شارك في انتخابات مجلس الشوري

[dctimmyx]

here is my observations:

1- This white flash in the beginning is too long and is annoying to the eye ( this is my opinion)

2- Too long incidents that can be summarized in short scenes.

3- It's so direct.

4- when he is trying to find this Election card. why is he searching for it in the bed? although he tidied it in the first scene.

5- i think this victory music will be better if it's used in the last scene (when he found the election card)

6- i liked the separated shots and the speedy one.

[MrSuzuki1980]

ما شاء الله بارك الله فيك الفكرة رائعة ومعبرة الاخراج جيد ولكنه مطول الى حد ما....

[abokber]

الى الامام ونناظر المزيد....عمل اكثر من رائع

[amkhafagi]

Nice try. Here are my observations: Too long, you need to cut a lot. It's too direct, you need to assume that people are smart and will understand. Remove the writing on the screen and make it 45 seconds long. If you can find another music that's not as intense, that will be great.

[maissarah]

فكرة وأداء وإخراج وتصوير مونتاج موسيقى تصويرية عندما تتجمع كل هذة الاشياء بجودة أكثر من ممتازة تكون النتيجة عمل مبدع ما شاء الله

[abdalladrwish]

ماشاء الله والله رائع يارب بس يقدر يصوت بعد كل اللي عملة لأن اللجان مغلقة

[HabibatAlrahman1]

رائع ماشاء الله

اداء متميز وعمل مبدع

جعله الله في ميزان حسناتكم

جزاكم الله خيرا

[kh1ad2]

جميل جدا رائع ومعبر واهم نطه ليس ممل على الاطلاق