Well, it fits very much so, but I still see too many of her faces borrowed from the movie. Still, the fact that you were able to alter them or animate them into different ways is pretty good. Nice to see someone keep up a passion for animation.
Awww, this is so enchanting!! I love your style of sketching, it's got a real edge to it. Ignore anyone who is being negative about what you've achieved. I'd love you to animate a video for me!!
While I get what you're trying to get across here and I applaud you for doing what you've done- this is not an animation. This is at best what's called an animatic (and it's a flipping AWESOME one)!
You've basically got a storyboard here that's been put into film with sound which gives the animators an idea of what needs to happen in each frame (set to the score and VO). You've done a good job on this bit.
@clusterchuck don't listen to all the haters!!! this is very lovely!!! doing animation is hard and u did a very good job! even u think this is bad, i think it's wonderful!! <3
@clusterchuck There's some parts that I'm like, eh, what's going on with her smile. But over all I appreciate the hard work you put in it and hope you only grew.
This is really cool! There is always room for improvement, but I know that I couldn't have done what you did here. Good job. Keep practicing and working on your craft!
The pictures are beatiful and yet the video is long! i love it! its so good i can find the word for it! this will take me my whole life to make something like this ^^
While I'm not impressed by the drawing, I have to say that this is still quite stunning. Especially when you think about how time consuming animation is. . . I'm actually taking up 3D animation because I can't draw 2D very well! XD
This isn't utterly breath-taking but I did take an animation class and i understand the work that goes into this. Had i not taken this class i would've found this mediocre but seeing as I have i find this amazing! Great job! I understand completely about how long it takes to make these! I made one that took me three months working everyday and it only turned out to be a minute and a half with no sound whatsoever. truely remarkable work here!
You're probably not looking for a real critique on this, but no one gets any better with praises all day long. First of all, the look of it (drawing wise) isn't very polished. Its seems like you didn't bother cleaning up the line art. As far as the animation goes, It would have been nice to see more than key frames.. There are barely any in-betweens and hardly any lip syncing. If you did and add a little shading then this could be really good. However this is a good try.
i really wasnt going for perfection here. its jst supposed to be key frames/storyboarding. I kept it loose because storyboards are loose interpretations of a scene. This is not an animation
the drawings are perfect, but the animation isn't fluently yet. but keep it up, it's so beautiful. (i don't have any experience whatsoever with animating, but i can see it's very hard.)
Well, one's got it's own youtube channel, and there's a link to the site on their page. Their name is silverskystudious and the project if called Wolf.
The other is a lion king fan project called Circle of Life, you can just google skysoldja for that one.
Good job. Animation is hard. You're Ariel is not on model with Ariel, but its okay because you added a unique look to her. Its like a stylized version of her.
In what format did you draw this? Did you do it on paper and then scan it in?
I absolutely love your legally blonde "so much better" video, but you can really see how your skills have developed in this video. And Ariel is my all time favourite disney character, I'm glad you've done her justice! Keep up the good work!
It's pretty good. but.. the face at 0:20 kinda freaks me out xD
FTWGamerGuy 2 months ago
Well, it fits very much so, but I still see too many of her faces borrowed from the movie. Still, the fact that you were able to alter them or animate them into different ways is pretty good. Nice to see someone keep up a passion for animation.
Cerberuswaltz 5 months ago
this. is. double A-MAZING!!!
disneydreamerdancer 6 months ago
Wow! This is AMAZING!!! You did so much work in it!! O.O
Yilvinamera 7 months ago
Awww, this is so enchanting!! I love your style of sketching, it's got a real edge to it. Ignore anyone who is being negative about what you've achieved. I'd love you to animate a video for me!!
AMGmusic 7 months ago
0:29 she looks beutifull :D
MisticalMermaid 7 months ago
2 WORDS LOVED IT!
jennycayeni 7 months ago
I think this is amazing! Great job!
emphoto2003 7 months ago
i agree with jockey1471 this is crap, check mine out @shehreen23.
habahashmotifyifyful 8 months ago
VERY good
LilGirlRed2011 8 months ago
While I get what you're trying to get across here and I applaud you for doing what you've done- this is not an animation. This is at best what's called an animatic (and it's a flipping AWESOME one)!
