Twenty-Three - Vancouver Film School (VFS)

[rainsetta]

would a 15 year old really have all those tattoos?

i dont think so

[erinpassmore]

His expression at the end was great but the story felt pointless. I just spent five minutes listening to a woman (who couldn't even pass for 20, let alone 15) repeat "my dad's a dick" over and over. And then the big twist/reveal at the end is that she's 15. Hilarious? Maybe vaguely amusing if the writing had been better. These shorts are helping me make my mind up against going to this school.

[Billythachikk]

She doesn't look like she's 15. More like 25..

[yOreakka]

nice story i liked it :D

[WhuDaFXupTessa]

that's bull. she didn't look 15 at all. obviously she probably wasn't really, but come on. that's not believable.

[SIRJAMESORR]

crappy quality

[LoraBrowne]

This acting hurts to watch

[weirdoinchains]

forget the acting, why were some shots done at a low angle, just doesn't make sense

[occocooccoco]

that girl sounds like mischa barton

[weirdoinchains]

OMG! she does, thanks for pointing it out for peps like me who didnt notice

[xweetokfairy]

this is boring.

[Tasha347]

Such a good vid, loved it :D

Keep it up :P

[AwakenedSomnabulist]

Haha, that was brilliant! Well done indeed :D

[Neo08CA]

LOL

[lonSinceInsane]

LOL at the guy's face at the end hes like "HOLY SHIT IM A PEDOPHILE!"

[Aziq3D]

Lmao... I know, right? xP

[beccybee0789]

Realy gud!

[bexdemex]

lol

[ReesesMonkeyXP]

lol at ending

[Imperfectiion0x]

He is such a good actor, i mean, his face at the end was classic!

[modeoc]

wow he could be convicted for child rape lol

[liverpoolsamurai]

nice ending!

[xxdanlongxx]

That was great...I had no idea where that was going...what a surprise

[CubanaXtreme]

HAha omigoodness shes 15!

[jonathanvons]

i liked it overall, had a few things like the kissing scen out in the hallway that looked un natural and forced, and some stuff inside the apartment, but overall good story, great ending keeping it open for the viewer to wonder what happens next... :) THANKS

[SpamuelNeedbeef]

23!!!!!!!IT'S EVERYWHERE!!!!!!!!!

[DottyRibbons]

Not great acting, and the cursing sounded really forced. In future, I'd advise you to only add in cursing when needed. There wasn't really any need for half the swearing in this and it took away from the film making it seem less natural.

I liked the whole concept and the end twist was the work of a real genius, which shows that you are getting there. (:

Keep at it.

[goobertw]

HAHAHA GREAT!!!

[meltyyy]

htikurehgierugh ENDING :D

[holodeck87]

They're doing stage acting on camera, you can't do that! It has to be toned down when you're on camera.

[guelph0skater34]

lol that was funny some of the swearing seemed forced and the girl wasnt a great actor but the overall idea is hilarious plus the expression at the end priceless!

[djaz007]

HAHAHA....love da expression on his face at da end XD

[dedbeet13]

"lol! we can say the F-word because we're in film skool!"

[explosivo101]

Ya, I probably should have heeded the cautionary warning, it was too mature for me. I sure wish I were that kool. I'm really glad that they didn't try to imitate Tarantino's style of dialogue, mixed with crappy actors the same way every single film school project goes, or it could have turned out badly.

[questcequetufait]

he was good. the general idea was good. she was annoying. the ending was kinda funny but if i were him i'd kill her for doing that to me.

[MAKAmochi]

ahahahahaha

he's too cutteeee!!!

and she's a liar ¬¬

but I loved it ^^

[12caredee21]

she was so annoying

[everyoneloveskayla]

lol nice

[BloodyVelca]

bad dialogue,, good ending though,,

[BloodyVelca]

bad dialogue,, good ending though,,

[ProbationProductions]

dude, sooo funny! love the ending, i laughed my ass off, i didnt see that one coming! great idea!

[busmilk]

This sounds like people pretending they're acting. The writing needs a lot of work. Good idea, reasonbly well executed.

[alessandrabertrand]

very good movie. i'm french and i enjoy a lot to watch this channel . it's very interesting ..

[pfinny]

hahahaha, that was good

[Kyvinn]

...oh dear...

[HikarusFire]

*falls over laughing* that was amazing, it made me smile on the inside

[dagsandy]

haaaaaaaaaaaaaah.... actors are actors...

ok.. ok. learned the lesson... hahaha

[dagsandy]

haaaaaaaaaaaaaah.... actors are actors...

ok.. ok. learned the lesson... hahaha

[sd19matt]

Why are all student actors shitty actors? They need to stop acting like they are ACTING and just act natural

[smileytoesyourmom]

she says dick too much

[smileytoesyourmom]

i dont like it when she says "and you love it"

[smileytoesyourmom]

i like this, but what's the point of it?

