WOW, this completely blew me away, being honest I was really not expecting this. Great job with the lyrics, I could feel the pain and emotion in it, amazing. GREAT JOB, you have potential. :)
Here's the deal: You need to get a better microphone and time your lyrics right with the music. They were good all except for the "and i'm still waiting for the kiss you promised". I'm a huge amy fan! The lyrics are good, but amy wanted to take a happier approach on the song. The singing is really good. The piano sounds fine, you can't really notice the incompleteness of it while you're singing. With some voice lessons, you could be really good.
WOW..that blew me away!! you are really talented but i'm sure you hear that all the time..i just ran across this video and WOW!! is all i can say..thank you so much for sharing your talent with us!! you have a new fan in me!!
DId you write this about something in your own life, if you did please know that someone who would put you though that is thhe one who isn't good enough. A decent person wouldn't take from their lover like that.
I love what you did to this song. The original is lovely as well but this version is so much more relevent to me right now. You have a lot of skill to be able to write such amazing lyrics, sing it and sound amazing, all while playing piano. You have a very beautiful voice by the way. The lyrics you wrote actually made me cry while you sang them. Its a very beautiful version of the song.
I do hope you do more with your own lyrics. It was brilliant darling
Again, your talent on the piano and lyrics are outstanding are brilliant but especially notable is your astounding voice, which is good in itself rather than simply constantly comparing it to Amy's.
Its really good :] but why'd you make the like only Evanescence song thats happy and make it sad like I said its really good and I and and i like all of your stuff but i think this song should stay happy...ish
he was/is my first love...it ended for a while, but is going again - it's very complicated. lol. =) but i wrote that while i was going through the whole...big break-up thing. really deep, hurt feelings...
seriously i didnt know it was a cover untill i opend my eyes and read it haha ... u should think about doing all covers or doing ur own materal its amazing
I like how you sing! I saw your videos how you sang all EV's song and once again I like it! One question i like this begining you sang is that you wrote or what cause it's beautiful!!!!
I have to say that I'm amazed. I came upon your video thinking it was perhaps a mix to the orginal song. However i have to say it was a very pleasant surprise. I personally found your playing mighty good. And your version passionate and dark. I feel you found a very good way of expressing yourself through her music. I think Amy would find it GOOD ENOUGH. Keep up the nice work
i really appreciate your comments =) and i'm so glad you could feel the deep passion in this song....because i poured my eeverything into it...thank you very much =)
stunned silence. You are good enough for whoever you want to be. But doesn't grief give artists and an amazing inspiration? Pain can forge beautiful things. The best stuff I have, I've written when I've felt like I'd rather die than go through another day of living.
well, as i said in response to larosity's comment, it wasn't necessarily that i didn't feel good enough for him, but it was the fact that he assures me he loved me more than i loved him, yet he was the one to end the relationship cuz i didn't measure up to his "requirements" - after THREE YEARS of love. so, the words were bitter sarcasm..."guess i wasn't good enough for you".
and i agree - those moments are the only times i cam write really good stuff.
yeah i could feel the sarcasm as well. I think reassuring you that you were good enough was also a way of reassuring myself. Btw awesome lyrics. You're really talented.
however you wanna view it...i just don't know, anymore. but yeah...most of these words came out of angry sarcasm. but lots of sadness, too...lol lots of crazy, merged feelings. anyways...i'm really glad you enjoyed it, and picked up on the emotions so well =)
And even though this is one of my favourite Evanescence songs because it's not sad, I like your "twisted version"... it goes along better with Evanescence usual style of lyrics.
About your singing it's so enjoyable as usual, just be careful with the stronger parts; I think you put much too energy on those, that it seemed like it went out of control (I think it's because you really feel what you're singing).
thank you very much =) and i appreciate deeply your detailed critique ^.^
yes, those high notes were really stressing me out...i had tried to get them down, like, literally six different times. it was terrible...once i finally got it, i kept it - no matter how strained or whatever it sounded. =)
probably because i wasn't playing piano while i was singing those notes =) when your attention is divided and you're not able to focus on JUST the vocals, but also piano...which makes me real nervous, lol...then you can't put as much into it as you could with full attention.
