ORANGE - I KEEP ON DYIN'

[dj31974]

What the fuck is this fucking shit. I thought I was going to see some fucking racing..fucking gook!

[DaBluedude100]

wow you sound like the rest of the cunt-eyed wanna be niggers... boring. fag. talentless. 

[NguyenQuangDo]

your off beat

[6stringdooner]

fu

[Prototypexl]

Fags linking fake videos to other fags. Go choke on a cock, it already sounds like you are in this....."song"....and I use that term loosely, like your buddy uses your asshole.

[davidxbencosme]

you suck. point blank ur terrible. my ears are bleeding . your horrible. kill yourself. my girlfriend rhymes better when shes blowing the abc's on my cock. seriously tho u suck dude just stop

[dshrm]

UR A FUCKIN FAG

[MrViicc]

need more puns, more metaphors and maybe stop rhyming one syllables

[dirtyskidda]

wheres the fuckin video of gtr smokin bugatti you faggot

[daroundhero]

yours was cool

check out my verse out yo on this beat!

[kinggreggy]

u fucken chinkkk

[Derek12374985]

is this orange juice from toronto?

[hknation1]

gook.

[gaarachicreturns]

I love the lyrics =)) and the beat its really good keep it up♥

[Xfansite01X]

Nice Rap LOL

[TimeToBeHeard]

Nice lyrics, nice flow, nice beat = tight joint

[xNarutox19]

Nice.

[cracc408]

faggit!!!

[RepresentForMyPeople]

lmao cracc is a lil bitch

[regionfree1]

i like this track, he lets have a sneek peak of his thoughts,nice track.

[ps6877]

hey dude you got some skills, but no offense u need to just work on flow, im not hating on u, i got respect for anyone that does it for the love of hip hop, but just keep at it, practice makes perfect bro, keep spillin that ink

[hubhub27]

yeah he got potential, but the beat is cheesy like an "around the way local rapper" beat, and he needs a little more emotion and aggression in his bars like he needs to take control of it, but like i said, he has potential

[goppy08]

cool

[yunggirlVIET]

This has a pretty cool sound to it

and cool lyrics (:

[KoolFlow99]

hey this is pretty cool. i like it nice and clear

[Jasumi]

Lyrics are decent, but I think your delivery is off.

Just an opinion.

[revolutionary125]

you went good at the beggining but than you fucked up.ride the beat cuz you people mostly judge it by how it sounds to them.keep up with this though ill be happy to collab with you.

[12KingdomHearts12]

why the fuck was this link posted on the Yahoo! Answers thread "how can i tell if i have a ghost in my house?"

[crazycrew101]

hahahaha LMFAO

[BryMu]

the lyrics and overall flo is pretty sweet. ur good at it.

some parts dun blend too well, but you did a good job of makin due wid what you got!

Keep this shit up!!! =D

[MinJeeYoung]

Siick! ^^

I loved it :P

U have good rapping skills in ur voice.

Ur werent much off and i liked the instrumental..Ur words made sence and was clear for people to understand and i Loved it ^^

Great job! :D

Keep goin ur great! :)

[juliaababyy112]

this is fiiiiiiire

[gravityzsin]

shits hot, you just need a better recording setup.

[OrangePHX]

Thanks, this recording was done with my laptop's built in mic, that's why it doesn't sound that clear.

I'm getting a condenser mic/mixer, so that will be better.

I also used my mp3 player to listen to the instrumental while rapping, so its off timing as well.

[gravityzsin]

No doubt, that mixer and condensor are going to nset that shit off. Good luck with all the new stuff and keep me posted on when you add new stuff.

[2005ImpulseBlueGTO]

@OrangePHX

Confucius says you suck dick at rapping! Your a fucking homo you drive a piece of shit sentra and you audioswapped that video for $50 to buy some autozone stick on fender vents fucking chink. your just mad bc people like a car that you will never afford bc the nail salon only pays minimum wage. BTW i Flagged your videos since your a total douche bag. BACK TO THE NAIL SALON BIG BOY you've got a fart can exhaust to buy!

[OrangePHX]

@2005ImpulseBlueGTO

LOL you went through all my videos to find shit to say about me.

Are you some inbred whitey with no brain? I don't rice my car at all or work for minimum wage. What's your job?

[0545293061]

great!

[HikariKiAi]

joh man, its good

[G5Pr0ductions]

good shit.