You've basically got a storyboard here that's been put into film with sound which gives the animators an idea of what needs to happen in each frame (set to the score and VO). You've done a good job on this bit.
pencilwitch 8 months ago 6
@pencilwitch thx! yea this is def like a work in progress sorta animatic and not to be taken too seriously hahaa
clusterchuck 8 months ago
so good to sing
TheDragonlily 8 months ago
Please , make more :D
katjamomcilov00 8 months ago
nooo mameesssssds
naxeee 8 months ago
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That was CRAP have you seen the little mermaid?! I had the give it one star because you can't give none but still have it showing!
Jockey1471 8 months ago
@Jockey1471 j christ FUCKK OFF hahahaa i was like 16 when i made this gimme a motherfucking break lol
its not professional, it was a practice animatic story board made by a dumb teenager.
and to be honest, looking back on this, i do think it looks like shit haha please dont take youtube videos this seriously, its weird lol
clusterchuck 8 months ago 4
@clusterchuck YOU WERE 16!!!?????????? OMFG DUDE UR FING AMAZING!!!! I kinda wanna see your work now OwO
dessakat 7 months ago
@clusterchuck don't listen to all the haters!!! this is very lovely!!! doing animation is hard and u did a very good job! even u think this is bad, i think it's wonderful!! <3
themangakawolf 7 months ago
@clusterchuck There's some parts that I'm like, eh, what's going on with her smile. But over all I appreciate the hard work you put in it and hope you only grew.
SerenityM16 5 months ago
@Jockey1471
Please go attempt this and see how difficult this is. Please.
Ashestoashesjc 8 months ago
@Jockey1471 Yeah, you probably could do better, o wait YOU DON'T EVEN OPLOADED SOMETHING!
PLMRTW 8 months ago
@Jockey1471 wow...aren't you rude!! LOL don't speak if u think u can do better.
DestinyBell864 8 months ago
Great job! That was super cool!!!
1LuvadaMovies 8 months ago
I watched a little mermaid video and I jizzed in my pants
LedSledJoe 9 months ago
tht was good
LittleMermaidFan2010 11 months ago
wow. nice
Siapatu 1 year ago
I'd actually say this is an animatic.
egriz 1 year ago
COOL!
UltimateSelenafanDS 1 year ago
This is really cool! There is always room for improvement, but I know that I couldn't have done what you did here. Good job. Keep practicing and working on your craft!
cgadoury16 1 year ago
The pictures are beatiful and yet the video is long! i love it! its so good i can find the word for it! this will take me my whole life to make something like this ^^
SparkTheFox16 1 year ago
This is really quite cute and a really good attempt at something really time consuming and complex.
TinkIero 1 year ago
This took you a year and a half to make?...
EliteParanoid 1 year ago
SUPER!!!!!
blinkybinkysinky 1 year ago
While I'm not impressed by the drawing, I have to say that this is still quite stunning. Especially when you think about how time consuming animation is. . . I'm actually taking up 3D animation because I can't draw 2D very well! XD
ddrmaxman 1 year ago
it looked kinda creepy but I loved the beginning! And the lettering as well! How long did it take u to do this?! I can nvr make something like this
DisneyDreamMelodies 1 year ago
wow! i've always wanted to animate something. This looks like a lot of work and looks really cool!! well done.
DarthxErik 1 year ago
this is rly good!
sammielover22296 1 year ago
That was wonderful. Great job :D
DisneyClassicsFan 1 year ago
I loved it,
I think you have got boared from people telling you that frame
20 looks scary XD
It's really well done,and people who tell u r a bad artist or so,
they just have mental issues ;)
FB90D 1 year ago
YOU'RE AMAZING!!! Get a job at Disney & tell them STOP MAKING MOVIES WITH COMPUTERS AND GET BACK TO DRAWING!!
KuromiCupcake 1 year ago
the voice sounds like one of the girls from wicked (has totally forgotten who lol)
ashmchildress 1 year ago
Very impressive for something done in high school. A few of the frames even look ALOT like the Disney Ariel.
Good job!!
