The Last Poem

[daniella173]

You just made me cry with this! Beautiful,real, and so truthful. I've been there before.. Amazing talent.

[FolkPhotographer]

You are a butterfly and will now go out and fly in a warm wind.. One day you will find another flower to land on.. please come to my channel and listen to my poem 'The Butterfly' I tried to post it here as a video response but youtube wont work.. Take care and keeping smiling.

[TheLeahMichaels]

This is pretty amazing stuff, please keep this passion alive. You have a beautiful way with words :')

[IAMnaturalis]

Amazing <3

[xoCarlyRose]

THis made me bawl my eyes out. This hurts so bad.

[jlysa93]

I truly felt you. In my heart and soul

[prdonita24]

damn this seriously brought a tear to my eye... i could really feel what u were saying. keep on doin ur thing =)

[thisisacunt]

o shit this made me feel like i was going to cry but i didnt. this is so real the passion the truth this is what poetry is true emotion spoken beautifully

[DeKontee2010]

This is a heart wrenching piece of truth. This is the language of a bare soul on display for all to hear,feel, taste and touch. It is beautiful to see an artist share there truth with such sincerity, there are no theatrics just truth and sincerity which is the most powerful kind of poetry.Kudos my dear keep the ink flowing and thank you for sharing a piece of your soul

[MzGorgeouss1]

Geeze, this made me cry. Lol Just beautiful.

[diaweezy09]

just brought me to tears. i feel exactly like that right now....very beautiful poem.

[caycayify]

This is really good but your hir is kinda distracting

[29900325]

beautiful!!

[GorgeousNaturally]

Luv it...

[SGR1000]

Really nice :)

[Hatseflats89]

I cried with you. Thank you for sharing.

[crosbyluvya]

this is so lovely i almost cried.

[crosbyluvya]

how lovely!

[Nikbones]

LOVE YOUR HAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[ItalianBlackheart123]

is she east indian??

[myndigmary]

@ItalianBlackheart123 no she is eritrean

[mwata]

You're poems are magnificent

[AKSK420]

Damn. I damn near punked out and started crying myself!!! EXCELLENT PIECE!!!

[yahdeen]

I HAVE NO WORDS.........PEACE LADY!

[Sistashownuff]

Please don't let this be OUR last Poem !!!! You are so talented...Perhap's you should write a Song?

[babygurlnaynay]

Girl wipe your tears you remind me of myself 3weeks ago lol it's okay there is that special someone still waiting for you

[ThoughtsOfPoetry88]

wow..almost brought tears to my eyes.. this poem is so deep, and i can truly relate

[satasexy77]

That poem made me feel like I did you wrong.

[mustang4010]

wow...

[ALEXsimplycomplex]

*goose bumps*

you are TRULY amazing

[BarefootArizona]

Excellent

[tiecethepoet]

PLEASE CHECK OUT MY VIDS! SOUL SHAKING POETRY! PLUS NEW VIDEO EVERY WEEK!!

[MissLoloy]

Dang you almost made me cry!

[strandwolf]

welcome to relationships, American style. You need to know ME, the noble Strandwolf.

[Koribaby1]

Mad me sad. And I was mentally preparing myself for it. Heavy.

[lookupbeblessed]

BEAUTIFUL MY SISTER, I LOVE YOUR PRESENTATION, WORDS AND STYLE

[benjaminjoseph22]

I miss your smile but I travel often for work

[benjaminjoseph22]

It takes many a stone to pave the way, Peter one of many rocks one of many hearts, How does He feel? For what seems to be centuries in a moment in a second, the break of the heart because the least little bit of Him is not good enough not what you wanted so you refuse your love for Him. Stand strong breaking the cycle of hurt by loving thru the pain, the pain He didn't cause but shielded you from to guide you. To show you what should be with ease. Live and share, beloved, you are heard and felt

[sunnieM87]

Love it

[iciewolf]

:'(

[brownieblush]

I felt every word of this. Be blessed.

