If you lift the blacks on your shirt which will make it more of a dark grey, it should help integrate it better. Also adding some atmosphere color on top of you on the first part would help alot. The last part I can see the atmosphere colors but they suddenly stop at the end instead of just toning down. Hope you find these tips helpful and not overly critical. But you have come a long ways from when we both started in this so I want to see u keep it up. :)
Hey man this is looking great!! As Matt said, nice touch on the cloud break up when you went through there. One thing to remember when compositing that is one of the most important things. Your black lvls of the object being comped, should never be darker than the blackest black. Whites should not be whiter than the whitest whites. I didn't see any problem with your whites, but the black lvls are too dark. Imagine if this was real, you wouldn't see things like your shirt that dark in clouds.
very nice bro!!! i like the touch of the cloud shooting out as you went through it, you can enhance that by having that one cloud also avaporate a bit or expand out as you go through it cause it just stays still un effected as you go through it, that will make it even better, other than that it loks nice, maybe get the color down a bit on the ground or darken it a bit cause you can see it to much through the clouds and it makes it look a bit fakish, so hide it a bit and you got it.
yeah that was really good you have died your hair btw how is the movie goin ?
Aftereffectsmad 1 year ago
If you lift the blacks on your shirt which will make it more of a dark grey, it should help integrate it better. Also adding some atmosphere color on top of you on the first part would help alot. The last part I can see the atmosphere colors but they suddenly stop at the end instead of just toning down. Hope you find these tips helpful and not overly critical. But you have come a long ways from when we both started in this so I want to see u keep it up. :)
cottonproductions 1 year ago
Hey man this is looking great!! As Matt said, nice touch on the cloud break up when you went through there. One thing to remember when compositing that is one of the most important things. Your black lvls of the object being comped, should never be darker than the blackest black. Whites should not be whiter than the whitest whites. I didn't see any problem with your whites, but the black lvls are too dark. Imagine if this was real, you wouldn't see things like your shirt that dark in clouds.
cottonproductions 1 year ago
Looks good man!
jimmyhat1ful 1 year ago
very nice bro!!! i like the touch of the cloud shooting out as you went through it, you can enhance that by having that one cloud also avaporate a bit or expand out as you go through it cause it just stays still un effected as you go through it, that will make it even better, other than that it loks nice, maybe get the color down a bit on the ground or darken it a bit cause you can see it to much through the clouds and it makes it look a bit fakish, so hide it a bit and you got it.
mk11174new 1 year ago