike 2 years ago
THis shit is so kill I was just righting a song over the originals of rising sun but this is just perfect. Is this yours?
westcoastrecreation 2 years ago 2
it is !
do you like it ?
Eyesickill 2 years ago
you've just runed a great song ass hole
forsoitwasgood 2 years ago
funny, you're the only douchebag in a year and a half that thinks so..
FUCK right OFF
Eyesickill 2 years ago 16
1st of all,if yall wanna be rappers learn how to spell.2nd of all learn how to spit.ive got more of a challenge rappin against my mirror reflection.Kill All Wannabez!!!!CrossBone 2009!!!
CrossBone187 2 years ago
how about stop sayin ur spittin when ur typin.. a "rapper" wouldnt type his lyrics down unless he's a retard.. n only way the name "crossbone" would work is if ur wit bone thugs n harmony..
osoar215 2 years ago
Dissed* lol
joshiehanson 2 years ago
yo yo to all the wack ass rappers. ive heard all ya shit b4 u ant never goona b hard 2 the core no more so plese beg 4 murcy of me when i stick my 9 where the sun dnt shit u av not been able to rhyme 4 sum time so take ya time while i count my dime wiv my 9 by the side n ya crew cummin 4 da ride away from the 5'0 dnt ruien ma flow ok i go but ill bk 4 more n ya can even bring ya crew n ill make um look like a bru and laugh wiv ma crew!!
r33dymc 2 years ago
Revive licks. you smug prick. Why u wanna put ur 9 milimeter dick where i shit? U fuckin faggot don't try and diss about your crew who's that? Ur fuckin mum and you. I turned the bitch blue. Sufication by cock in the mouth What I'm about. I rap heavy and fuck hard you got diessed by a 13 year old you fuck tard D:
Lol Playin around mate only jokin no disrespect to you or your mother. Feel free to diss back.
joshiehanson 2 years ago
kill that battle talk its obsolete everyone knows rage gets u nowhere.
gueranga 2 years ago
It gets you to prison =( I'm only fuckin around anyway. =)
joshiehanson 2 years ago
YES!!!!
drovestmof42 2 years ago
this beat is bad ass
imthedj22 2 years ago
watch me....workin on a tune wiv tha rising sun sample wiv my producer...
gna be a banger!!
tilbree 2 years ago
necesita mas ritmo tiene k tener mas energía
rafinya999 2 years ago
at first i was like wtf is this ?
but i dnt really mind cause i be smokin on this cannabis.. i
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YungIceBurg 2 years ago
that's cool!
Am I able to use it for a sample?
viavita01 2 years ago
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This is Vexman7 (THE LEGION) A.K.A Musashi, Cheese, One Dragon, Queer Eye (The Cuban)
We creep seep through crease deep you weep knees deep in shits creek we laugh smoke weed at your attempts to succeed Unison of absolution conclusion diffuser of confusion when strings loosen, we da chosen half a dozen that's 6 like 666 Lucifer in da mist !"THE LEGION"! risen from abyss to dismiss light dims street flow begins rewind pass time wind chimes soak the mind but not enough for the unwind
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vexman7 2 years ago
nice song tho im not sure about the bass...
Dyais 2 years ago
ayyy you noe.....ima let you off smooth after the beatdown ya boy got left him perilized and cant move, pandemical flu spreading clockwise, when the phone dies you will chemical denied.people pushing and shoving pulling roses by the dozens makin out with your cousins but this might sound crazy my pants are lazy and my draws are baggy but to keep safe my legs are starting to chafe mac 10s ina briefcase
AmericazIdiot 2 years ago
pervers
heddernheim89 2 years ago
LUXUUUSSSS :)))))))
ilismixicek 2 years ago
Nice sampling bro! That's an old ass song.
5/5
EneMEzSiKK 2 years ago
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what is the song called?
joshkelly123 2 years ago
how the hell r u gunna mark somone down for putting shit like this up like little poems yuo can hate this comment but its true
jeffreychampion1 2 years ago
nice nice nice ;D
Dozo3112 2 years ago
Really nice, exactly what i was looking for. I play my native american flute with this beat and it sounds amazing. Really good job, where can i get more?
nativebillgates 2 years ago
hey evryone check out my rap videos on my channel or search it on youtube POWER JAY FROM LA (FREESTYLE) THERE ARE 4 VIDEOS AM SOON GOING TO MAKE MORE!
