2) You're closing caption "The story of . . . . . told simultaneously" is an awfully vanilla choice of phrasing consider how much building up your trailer has done before reaching this point. I would consider coming up with something a bit more compelling for your trailer sign off with.
This trailer was extremely moving! Good work! A few minor critiques:
1) I would remove, at least, the very first percussion cadence you have in there before Obi-Wan is about to show Luke the lightsaber. As it is now, you've begun to tease the coming tension when I haven't even had time to settle into the first mindset you're trying to establish.
Hey asteroidman, when is it due? Because I know you've been busy with school lately. I'm OT so I keep track.
SKLaar2Becks07 1 year ago
i always wanted to see the release of star wars reborn.. i hope this one doesnt die in the future
alenoguerol666 2 years ago
No sir. It's done, I'm just assembling the DVD Menus now.
FMoradipour 2 years ago
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alenoguerol666 2 years ago
2) You're closing caption "The story of . . . . . told simultaneously" is an awfully vanilla choice of phrasing consider how much building up your trailer has done before reaching this point. I would consider coming up with something a bit more compelling for your trailer sign off with.
All things considered, 5 Stars and a Favorite!
rhikter 2 years ago
This trailer was extremely moving! Good work! A few minor critiques:
1) I would remove, at least, the very first percussion cadence you have in there before Obi-Wan is about to show Luke the lightsaber. As it is now, you've begun to tease the coming tension when I haven't even had time to settle into the first mindset you're trying to establish.
rhikter 2 years ago
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rhikter 2 years ago
Awesome! Can't wait for this!
DarthJones55 2 years ago
Very professionally done trailer. Now I wanna see this. ;)
DrewAmante 2 years ago
man this is really cool. great job !
blackout5555 2 years ago