gr8! This is a really good story. I know, everyone puts that on all the stories people make, but you really are good. This could easily be a published book if you had original characters. I really loved this!
*has mouth hanging open* You are TRULY one of THE BEST writers I have ever heard of. You are wonderful at your stories..wonderful! I can't wait for Chapter 2! =D
gr8! This is a really good story. I know, everyone puts that on all the stories people make, but you really are good. This could easily be a published book if you had original characters. I really loved this!
ashley0lovin0disney 1 year ago
that was reall deep and at the say time kinda true
partypeepexocool123 2 years ago
Mega deeeeeep
AttiyyahMuslimah 2 years ago
woah.
deeeeeeeep. xD
great start thouugh.
<3<3.
EKK. XDXD
argentinachika 2 years ago
amazing!!
very interesting indeed!!
shaunamarie07 2 years ago
Cant wait for the juicy stuff!!!
koolwizzy12 2 years ago
Amazing! I can't wait to read more!!!
softballchick2197 2 years ago
gosh i love this.
OJDpatient3 2 years ago
im speechles!
Robinlovefriends 2 years ago
wow!
i missed this. i rly did.
there is a reason why youre my fave writer on youtube.
this was deep. a lot. and it was the first chapter.
wow.
xoxoJBluverxoxox 2 years ago
wow dats deep,post soon !
dollarglamorous 2 years ago
oh. my. god.
this is amazing
You have talent
I love it <3
MiszKarizma 2 years ago
this is amazing!! dang i wish i culd write like this!!! i only rite plays and stuff!! i actually am writing a book, but its not youtube worthy!!
CandieRivers 2 years ago
Oh. My. God. Ditto to jbcrazy789. My mouth is hanging open. Dang girl you are DEEP.
MegJonasCullen 2 years ago
*has mouth hanging open* You are TRULY one of THE BEST writers I have ever heard of. You are wonderful at your stories..wonderful! I can't wait for Chapter 2! =D
jbcrazy789 2 years ago
love it :)
you use such big words :) i love it
angelicalyluvsblu 2 years ago