Yeah, no breaks for Dave... I think he is going to become a recurring character in my songs... Thanks a lot for your comments, I really appreciate them!
cool song my friend! always such great stories and visions in your lyrics. and cool riff! very catchy indeed! raul, can you sing closer to the camera so we can see your face in the performance? if you want to that is :O)
Great song! Tell your freind we've all been there. I've written a lot of songs from other's experiences, and sometimes they turn out pretty good. Just like this one you wrote. Five stars!
You can really strecth the bounds of songwriting.
Oswlek 3 years ago
Nicely played
robindavies24 3 years ago
I remember this one! So this was part 2 of his story then. nice.
cool whistling btw
LouiseGloor 3 years ago
Poor Dave :(
Great song though. Love the music that goes with it.
LouiseGloor 3 years ago
Yeah, no breaks for Dave... I think he is going to become a recurring character in my songs... Thanks a lot for your comments, I really appreciate them!
serenataorg 3 years ago
My favorite, great job!!
dualdreamer 3 years ago
I'm glad you liked it!
serenataorg 3 years ago
dude this is good and man can I relate too, i've puched a lot of walls over this girl!!
5 stars, you rock! -----.justin
1975jstin 3 years ago
Thanks a lot man, I appreciate you checking out my videos!
serenataorg 3 years ago
Nice Stuff! I can relate.
MatAtMac 3 years ago
Cool, thanks!
serenataorg 3 years ago
Not sure if I commented on this one before - but - Kewl - I like this - very unique :) Nicely done :)
claypaff 3 years ago
Thanks!
serenataorg 3 years ago
This is a sad song, but I love your upbeat guitar that softens the blow, you're great Raul! Robby ;) PS..I wish I could whistle! haha
robby63 3 years ago
Yeah, the lyrics and music sort of clash, it's funny...
serenataorg 3 years ago
Very well done. Really like your style.
mysticcynic 3 years ago
Thanks a lot man
serenataorg 3 years ago
Thanks, I appreciate it!
serenataorg 3 years ago
This is very good. Liked it. -Ron
rhopen 3 years ago
Thank you very much!
serenataorg 3 years ago
Thanks! I'll talk with my "camera operator" and see if we can do something about the distance for the next song... Take care!
serenataorg 3 years ago
cool song my friend! always such great stories and visions in your lyrics. and cool riff! very catchy indeed! raul, can you sing closer to the camera so we can see your face in the performance? if you want to that is :O)
alleycat82 3 years ago
love the rythm, the chorus and the whistling part!!! :)
popautor 3 years ago
Thanks, la parte chiflado tenia otras letras originalmente que no me gustaban, entonces las cambie para algo instrumental!
serenataorg 3 years ago
There's a unique combination of drama and humour in here. Nice guitar work! 5*****
TERUKO5 3 years ago
Thanks, I appreciate it, I tried to be a little tongue-in-cheek but it's actually a serious thing that happens.
serenataorg 3 years ago
great song sounds a bit like a tune from greece
really great lyrics
all the stars
emifolk 3 years ago
thanks, I appreciate it
serenataorg 3 years ago
Great song! Tell your freind we've all been there. I've written a lot of songs from other's experiences, and sometimes they turn out pretty good. Just like this one you wrote. Five stars!
Johnfern99 3 years ago
I'll try to let him know, thanks!
serenataorg 3 years ago
that's so cool ! you blend a lot of musical styles.
dannyknapp 3 years ago
Thanks, I had a few different rhythm ideas for the song and in the end I sort of threw them all in
serenataorg 3 years ago