This song has like 3 parts and it's very chaotic. I don't know what kind of genre you're trying to deliver to the listener. It's like... I dunno. Chaos only usually works for darkstep drum n bass and psy trance. Pretty good for a beginner, and MUCH better than I sounded when I first started. Just keep in mind you want structure and you want to hook us and pull us through a journey. Not the best. Not the worst, either. Very very good for your skill. Keep up the good work, and I'll critique more!
This song is quite cute. It was... Alright to say the most. I'm giving it my honest opinion as of now... It didn't have any bass. It felt a little empty, but the chords were complex and fun. The percs disappeared for a moment there. Okay just hit a complete change up.. Love the harsh notes. Okay I hear... A build up... CHANGE that snare. Not good at all or add some reverb. This song is so EMPTY without percs. Gotta have those hats, kick, and snare. I love your fun patterns, BUT....
Very nice. Composing your own song is very nice. Pretty short, though. The second one sounds like it could be used for video games. These are awesome!
fail at 23.but not that im better i suck
xzisten123 1 year ago
Excellent as a first run!
dobrav99 3 years ago
good electronic
kaiserwilhelm23 3 years ago
Muy fresca y clara....coooooool..
jetamez 3 years ago
Very good !! Top Sound !! good job!!!
XtremeTuning666 3 years ago
very good. wow
jennsljsher 3 years ago
Very good !! Top Sound !
Thomaspdm 3 years ago
i love it....great job!!!
VincentChick87 3 years ago
This song has like 3 parts and it's very chaotic. I don't know what kind of genre you're trying to deliver to the listener. It's like... I dunno. Chaos only usually works for darkstep drum n bass and psy trance. Pretty good for a beginner, and MUCH better than I sounded when I first started. Just keep in mind you want structure and you want to hook us and pull us through a journey. Not the best. Not the worst, either. Very very good for your skill. Keep up the good work, and I'll critique more!
AmeniphusX 3 years ago 2
This song is quite cute. It was... Alright to say the most. I'm giving it my honest opinion as of now... It didn't have any bass. It felt a little empty, but the chords were complex and fun. The percs disappeared for a moment there. Okay just hit a complete change up.. Love the harsh notes. Okay I hear... A build up... CHANGE that snare. Not good at all or add some reverb. This song is so EMPTY without percs. Gotta have those hats, kick, and snare. I love your fun patterns, BUT....
AmeniphusX 3 years ago
@AmeniphusX Can you just critique my music too? Lol.. specially the Blue Beam .. Thanks :)
Luckzzz 1 year ago
Very good beat, ty
Juleighbabe 3 years ago
love the sounds and haow it flows
JHL05 3 years ago
love it <333
LittlePunk7 3 years ago
pas mal...coooollll!!!!
evyl28 3 years ago
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Very cool,, nice..............:)
YSSOR23 3 years ago
wow pretty good ur better than i thought lol, ur good and fanx 4 being mates with me,
how old r u
tinkerjeix 3 years ago
super
DemonHunter117 3 years ago
Coooooool =D
missfleur07 3 years ago
Owh love that sound. Definetly gonna use that in my dj set
djRenzis 3 years ago
nice on jan, everyone should take a look at mine.
Dancol28 3 years ago
Download free demo search fruityloops it has newer trance generators. overall nice work
TomColon 3 years ago
what do you mean by trance generators?
mjakobite 3 years ago
this song is phatt welldone
5turbocrew 3 years ago
really nice
moonofsaudi 3 years ago
Very nice yes, I like it ^^
Keep on going!
TimoV16 3 years ago
Very nice. Composing your own song is very nice. Pretty short, though. The second one sounds like it could be used for video games. These are awesome!
Dryn85 3 years ago
love the first song
Wine30 3 years ago
Yep that was me :D
We need to make more i will share this!
jantenhove1990 3 years ago
A really nice Album i can't wait for the next parts!
Flappiefan12 3 years ago