I like how you change the lyrics and make it work. you should do an angrier/heavier song though, cause you redid 2 songs which were very soft & emotional with the wordings, lets see how about you do "going under" and now make it an angry song kind of thing, i dunno just suggestings what do you think
i appreciate the suggestion =) yeah, the reason i've been twisted love songs is cuz of my mood...the attitude i'm having about my break up. i'm...not really as inspired to write when i'm angry. only when i'm sad and very...depressed.
lol i appreciate that...i just make sure to say that on my most stressful songs (i was real stressed out while making this - ugh) and i just don't want people postin "the piano isn't riiight" or something like that - lol i was just frustrated.
no im not which u must think is unfortunate but indy was good and was that ur whole family there adn jason
i watched that video with him in it thought it was funny the only thing i have to ask is 2 things that other girl is a witness and if so y is she wearing the cross necklace
so deep. i love it..so sad..
i actually think i fet h pain you were feeling when you wrote this..
bubblyblonde1000 7 months ago
WOW, this completely blew me away, being honest I was really not expecting this. Great job with the lyrics, I could feel the pain and emotion in it, amazing. GREAT JOB, you have potential. :)
Gaz1022 10 months ago
omg that so wonderfull
great job girl!!!
i definetelly love the lyrics you've made !!!
TheVenusPhoenix 1 year ago
this song makes me really sad and makes me want to really (emotionally) hurt whoever's making the person singing feel this way
even though this is sad, it's a sad masterpiece. well done. :') hope you feel better if this is something that happened to you in your life
Koga33525 1 year ago
@Koga33525 Yes, I feel a whole lot better now... Thank you so much for your compassion. (:
smalltowndreamer15 1 year ago
@smalltowndreamer15 :O thanks! i didn't expect a compliment like that in return :)
glad to help you feel better :)
Koga33525 1 year ago
nice take on this song
i know it was supposed to be happy but i still like this take
good job!
XMooAngelX 2 years ago
Here's the deal: You need to get a better microphone and time your lyrics right with the music. They were good all except for the "and i'm still waiting for the kiss you promised". I'm a huge amy fan! The lyrics are good, but amy wanted to take a happier approach on the song. The singing is really good. The piano sounds fine, you can't really notice the incompleteness of it while you're singing. With some voice lessons, you could be really good.
lorigurl40769 2 years ago
I love how talented you are! You can sing AND write amazing lyrics!
Simpily... perfect :]
AshadeeusDemonid 2 years ago
Wow you a good song writer and it sounds good together with the good enough piano.....
juu90 2 years ago
WOW..that blew me away!! you are really talented but i'm sure you hear that all the time..i just ran across this video and WOW!! is all i can say..thank you so much for sharing your talent with us!! you have a new fan in me!!
limomarc 2 years ago
That's amazing!
DId you write this about something in your own life, if you did please know that someone who would put you though that is thhe one who isn't good enough. A decent person wouldn't take from their lover like that.
Kiyoko4173 2 years ago
Yes, this re-write was inspired by a certain situation in my life...
Thank you so much. (:
smalltowndreamer15 2 years ago
:)
I hope you find your happiness then.
Kiyoko4173 2 years ago
Wow you're absolutely amazing!!! Do you have your own songs too?? Or a music myspace??? I'd love to hear more =)
revolution698 2 years ago
Actually, there's a sneak preview of my upcoming EP album on my channel somewhere. (:
smalltowndreamer15 2 years ago
(Ugh! How rude of me...)
And thank you! lol XD
smalltowndreamer15 2 years ago
loved ur version
fivefourtynine 2 years ago
I love what you did to this song. The original is lovely as well but this version is so much more relevent to me right now. You have a lot of skill to be able to write such amazing lyrics, sing it and sound amazing, all while playing piano. You have a very beautiful voice by the way. The lyrics you wrote actually made me cry while you sang them. Its a very beautiful version of the song.
I do hope you do more with your own lyrics. It was brilliant darling
XsinfulXvampireX 2 years ago
Wow. Thank you soo much for this comment. (:
smalltowndreamer15 2 years ago
Anytime love ^^ just being honest
XsinfulXvampireX 2 years ago
Again, your talent on the piano and lyrics are outstanding are brilliant but especially notable is your astounding voice, which is good in itself rather than simply constantly comparing it to Amy's.
Toadsanime 2 years ago
Hmm. I love these lyrics. If I end up doing a cover of the original, could I maybe make a second version with your lyrics?
pikachuluvver 2 years ago
you mean a cover of this version? definitely! just pleeease remember to respond your cover to this original video version (: thank you!
smalltowndreamer15 2 years ago
You sound almost exactly like Amy Lee! Nice job!