[setokaibarules]

Great job *5 stars*

[tiggarr]

Lyrics had nice imagery but they were really basic. Dug these bars

As a kid I tried to be accepted/

But as I grew more I learned, so that concept/

I just left it/

and you started out with a nice flow but after that it went off beat. keep with it you got a lot of potential.

[Green3Rox]

i like the lyrics..

i like it but ur off beat

so my advice, u should find some bg music that blends well together widd ur lyrics kayy?

=]

[KoolFlow99]

Ok just some good adviice wrok on ya delivery love thte lyrics and stuff tho.

[MizYesung91]

u've done a great Job....

I Kinda Like It...

^_^

[JazzyCat22]

INSIGHTFUL

[;

- Jazzie <3

[DProductionMusic]

nice lyrics, but work on your flow.....you got a voice, just keep on trying 2 look for your self in the music, cuz u off beat!!

[KoopaKid2424]

good job man, you have potential!

The lyrics are awesome. Try to stay on the beat.

-TidalFlare

[k2stypoint]

Just constructive criticizim my friend, the lyrics are great, you just need to focus on pronounciating them better, practice sayin each word as clearly as you can. I was having trouble keeping up cause some where a little unclear, but your writing skills are great so it is important that you work on sayin it right so people can respect your talent...either way keep it up, and keep practicing, that is what it is all about...and dont let any assholes tell you otherwise...1-love

-Philly

[Truevectorfan]

Pretty good! I don't really like rap but this is pretty good and I like the lyrics too b^^d

[ChiyokoChan90]

hey it's nice =)

I like the lyrics..and your rapping skills are nt bad !!!

so keep it up =)

[chrisswagg1]

feelin tha lyrics but work on yah delivery not hating just helin keep it up 100;

[AnonymousPsyko]

Aye. Thanks for the Support. Check out my new video. Keep up the good work. your pretty sick.

[StreetStarsTc]

dope lyrics bro

[KisamesGirlfriend]

That's better than most of the rap I've heard! :3 (and I used to listen to a lot of rap, but not so much nowadays)

[FROSTYthaMC]

it's good but like everyone else said, you should work on staying on beat. to be successful i guess your rhymes and lyrics should flow more naturally. I mean, I'm still trying to perfect my "flow". its just something we as artists have to work on and find on our own.

-Frosty

[K1ng523]

um...WTF?

[bukjoe858]

never herd of a rapper wid style like yours it's pretty sick bruh!! keep it up!!

[JayCeeMuzik]

ur kinda off beat

try slowin down ur flow too

also try a more relaxed flow instead

some1 told that to me and it helped me

but other than that its gud

Also people check out my music

[sheikah1]

sounds nice!! great job^^

[silly478]

Nice i like :D u advertised on my page but at least you gave me something good

[mattrawr3]

umm u suck

[tehman1207]

work on ur flow a little more

[cb4allstar2]

i used to like rap like this but shitty faggots like soulja fuck and flo rida ruined rap for me..now i hate rap...this is good keep it up

[OrangePHX]

I know what you mean..hah so much garbage floating in the mainstream...

[lasojuju]

Pretty neat and tight. You have a good sense of rhythms. Keeping it going is an art of itself and it sounds to me like you know what you're doing! The lyrics are genuine...feelings well used. :]

[WangDianshi]

The sky's the limit, as long as you're always adapting, taking on new challenges, new risks, new methods... this is a vey good amateur performance, and is the obvious transition from young and fun, to something more deadly, like a well-fired machine gun.

[OrangePHX]

Damn, nice comment.

well fired machine good machine gun. lol

[runyopocketz]

nigga you fuckin suck...dat shit was so wack...worst 2:56 secoundz i ever wasted..

[haykym]

nice effort ~ and lyrics ~ great job!

[FallenShadow07]

This sounds really good ^_^

[publicpwnership]

dis shit is tight, bro

[OrangePHX]

haha thanks.

[Musicboxplayer]

Awesome man! great stuff

[Answer4canceR]

ill make you a beat soon bro

[OrangePHX]

that's what i'm talkin about...

give me that fire shit bro. haha

[cbarne22]

COOOLIO

[sexybritishbabe1988]

really good !

[RepresentForMyPeople]

nice song you dont need to effects it sounds good without it

[asianrapworldwide]

you goin through hard times bro?

[OrangePHX]

A little.

Thanks for listening bro.

[803boyd]

im downloadin this. it's fire.

no one gives a fuck about me either.

[AngryNAggrivated187]

hot shit dogg.. i see u jumped on G.I.D.'S [gunitdown] beat.. koo shit.. check out my cypher verse.. i just put it as a video response..