<3

[WendyWTF]

I can relate .. so much , this brought tears to my eyes. you're amazing & thank you for these poems.

[pyromusik92]

Wow, that hit hard

[PoetryLove653]

Feelin that joint. Delivery was hittin! Very nice indeed

[inLife2012]

Wait your not serious right? this isn't the last poem right?? oh lord your awesome ! god bless you and your promising future in writing.

[lovelife4011]

I love all your work it's great

[branstan8000]

I feel you My Sister. God Bless You. Remember Love Will Have the Final Word.

[jedibugmaster23]

XOXOXOX

[love151992]

i loved this i wish i cud have played this for my ex

[lasandradaniels]

glad you wrote this... i know many can relate.

[mskaitlynhill]

wow. you are awesome... I could feel every word... I'm going through hell too - wonder if I'll ever really get over him - someday.

[Chichilicous]

wow, that was just amazing! and congrats for kicking that love.

totally understand where you're coming from. I write aswell, been writing for too long. Just can't syke myself up to write that one last poem ;( but in time

[banti631]

this is really good and not happy.........strong up baby, you will be good........

[byahbyah]

WOW!!

[SUPERBOYZable]

wow this was so sad :/

[Larjo15]

Loved it-- not just the words, but the feeling conveyed in each and every word. THANKS for sharing. :-o

[ToxicSkittle123]

wow! your amazing....

[zoezemyna]

I had been wanting to write a poem called " u weren"t even worth the ink it took to write this" and hearing this was so inspiring it was so raw, simplistic, not over done but raw! i love your syle. i have a vide on my channel google: Night of Passion Goddess Power" be strong Queen

[TheMintyMuffin]

Beautiful, mama :-) He was a fool for not loving you back...

[Heavenzdestini]

This is as REAL as it gets! 100 per cent REAL. Fabulous = fantastic!

[Ivcom3602]

This is hard to listen to but ....I can relate.

[alexiscaitlintong]

i love the way you say your poems.

[Godsgraceish]

Its like you were writing about my situation. If I expressed how I felt when I finally walked away your words would be my words. Absolutely wonderful. Also love your pretty girl poem, it was very deep as well. Keep it up. You have a gift.

[tarynwashere]

this is truly beautiful. it brought me near tears, and thats amazing. your imagery is great and your emotional connection is strong. love it, please share more with us.

[Tommygboy]

@tarynwashere ... i wish she wrote it for me. OMG she is so beautiful in and out.

[CurlyTopGirra7]

Again I loved it!! Your poetry is sooo meaningful and beautiful ... Leaves me wanting more and more!! Keep up the great work!!

[CurlyTopGirra7]

Again I loved it!!! Keep up the good work!! Your poetry is sooo meaningful and deep, makes u think!! Leaves me wanting more!!

[astafina]

You're name is probably Rahel Mesfun ...did i get it write?

[jojocakes123]

youre a beautiful person!

[bryluvspie]

This is sooo good!!! Keep doing wat ur doing! I love it!!!

[tkooler8]

Yo....I don't know if people know but, the reason your so "good" is because you keep it 100% real......Keep doin it.... Peace n Love!

[reduelltv]

love it

[juannieville]

idk u but i love u...well my heart does....lmbo u couldnt of said it any clearer...im so tired love

[nhysaw]

DAMN! deep...

[SJANELJ]

man oh man this was deep girl i had to take a min. Thanks.

[freebusta123]

I can relate to this

[divawriter]

Oh, plllleeeeaaaze! Spare me! sniff! sniff! (When you get older you will understand that it really wasn't ALL ThAT SERIOUS!

[rahpounds]

that was so beautiful i am just open mouthed right now

[zayloc23]

Powerful, powerful words. I enjoyed this piece very much so!

[10ftdeet]

@zayloc23 true words has never been spoken like this one

[Caudimia09]

That was feel....I have felt the same but it was so long ago.