[PUKUDO]

the end was really good hah!

[lyppincourtroad]

I thought it was quite good. I watched it through to the end so that must prove something. The plot was quite plausible and I though it was quite well acted out.

But what do I know?????

[AngelAboveSin]

Dialog - not so good. If you can't think of anything accept curse words, don't write a dialog. It's just, well, not good.

Ending is awesome. Funny, interesting and not expected.

If you work on this you can make this into a very cool short.

Nice job.

[Megz148]

the ending was good but that's about it.

[RishavR]

hahha great story/plot

mediocre dialog, but thats why this is film school :)

[trickface]

my daad was just a total TICK about it!

[skittleschew]

the man sounds like he is forcing his curse words.

[eatedcookies]

It was so boring...except for the end.

[XxgunchxX]

gay

[Somnambu1ant]

need better script... stale dialog

[KrnBlackWannabe]

LOL I thought the diologue was okay

[danikins2145]

Whoa! Lol, totally didn't see that coming

[lispiz86]

hahahahahaha! screwed. :)

[kittystar6]

DIDN't SEE THAT COMING! XD

[verronica10]

OMG!!!

[vXLullabyXv]

Bahahahaha!

Oh that was good!

[onlymeandra]

omg...lmao =))

[Tallyhoo16]

I didn't like the dialog too much, but the ending made it worth watching lol

[XHProductions]

yeah dialog sucked

[XtbsxloveX]

muaha!

i love it!

[historybuff531]

that was fantastic!

[flashflair]

Oh hohoho. That's bad. lol.

[WatchYourStepFlims]

Lol. That was great.

[farrcarr]

bis-sens

[tadhg2]

AAAHAHA that was AMAZING !!! I LOVE IT !!!!

[veritasaequitas67]

whoa... 15?! ha... nice twist. she doesn't make a convincing 15-year-old at all though.

[kelleroi]

THANKS FOR RUINGING THE MOVIE FOR ME..JERK!

why didnt u put up a SPOILER warning or something?

[davidatwork]

Kelleroi, next time don't read any comments until you finish watching the video. Just a thought.

[xoxoYayItsMe]

I totally agree w/ kelleroi-

you can state ur opinion, but next time put up a "spoiler warning" kind of thing. . . just so it doesnt ruin the movie again. ya thx

[PshIMaDITZ]

Oh dear! That's great. =]

[virtualgamesco]

Could have used some music during discussion. Subtle, mood-setting music, if you know what I mean.

[poisonberries21]

omg....poor guy!!

[bigmuddyfoot]

I dont think that can be good 15!

[tps607]

roflma! *****

[lizbian2]

Acting could use a little improvement. Or maybe it was just some of the dialog. But overall, no to bad.

[shanbananx]

I agree the acting wasn't the greatest

[neoduke007]

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!

i love the ending ^^

the acting was also decent to good, sometimes there were times where it got worse (went from good to decent) but most of the film it was good

quite story and interesting use of such words, in UK thats much more accepted on films and theatre, but in US its like O NO foul words... dont listen, they could like be bad for you :P (even though they are used in daily life)

[LiliPwnz]

hahahahaha

that was hillarious

:D

i love VFS

[coconut994777]

lol, that awesome!

[GBazillionStudios]

The song at the end ruins the tension hahaha

Oh well, nothing's perfect

[sydney327]

wow

that was really good acting

REALLY good

[njiancak]

ahahahah...

[Malikizzle]

Wow that guyz screwed

[TheDarkEyeGuy]

LMAO He got scare lol

[ViralPhoenix]

That was a surprising ending!

[Crazycardfreak]

I'm glad I watched till the end - hillarious

[nonoctave]

That was good. I don't know why people are complaining about the acting, it was fine. Slightly too much use of the f word, it seemed out of place a couple times at the beginning.

[volodya66]

interesting ending... but not really a visual story, nothing that made it distinctively a film and not a play or something. Acting was stiff, but I suspect that was more a product of the lackluster script. Keep making movies, sorry, just being honest.

[youkilledkenny]

agreed

[jules7890]

that was kind of good at the end, but the acting wasn't great through most of it .... i loved it though.

[RastafarianPilgrim]

ohh! poor fella! xD

LOVED the ending!

[IWillBelieve2]

Woah, just like someone already said; I didn't see that one coming!

[skills3]

LOL XD that was great

[stone1home]

Interesting; well done.

[CarleyIsRadical]

HAHAHAHAHAH That was great!!! Loved the end!

[RoFox89]

LOL! Ah thats so clever x] was not expecting that at all.

[tommie12P]

nice, i like it.

[prosk8er18]

Hahaha... very funny ending... I would like to see the conversation with dad :D

[TheAlbinoPickle]

stiff acting but not that bad