I really like your lyrics...maybe even better.
xxxAshleyDaviesxxx 2 years ago
OH MY FUCKING GOD ! THIS IS BRILLIANT ! I WISH EVANESCENCE DID A VERSION LIKE THIS ! but the credit with go to you (:
Inkx3 2 years ago
Its really good :] but why'd you make the like only Evanescence song thats happy and make it sad like I said its really good and I and and i like all of your stuff but i think this song should stay happy...ish
TLSIWOY 3 years ago
i didn't touch the original song...lol. it still exists as "happy".
this is just myyy version - i don't mean to "change" anything.
thank you =)
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
not a fan
ev9289 3 years ago
so who was the guy at the end and what happened?
Goodenough12 3 years ago
he was/is my first love...it ended for a while, but is going again - it's very complicated. lol. =) but i wrote that while i was going through the whole...big break-up thing. really deep, hurt feelings...
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
seriously i didnt know it was a cover untill i opend my eyes and read it haha ... u should think about doing all covers or doing ur own materal its amazing
jkscarbrough 3 years ago
this...made me cry.
your voice is beautiful.
duhhitskimmy 3 years ago 2
the lyrics are awesome =P
I liked it
schmooo15 3 years ago
wow thats really good:)
heyhannah3 3 years ago
the lyrics are perfect, describes how i fell about some1...
sifi41 3 years ago
The only bad thing about this is it's not downloadable. :(
sharinganuser23 3 years ago
i'll send it to you if you give me your email =) if you want.
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
PM me and I'll give you my email so you can send it to me. It's an amazing song, you're great!
jessikavee 3 years ago
That made me want to cry, you're so damn good at this T_T
0GoingUnder0 3 years ago
What could I say about that?
Firstly, you play piano very well, it's a complicated song to play.
Secondly, nice lyrics, those are usually my only strong point but none of mine hold a candle to this one.
Thirdly, I love you voice, you could check my videos where I sing Evanescence songs and I cannot put enough power or feeling into my vocals...
Anywho... Kudos!
AkitoAkitsuki 3 years ago
thank you very much for the full review! i'll definitely check out your covers =D
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
AHHH! this is absolutely stunning. I actually think i like this better than the original. very great!!
xBrokenxPaperxDollsx 3 years ago
ah i love it! amy lee should really sing this. you did an amazing job!
AmyObsession 3 years ago
you're welcome darling ;)
moondance92 3 years ago
I like how you sing! I saw your videos how you sang all EV's song and once again I like it! One question i like this begining you sang is that you wrote or what cause it's beautiful!!!!
moondance92 3 years ago
thank you very much! =)
actually i re-wrote the enTIRE song, and the re-written lyrics are in the video description =)
by the way, thank you for subscribing! i really appreciate that =)
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
oh i'm sorry, correction - lol. you didn't subscribed, you invited me to be friends =) thanks for that, too! lol ;D
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
you are amazing, Your voice is incredible, sounds a bit like Amy's, I love how you twist the song.
ABigFanOfCoop 3 years ago
where did u get the inspiration to write this song?
Goodenough12 3 years ago
a break-up
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
I have to say that I'm amazed. I came upon your video thinking it was perhaps a mix to the orginal song. However i have to say it was a very pleasant surprise. I personally found your playing mighty good. And your version passionate and dark. I feel you found a very good way of expressing yourself through her music. I think Amy would find it GOOD ENOUGH. Keep up the nice work
NightSparklle 3 years ago
lol nice pun ;) i crack that one all the time =p
i really appreciate your comments =) and i'm so glad you could feel the deep passion in this song....because i poured my eeverything into it...thank you very much =)
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
stunned silence. You are good enough for whoever you want to be. But doesn't grief give artists and an amazing inspiration? Pain can forge beautiful things. The best stuff I have, I've written when I've felt like I'd rather die than go through another day of living.
lpoland88 3 years ago
well, as i said in response to larosity's comment, it wasn't necessarily that i didn't feel good enough for him, but it was the fact that he assures me he loved me more than i loved him, yet he was the one to end the relationship cuz i didn't measure up to his "requirements" - after THREE YEARS of love. so, the words were bitter sarcasm..."guess i wasn't good enough for you".
and i agree - those moments are the only times i cam write really good stuff.