[MagniphicentMarC]

Wow... that one really hit home...geez...

and thats just so amazing how i can feel the pain in that poem...its so true...

[dermas100]

ewey haftey ajogi !!

[ttstuckey]

omg! wow! Rewind!

[gunitdown]

this is just toooo deep 4 youtube!!....u need 2 get on TV and let the world know!!!

[mskiss22]

I love you for this!

[mahiabesha]

i'm inspired!! thanks for those wonderful words semhar! you're gorgeous too btw :)

[ways87]

all i can say i hope u get better...ur poems is deep love...

[alanajohnson21]

keep your head up ma your work is great

[puffykhan]

SOOOOOOOOOO good !!! and I HOPE someone come soon to you, to inspire you to continue on writing ... You REALLY Must NOT stop writing dear .... God Bless You XOXOX

[MsMadTeo]

I know this is a long ass post haha and I hope I'm not being too personal, but discovering your videos really made me take the final decision. Just wanted you to know that and maybe that and many other commens will motivate you to continue writting your beautiful poems.

Much love!

[MsMadTeo]

Semhar, let me tell you you're freakin' AWESOME! No fancy words are enough to describe how beautiful your poems are and the way you recite them. I'm really enjoying your channel, especially because I kinda look like you and used to write poems. I stopped when I experienced my first love and my "first broken heart" As you said in your poem, my heart turned into stone and I was unable to feel anything for a long time. Since recently, when I decided to let it go and search for my true self.

[LanaBana2931]

Damn. That was deep.

[SaavySi]

beautiful, ur amazingly talented

[rheainsweden]

I love this. Thank you for sharing it.

[zemen82]

Plz don't give up ????!!!!!

[zemen82]

Plz dint give up?????!!!!

[que3nluv2cuh8n]

she deep! woow!

[tediose]

Free Yr Soul

Bawl sweet Angel

Bawl to forever free your soul

Rhyme it sweet love, ohh yeah give it some lovely rhyme

Chant it with some breathtaking melody; sing it with a nice rhythm

Pour it out until it embarks you into a final and eternal freedom

Until you enter another dimension of devotional love-dom

Until you become princess of another amazing and faithful kingdom

I just suddenly wrote dis when I saw u here

Visit my facebook “Aklilu London” if u wish 2 enjoy my other poems

[MOLUCKSQRD]

bravo!!!!bravo!!!!!

[rayviebabiie23]

your hair

your poems

you ! i love you girl !

[c2steph]

Speak girl speak!!!  Another great poem!

[gigimc]

oh man... I can't cry at work! :) nail on the head chica, nail... on...the...head.... I guess every goes thru 'someone' like this... thought it was only me lol excellent job

[forevermeley]

This poem is so good, it actually made me feel your pain. Your poems inspired me to write poems.

[sobeart]

chills.

[Bearlookinthemirror]

I love it when people are able to express themselves like this! Once again the ladies take the lead, as a man I can only say that I (personally) find it hard to really open up. Perhaps I should try poetry, your video's are inspiring Ms. Rahmes.

[ladybluu]

your awesome, i think the acting adds more of a connection.....but if it was real emotions than excuse me...

[randomgirl881]

wow girl that was strong, that touched my heart

[mishonta30]

i really felt your pain in dis one ..i got where u was comen from .. feeling that way right now

[playb00y360]

Baby, you poured your heart into that one, and I was taken by your words, they spoke to me and for once I was able to see her side of the story...I got water in my eyes--- keep persuing your passion love and good things will come.

[24yardstick]

i love this poem u took everything i wanted to say and put it in this video

[canicjackson]

wow.. amazing! You will

 be famous

[NappyBeauty]

That's a great piece!! I feel you on that one. Also, your hair is beautiful.

[vitaminlbj]

Damn!

[CdotAlicia]

i think this is my favorite, you are ABSOLUTELY amazing

[083770]

Great poem. I listened to the others but i didn't know they were based on a real person.