POWERJFROMLA 2 years ago
rightful bliss return us to our innosence
even though we grown so cold i know that theres a chance that we can save our kids
the question is do we know if this is it
do we know that souly it is up to us to call it quits
even if we call it quits are all of us gona ride wit it
it seems to me we're tried this shit it all ends up a timeless split
split into a seperate world thats all we know like seven girls
several set agendas but its helpless like a lightingswirl
nightsguardian 2 years ago
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my fear is that im dyin soon and now i know why life gives truth
equal like its 2 on 2 elusive like a righchous youth
righchous youth look at the news we all been played as fools
exclusive humans only we'll be lucky if we make it through
make it through wat its though enough to live this life at once
stuck in rutt its like theres no-one left that gives a fuck
gives a fuck about our kids livin like we live to sin
livin like lets get a grip its time we left this life we give
nightsguardian 2 years ago
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How long must I walk with my head down/I think its about time to walk with it in the clouds/Let people know what Im about/let em know Im coming threw don't move then I run you down/My voice will be heard yelling at the top of my lungs/So dope its like Im on drugs/I needa go to rehab Im turning into my damn dad/An alcholic know it all/Sometimes I feel like breakin his jaw/but he's family even tho he can't stand me/Il be a better man /Live a betta life then that wrk keepin my pockets fat
TWayne691 2 years ago
the beats chill it comes striking like a ground to air missile
bursting through ur gristle with a maniacle whistle
diggin radiation deep into ur brain u go insane with these morbid thoughts of pain shrouding ur fame
taken to the plains ur subconscious is lain
in a pit cuz it got hit and it shattered ur brain
tryin to step to the almighty NORTHERN CALI?
fuck up an ull wake up face down dead in an alley
not even by me itll be a random cat out on a rap
lookin for a catch and a overzealous white boy
TheTrueChuckNorris 2 years ago
to snatch
ull be gone off the face of the earth, not since birth has anyone determined how much ur life was worth
i started this shit when i was drunk off my ass
im here again with a glass of grade A premium GAS!
to lite ur ass ur ass up so u never return
until u learn ull get burned by the 1 man firm
i gave birth to ur generations way of life
ill take it back with a knife i dont need no strife
so get the fuck off my block kid, get outa my dimension
everything im saying is far beyond perception
TheTrueChuckNorris 2 years ago
sittin here trying to get a grip on my sanity
in the cold dark delirious dystopia of humanity
ppl all around and not a face to be seen
masks go up before the fuckin church bells ring
but fret not this is the age of revealing
concealing from here on out is unappealing
like the natives the mayans the aztecs and the ancients
were all one with life but some dont have the patience
to live to breathe to write to read
compare me to my full potential of human being
TheTrueChuckNorris 2 years ago
strapped inside the machine just wishin that i was free
so i drop the only substance that can bring it to me
maybe the path were on is set up for damnation
maybe long ago we missed the ark of our salvation
maybe its up there posing as a spacestation
maybe a UFO was our only transportation
from the same scenes of horror feelings of fear
mankind has been evolving for a couple million years
whos to say were not the remnants of a rapture
too advanced for our own diluted minds to capture..
