Wow -- I just listened to your cover of Valerie. I was hoping that your original work would be better. It is decidedly not. Lifeless, flaccid... what's with the "pained" voice? Oh my.
liked number 10.it really is a lovely song and yes James has a point just the one little slip,but it does not take away from the whole picture one iota, I honestly feel it could have been sang more as a belter some parts I hoped you would let rip open up and get more emotional,one critique you sang it, but did you really feel it.?.imagine R kelly singing this
That apart you are a good song writer, it had a lovely flow, and a super melody a 555555 star song.with orchestra violins etc WHAAAAW.
Great song Dan, just one note, the whole song appears to be singing to the girl that the song is talking about, but at about 1:35 you sing "one touch of HER hand" as if you are talking to someone else about her. maybe you could change it to "one touch of YOUR hand" to make it fit in. if not it is still a great song and very well written. cant wait to hear more originals.
Wow -- I just listened to your cover of Valerie. I was hoping that your original work would be better. It is decidedly not. Lifeless, flaccid... what's with the "pained" voice? Oh my.
counterfugue 7 months ago
awww Danny...long time....love this song...made the hair stand up on back of my neck!!!! love ya!!!
Kateeeey 7 months ago
awesome =)
lilbitangel1 7 months ago
I love this
NekoParadise1 7 months ago
Beautiful :)
Alt3ran 7 months ago
This is awesome!!! =)
PickChix 7 months ago
liked number 10.it really is a lovely song and yes James has a point just the one little slip,but it does not take away from the whole picture one iota, I honestly feel it could have been sang more as a belter some parts I hoped you would let rip open up and get more emotional,one critique you sang it, but did you really feel it.?.imagine R kelly singing this
That apart you are a good song writer, it had a lovely flow, and a super melody a 555555 star song.with orchestra violins etc WHAAAAW.
beachfrontal 7 months ago
Great Sound congrats
thumbs up
gus : ) ♪
longlostgus 7 months ago
Great song Dan, just one note, the whole song appears to be singing to the girl that the song is talking about, but at about 1:35 you sing "one touch of HER hand" as if you are talking to someone else about her. maybe you could change it to "one touch of YOUR hand" to make it fit in. if not it is still a great song and very well written. cant wait to hear more originals.
James
jamespatterson4X4 7 months ago
@jamespatterson4X4
This is a really good point, James. I could have listened a hundred times and wouldn't have picked it up. Thanks for pointing it out!
DannyMigs 7 months ago
So good to have you back! Incredible as ever :-)
xx
janiekisses 7 months ago
I´m your second viewer. Terrific songwriting and performing. Very professional. Thumbs up. Greets, ΛNDЯÉ BERLIИ [ΛB►]☺
BaerchenprinzBln 7 months ago
@BaerchenprinzBln
See? You called me out on being lazy with the uploading, so here's another one!
Hope you're well!
DannyMigs 7 months ago
Wow, I'm your first view.
Hoping my playlist will help with views.
-(Put name here)
guycoolSpore2 7 months ago
@guycoolSpore2
Awesome - thanks!!
DannyMigs 7 months ago
@DannyMigs Don't mention it, man.
guycoolSpore2 7 months ago