[danielleelise87]

I can relate to every word you said . I'm going through the same thing..Love your work

[misskrisnew]

wow. i felt that. i know u really loved him.

[shellystone]

gahhh... you're AMAZING.

[governmind]

the last minute got to me. on another note, i wonder if that guy is watching this lol. oh well, his loss...

[brandyobi]

Amazingly touching! I felt your pain!

[Joseyrocksursocks]

I felt your pain girl I hope you are ok now....Keep the poems coming...continue to express yourself

[RedEyeTiger69]

I understand this is the last poem about him, but I hope this is not the last poem you write.

[Retrlynn]

Is it bad for me. to really hate the guy who hurted you so

[misscutek]

I felt that .

[daaaan71]

see it on the bright side, b/c soon you'll find a nice guy to write lovely poems for. Keep it up, you're very talented!

[elli809]

i cried....

[zolaftazol]

Your amazing i could feel your pain and relate.

[MixedBean]

that made me wanna cry

[ohmigoditsL]

amazing...

[onlyspeakingtruth]

i loved it

[Firestorm855]

Stay up, sistar. I been loving your poems from the jump. :]

[brezeeez99]

Beautiful! Dang this hit home, WOW! Your very talented, keep up the good work!

[Protocon8]

damn....im sorry

[apaine1978]

damn... *finger snaps* i felt that, for real.

[FierceInTraining]

that was nice. i hope you're not really dealing with this much heartache in your life.

[tqhous2]

so authentic....love it!

[MrFreshThought]

Glad to see you back. Again, another great poem!

[p8anut]

Samhar, when on earth are you going to checkout my channel of poetry girly!? :o( I promise you'll LOVE me!

[PrettyOnTheNside]

Ooh you got me not wanting to write another poem for him too and I don't even know him. I think I want to go cry now lol

[Blankstersz]

lol right. We ready write to him.

[calberkeley01]

i'm speechless.

[missyj823]

amazing!

[Vickygrl737]

U r truly talented, AWESOME writing

[Tommygboy]

omg, u are amazing ....cant believe how much u gave life to the poem...so touchy.

[Damyka4]

This..this girl is incredible! So beautiful n talented!!

[Luvnme2009]

So touching!!!!! I felt every word.

[LovingMeAlways615]

LOVE IT

[andreaojobi]

i felt every line..ur so talented!!!!!!

[hwiley09]

gosh. my heart.

[dulc3baybee]

wow dat was amazing i love you soo much u inspire me =)

[ichik333]

Simply stellar!

[lawschooldesire]

LOVE IT!!! I can relate!!

[SolLaDama]

Amazing..I truly felt something throughout this whole video. You're an amazing poet. I just hope this isn't YOUR last poem<3

[Aquamirrachan]

This was so pretty! I really felt you hear in this one, will you at least write more poems for us? You're poems are so beautiful!

[SpecialK327]

Yes yes YES!!

[LVOWL]

so much emotion in this, i got a little teary-eyed

[stayBlessed13]

This was beautiful but don't let this be your last poem. Don't leave..please don't go.

[msdimpled1]

beautiful..

[deepdimplesiRock]

your amazing and beautiful!

[mskwadjo]

wow ur so talented, and u perform so well to, i truly felt u. p.s. i love ur hair

[taraladyvirtues]

my heart goes out to you, you are very creative, i'm sorry for the one who has to live without you. you are doing great in finding yourself first. God bless!

[classicdinner]

wow very heartfelt :)

let it all out my love <3

[MissThangP]

I'm really feeling this...a lot of the words hit home for me! Amazing as always!!

[ORNGLOC]

Daym!!!

[lalovelyj]

wow girl..

[TheMuddyLotus]

Simply Perfect...

[vivacious1083]

I didn't think what I had been feeling could be put into words till I listened to this! This poem said what had been on my heart for a while. I really felt it. Great work as always.

[butaflyprincess1002]

love it!!!!!!

[skylabx2000]

As always flawless. Ashe! 1L