TheTrueChuckNorris 2 years ago
TheTrueChuckNorris 2 years ago
for there are unhesitant beamz of promise,
lately ive been astonished,by tha dust that i gathered, on2 reliefz platter, till all waz scattered, 2 indifferent matter, that finances diff motions,of emotions,2 a potion, thatl b lethel in self defense,while tense,use my 6th sense,2 break into a residence,of pessilence, leadz 2 silence, wit a homicide, robbery n suicide,
wit the same knife, durin tha same fight,
took more than a life, ur takin meanin,
of everythin iz misleadin, n repeatin,
o93065 2 years ago
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eklipzer 2 years ago
years back dad used to say never give up and dont worry about troubles they'll pass away
push weight if you must, pimp if need be,
but in god lay your trust cuz only he can watch over you frequently
i won't always be there to watch you grow strong
and when i pass i ask that you move on
i'll be in heaven happly waitin the day to show you around where pain can't stay
FlyStevey 2 years ago
i rip rhymes with eyes dilated like my peoples, i burn you up more then fake churchs steeples, im nasty like hiv infected hypodermic needles, cause im like kain cause i see no evil, but what i hear have you commiting phycological suicide, like aliens i leave you bleeding blueinside, having butt sex in jail is gay no where boarderline, my rhymes are angier then an orphins eyes, while being witness to rape as his mother dies, to top it of next to him his father lies.
snowmonkey117 2 years ago
too repetitive , put some more samples youngin
kevinno0 2 years ago
pretty sure your dumb ass said something like that 10 months ago...jack ass. why do I have so many more hits than you with the idea....obviously you suck. plus this isn't even the completed version of it... Any way, why don't you check the new beats i posted, they blow you outta the water son.. be seated.
Eyesickill 2 years ago 2
"Like charlie dickens i got great expectations
so fuck yur speculations i can see yur green with envy
like frankenstein's creation
and now i'm bankin on my concentration gettin me fru college onto higher education
coz i don't wanna work for tha man i want my own co-operation global organization
our country's gettin overrun because of immigration
the government are corrupt like a computer that is under invasion"
tilbree 2 years ago
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hadoukensf4 2 years ago
hadoukensf4 2 years ago 3
but for how long i cant keep on watching im no fool,
ive applied for university this year,
they wnna accept me, cos if they reject me
theyll see a mad me, if the system wants to refuse me prospects ill turn the whole of the uk into the projects, its logical , im more than knowlegleable, way beyond school, but if they keep moving the goals how am i meant to score, being eternally poor what for so i can work for these bitches, yeah right no more
hadoukensf4 2 years ago
I like yur shit man keep it tight
"
Sometimes it feels like the whole world's upon my shoulders
so i look to tha skies and ask for guidance from the oldest man alive
he's the information holder even wiser than Yoda
in control of the skies like an air traffic controller
but he's kept in disguise sheilded from mortal eyes
is that for our protection or are we being told lies?
life is full how's if's whats and whys
break off these physical ties when i'm sleepin at night"
tilbree 2 years ago
Jus heard this and it's 1 of the best beats i can write meaningful lyrics to man..keep it up
"Since i was a young buck i had money generating ideas
but now i'm drinkin beers thinkin while i'm writin my rhymes
i need to shift my game up several gears
to get to where i wanna see myself in several years
in several years i wanna see myself as a credit to my mother
and set an example to my two little brothers
but everyday temptation's thrown my way
it jus won't go away the devil's here to stay"
tilbree 2 years ago
Go ckeck out a version of this song by New Orleans artist,CRIZMATIK
TheStevePTP 3 years ago
fucking awesome dude :D
LasseBassee 3 years ago 2
the beat is pretty ill... I have a track that would sound sick on it. can u send me the mp3?
spook2fast 3 years ago 2
i am already likin it like shit
my old man loves the aqustic and rap makes him sick maybe this is what i need to bridge the gap and snap i got my dad back
spiid3r83 3 years ago
my one loves the version of the animals ^^
THExAFROxSAMURAI 2 years ago
cool
NarniaRules9 3 years ago 4
pretty cool. I like it.
sarenacrowe 3 years ago 8
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add sum samples in it, maybe something a lil more creative. and non fake drums haha. keep tryin young one.
kevinno0 3 years ago
lol, fake drums! funny
Yeah, it was something I had an idea for..and I have a much better (I like to think) version of it. I was going to post it after about 300 Views maybe. I just wanted to see if I could get any hits before I post more! Thanks for the input though.
P.S. if you didn't realize it, it is sampled..all of it is samples other than drums.
Eyesickill 3 years ago
awesome beat, thanks for sharing
SimplyWandaful 3 years ago 9