DragonWarri0r 1 year ago
não
TheJonasBieberSprous 1 year ago
That is effing awesome! I make animations too, like this, although not Little Mermaid stuff. It's wonderful :)
5uzyD4wg 1 year ago
you what will be really cool if you did this one song. the song of if only
danielle19820227 1 year ago
awesome
LittleMermaidFan2010 1 year ago
0:21 ITS ORgana the bad women
ejay201 1 year ago
did that take half a year? i could do that in a week, srry. but it's pretty!
xRedheadgirl 1 year ago
awesome ^^
CharlesButton66 1 year ago
that was incredible
kenchington123 1 year ago
Thats realy gorgeous animation! Wish i could do that! Xx :D
scarletmoonfall 1 year ago
The ending animation is great! Especially where she swims away. I can't believe you did this in your Junior year of highschool.
karatekid12365 1 year ago
0:23 ... scary as all hell. but good job... o.o
hatorigirl101 1 year ago
Holy Freakin-Stein!
Awesome work!
inakamoto 1 year ago
what software did you used in making this?
Leapfeb 1 year ago
This isn't utterly breath-taking but I did take an animation class and i understand the work that goes into this. Had i not taken this class i would've found this mediocre but seeing as I have i find this amazing! Great job! I understand completely about how long it takes to make these! I made one that took me three months working everyday and it only turned out to be a minute and a half with no sound whatsoever. truely remarkable work here!
Kumiko632 1 year ago 31
@Kumiko632
LOL thx! im in art school now and jst finished my freshman yr, but i was a lame junior in high school wen i did this hahahaa not profesh lol
i would love to redo it now and i see sooooo many things to fix but it was jst experimental and jst for fun
clusterchuck 1 year ago 6
what animation software did you use
mew3335 1 year ago
really good work ^^
need more frames, but it is very good animated
miakayukisukunami 1 year ago
Looks nothing like ariel.
SmallTownGirlsx 1 year ago
Wow, great animatic. :]
kphantom14 1 year ago
the second picture the chin is like a boy.
sinthaplove 1 year ago
well it wasnt perfect. but nothing original is ever perfect. but i still think you did a great job!!
MusicVideoManiac900 1 year ago
this is really good, great work!
9Lili5 1 year ago
Sierra Boggess can do a good jodie benson imitation i never knew the diffrence
i would have thought this was a disney storyboard.
endlesslesboz 1 year ago
It looks like an animatic XD
well.
gazornim 1 year ago
wow I liked it a lot!!
disneyprincess90 1 year ago
it looks a little funny that the hair at her forhead doens't move in the wind but very good job!!
Me1992born 2 years ago
u did a very good job!!!!
it may not be the best i admit... but u did very good...i couldnt do that if i tried
if anyone disses ur artwork...take it as helpful suggestions or motivation to work harder!!! Nice job!!!
jsininger 2 years ago
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Eww! She looks so ugly!
WinguTheWhiteLioness 2 years ago
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scary
AreYouFilmingThis 2 years ago
good.
but half a year srsly...
skychiz 2 years ago
You worked on this for half a year?! You've got more patience than anyone I know! I would tie myself in a knot if I had to do all this! Awesome job!
Solitemel 2 years ago
awesome
worddefender 2 years ago
You're probably not looking for a real critique on this, but no one gets any better with praises all day long. First of all, the look of it (drawing wise) isn't very polished. Its seems like you didn't bother cleaning up the line art. As far as the animation goes, It would have been nice to see more than key frames.. There are barely any in-betweens and hardly any lip syncing. If you did and add a little shading then this could be really good. However this is a good try.
ChibiMel001 2 years ago 12
i really wasnt going for perfection here. its jst supposed to be key frames/storyboarding. I kept it loose because storyboards are loose interpretations of a scene. This is not an animation
clusterchuck 2 years ago 12
@clusterchuck Well sorry i think its PERFECT lol Xx :D Love it!
scarletmoonfall 1 year ago
@clusterchuck uhh u say in the title its an animation..
eraserchewer 1 year ago
@clusterchuck Then why do you write animation in the title?
Gernam12 1 year ago
@clusterchuck "The Little Mermaid: The World Above (animation) "
Lolwut.
IPunchaUInTheFace 10 months ago
oh stop moaning about it , i bet you wouldn't slave away at your comp 4 a year and make an animation , i would have given up after a week!
joshua9able 1 year ago
very nice!
papfles96 2 years ago
The average video runs at 30 frames a SECOND, so...yeah.