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
yeah i could feel the sarcasm as well. I think reassuring you that you were good enough was also a way of reassuring myself. Btw awesome lyrics. You're really talented.
lpoland88 3 years ago
thank you very much =)
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
Ah...I can feel the anger in your voice, Rebekkah! Nice playing. I'll venture to say he wasn't good enough 4 u.
larosity 3 years ago
however you wanna view it...i just don't know, anymore. but yeah...most of these words came out of angry sarcasm. but lots of sadness, too...lol lots of crazy, merged feelings. anyways...i'm really glad you enjoyed it, and picked up on the emotions so well =)
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
I loved the sound of the piano playing :) .
And even though this is one of my favourite Evanescence songs because it's not sad, I like your "twisted version"... it goes along better with Evanescence usual style of lyrics.
About your singing it's so enjoyable as usual, just be careful with the stronger parts; I think you put much too energy on those, that it seemed like it went out of control (I think it's because you really feel what you're singing).
Keep up with the great work!
Irisyame 3 years ago
thank you very much =) and i appreciate deeply your detailed critique ^.^
yes, those high notes were really stressing me out...i had tried to get them down, like, literally six different times. it was terrible...once i finally got it, i kept it - no matter how strained or whatever it sounded. =)
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
but those notes are that high compared with the ones you've reach in other songs :O.
Irisyame 3 years ago
oops it was *aren't that high*
Irisyame 3 years ago
probably because i wasn't playing piano while i was singing those notes =) when your attention is divided and you're not able to focus on JUST the vocals, but also piano...which makes me real nervous, lol...then you can't put as much into it as you could with full attention.
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
I am always amazed by you! Your voice is simply amazing! The lyrics were great... I am a fan of yours =]
xxsuperboixx9 3 years ago
hehe wow, i am so glad =D thank you ^.^
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
I like how you change the lyrics and make it work. you should do an angrier/heavier song though, cause you redid 2 songs which were very soft & emotional with the wordings, lets see how about you do "going under" and now make it an angry song kind of thing, i dunno just suggestings what do you think
prozzak2006 3 years ago
i appreciate the suggestion =) yeah, the reason i've been twisted love songs is cuz of my mood...the attitude i'm having about my break up. i'm...not really as inspired to write when i'm angry. only when i'm sad and very...depressed.
but i'll work on that idea =) thanks =)
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
Wow! I am just a sucker for gothic and demonic songs. You did just fine, you need more piano lessons.
AgentReid007 3 years ago
How is this a demonic song?
Her piano playing is awesome.
losingmymind18 3 years ago
Whoa whoa whoa!!!
I did not say is was a demonic song, alright?
It was good
AgentReid007 3 years ago
aw i hate when you talk shit about yourself in the description. stop it!
you're amazing! realize it!
xxitsmyfault 3 years ago
lol i appreciate that...i just make sure to say that on my most stressful songs (i was real stressed out while making this - ugh) and i just don't want people postin "the piano isn't riiight" or something like that - lol i was just frustrated.
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
yeahh understandable. some people on youtube suck :/
xxitsmyfault 3 years ago
yep...just wanted to mention that i knew the piano was incomplete before other people did. =)
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
I'm totally amazed, beautiful version, heartfelt lyrics and your piano playing is amazing! 5 stars. :D
EternalDreamspace 3 years ago
thanks so much, Sarah! ^.^
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
Very beautiful, the voice (Of course!)
and the lyrics. I can relate with this version better than the original.
If you don't mind me asking, who's the dude in the end?
losingmymind18 3 years ago
*sigh*...a lot more than i could ever describe to you.
he's my ex.
i'm glad you liked the song =) i relate to this version a lot more, too....tears poured as i wrote it, lol
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
Hehehe :D Good enough for me ;)
thecuteuglyman 3 years ago
lol - silly
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
wow, this is great. you have a true talent! both piano/keyboard and singing.
AppleOfSodom13 3 years ago
thank you! =)
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
good singing and playin and at the grad party too oo how did u enjoy indy tongiht
jman1gall1 3 years ago
lol are you becoming my stalker? ;) =)
it was excellent - and thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed the song =)
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
no im not which u must think is unfortunate but indy was good and was that ur whole family there adn jason
i watched that video with him in it thought it was funny the only thing i have to ask is 2 things that other girl is a witness and if so y is she wearing the cross necklace
jman1gall1 3 years ago
nope, she's not a witness...she's Sarah Moore, and her username here is Eternaldreamspace =)
and you not being my stalker would not be unfortunate ;) =D
yes, that was my family - and yes, Jason
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago
ok sry thkz
jman1gall1 3 years ago
the lyrics are up in the description now, so you should be able to enjoy/understand it a bit more =)
smalltowndreamer15 3 years ago