-Tabris
tabrismacbeth 2 years ago
awsome you should be proud!!
gobais53 2 years ago
the drawings are perfect, but the animation isn't fluently yet. but keep it up, it's so beautiful. (i don't have any experience whatsoever with animating, but i can see it's very hard.)
animaa18 2 years ago 3
Amazing, keep it up! ^^
sailormoonrox1 2 years ago
wow... i adore how she looks like sierra. Of course, she looks like Ariel too, but it has more of Sierra's face... really nice
KouRingo 2 years ago
Very nice!!!! I love the song... I always tried to visualize the scene... thanks
gaft24 2 years ago
I really love this! Great job!
kelshiejaga 2 years ago
wow this is really good! 250 slides: 'mazin!
xomegalooluvsuox 2 years ago
Great job! Nice animation.
ThisIsMySketch 2 years ago
0:20-0:24, that chin looks like it could kill ! XD
Behemotho 2 years ago 3
great job
biblegirl 2 years ago
Wow that is awesome
prinzessinxani92 2 years ago
brilliant job <3
VixieMooCow 2 years ago
Absolutely beautiful; WELL done. ^_^
Ceriayn 2 years ago
what program did you use? Flash or something! Ur so my idol right now! I LOOOOOVVVVEEE disney too but i cant animate very well! I'm trying tho!
LivLivJM 2 years ago 3
I've been looking at your stuff and I am a fan now. You will go on to do great animation.
woodjbw 2 years ago 2
wonderful!!!!
hatersmusthate 2 years ago 2
Were you learning the animation app at the time you made this, or are you just a perfectionist?
Half a year is a long time! :)
Anyways,you have some nice story telling. Keep making more!
gabrielle64 2 years ago
haha no, i was jst in my junior year high school so i had no time for anything fun hahaa
THX
clusterchuck 2 years ago
Hey Can You do an animation of Helfer the goblin Singing i need to know
Arkengirl 2 years ago
0:20 ROFL
Melissagaatjeniksaan 2 years ago
Wow... That´s Awesome!
Great Job!
MalleHjort 2 years ago
Whoa! That's awesome!
phoenixsoul13 2 years ago 2
wow you did an awesomeeeeeee job my friend!!! GREAT JOB!! :)
pokemonlover342660 2 years ago
Lmao @ 0:23 ROFL ROFLROFFL
chimpjoubsmoo 2 years ago
that was amazing!!
moviemakinmermaid 2 years ago
How do you do it? Do you use a certain program??
XKJABX 2 years ago
WOW! ^^
soseztheleadr 2 years ago
wow
its so beauteful
youre talented
StreamOfTomorrow 2 years ago
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looks like a man
iEmilyOnline 2 years ago
Wow, that's soooo well done!!
camuizuuki 2 years ago 3
ok i must say its pretty good
frenzz1989 2 years ago
Wow, that's so good! Do you draw it by hand and then color it frame by frame on cpu or do use a sort of software? I really wanna do an animation.
CherryLime 2 years ago
wow this is really good!
ParTYGIrlaLEx4 2 years ago
Loved it!
RenegadeKin 2 years ago
GuroPia
ur soo funny pfhh ahha yea those parts are scary she look mad anorexic for no damn reason ahhaha!
xFairyXTaleXEndinx 2 years ago
Awesome!What program did you use?
witch1991 2 years ago
I saw the Broadway Musical live! Very well done!
skeeterdieter13 2 years ago
0:22 - 0:48 - 1:12 - 1:22
LOL
GuroPia 2 years ago
I'm learning Animation here as well.
It is 24-25 frames per second. It is hard work, to be honest. though you can limit it to 12 frames and such. Now I know how Animators feel: Stressed.
Xac0303 2 years ago
wow
genieshanu 3 years ago
OMG! that was so amaxing! Awesome job dude!
NellieMarie223 3 years ago 3
lol she looked crazy when she jumped out of the water. awesome job. :)
flamingstar01 3 years ago 2
Wow, great job!
goober1632 3 years ago
that was friggin awesome!!
poofoosaz 3 years ago 2
beautiful job! this is really amazing work
oliveinmyworld 3 years ago 2
really good!!!
alipali18 3 years ago
great job
HOTTIEMETALHEAD 3 years ago
that was soo amazing
GelphieRocks24 3 years ago
wow howd you do that?
angelfire162058 3 years ago
woah. . . that was amazing! very nice job!
beachluvey345 3 years ago
that was really cool!!!
Sicoe6256 3 years ago
WOW WOW THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!
joeychris25 3 years ago
THAT WAS AMAZING! You should do the entire musical!!!!!!
ythc05 3 years ago
Wow, lovely job. I'm sure it did take you a long time, but seriously great.
Not spamming, but I do know of some animation projects you might be interested in. Voluntary, and great for experince.
ckat13 3 years ago
cool! lemme know! :D
clusterchuck 3 years ago
Well, one's got it's own youtube channel, and there's a link to the site on their page. Their name is silverskystudious and the project if called Wolf.
The other is a lion king fan project called Circle of Life, you can just google skysoldja for that one.
You might have heard of them, if so sorry.
ckat13 3 years ago
thats amazing like how did you do that!!!!! well i know how but still. you did an awsome job kutos and congrats
PrincessCutie555 3 years ago
Łałłłłłłł ! Cool taż mam talent do rysowania ! xD
Nati961 3 years ago
taht was a really good job! i wish i could do that too..:(
katuhreenuh 3 years ago
WOW. Bravo!
DinaxD 3 years ago
WOW, amazing!!!
smilingmelon 3 years ago
I really like this
well done
CrayzeeCath 3 years ago
very nicely done.
LaViBohm 3 years ago
Thats cool. which software did u use?
xx
conebe 3 years ago
Very good. I like the song too.
I myself enjoy to draw as well, and I wonder; did you draw for hand or on the computer?
Normer93 3 years ago
Oh god...this is amazing... 0.0
Deneeira 3 years ago
Wow! I agree- I like 1.15-1.20 the best (that's the best representation of her, I think). Bravo!
lozluvschocalot 3 years ago 2
OH MY GOSH!!! I loved it you did great I saved it to my favorites already!!
PrincessAriel07 3 years ago 3
Great!
RentBoheme 3 years ago 2
i love 1:15-1:20
1yelloo4 3 years ago 2
Wow, very good job! I can tell this took a lot of hard work.
vel629vet 3 years ago 3
this was always one of my favorite songs from TLM :) great animation!
fara40000 3 years ago 2
Good job. Animation is hard. You're Ariel is not on model with Ariel, but its okay because you added a unique look to her. Its like a stylized version of her.
In what format did you draw this? Did you do it on paper and then scan it in?
AndyistTot 3 years ago
That was absolutely beautiful.
1WILLIAMSLEDDFANN 3 years ago 2
very gooooooooooooooooood job!
Lovely60s 3 years ago 2
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow iv got no ather words
LisavanHarmelen 3 years ago 2
sssssooooooooooooo beautifull
fiesaku 3 years ago
This was awesome! You have quite a talent.
sapphirestone99 3 years ago
amazing!
typicalweirdo77 3 years ago
This was very well done, id love to see more! =D
ajrich1790 3 years ago
i love this,
im dying to see this on broadway,
i always love your work :)
Mzprezlee 3 years ago
I absolutely love your legally blonde "so much better" video, but you can really see how your skills have developed in this video. And Ariel is my all time favourite disney character, I'm glad you've done her justice! Keep up the good work!
spi114 3 years ago
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shes like anerexic
threedaysmollyx 3 years ago
Dang!!!
inakamoto 3 years ago
this is the BEST
merman124 3 years ago 2
wow. that is amazing! That musta taken a lotta patience to do! Keep it up! Kudos!
elizabethlevinson 3 years ago 2
Wow! I WISH I had the patience to do something like this! I respect you!
Jarodm13 3 years ago 2
Really good, but at :23 she looks scary skinny!
cupcakecommotion 3 years ago
P.S., I'm not saying that It doesn't take a ton of work to do something! It was amazing!
cupcakecommotion 3 years ago
WHERE ARE THEY HEELIES AND PLASTIC WAVES?
jk.
I love this and Sierra and the show.
Jarrod005 3 years ago
o hahaha for a second i was like, whoaa is this guy fur real???? !! haha
clusterchuck 3 years ago