An area that I would consider to improve would be the ending give the audience some homework at the end. You could of said what character are you playing in your life now? are you ready to direct your own script rather than letting other do it.
I think you are a cool, sound, and collected speaker. You speak with such confidence and I hope to watch more speeches.
The speech value was therapy without the $125/h price tag. Your voice was clear and you module it very well to convey its meaning. however the sound was poor at time. I couldn't hear the speech properly due to mic.
I really like your speech, You started with a powerful and interest grabbing opening. I like the way how you structure your speech, it was define and clear. I felt like you were talking to me as my personal mentor which makes your delivery vivid and powerful.
At a normal Toastmaster meeting, which normally has 20-30 people, you don't use a mic. But this was videoed at a division contest final in front of 250 people, so all the contestants were miked.
The speaker has great technique. And this is a great speech. But how come the speaker is miked up? I thought the thing about Toastmasters is that you must speak without a mic. This way you really have to project your voice. The mic is doing at least 10% of the work for the speaker. Somebody please explain this situation....
An area that I would consider to improve would be the ending give the audience some homework at the end. You could of said what character are you playing in your life now? are you ready to direct your own script rather than letting other do it.
I think you are a cool, sound, and collected speaker. You speak with such confidence and I hope to watch more speeches.
kay35 2 years ago
Thanks Kay35
I'd be interested in what you think of my Squash Night speech.
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mosman34 2 years ago
The speech value was therapy without the $125/h price tag. Your voice was clear and you module it very well to convey its meaning. however the sound was poor at time. I couldn't hear the speech properly due to mic.
kay35 2 years ago
I really like your speech, You started with a powerful and interest grabbing opening. I like the way how you structure your speech, it was define and clear. I felt like you were talking to me as my personal mentor which makes your delivery vivid and powerful.
kay35 2 years ago
Hi Coco
At a normal Toastmaster meeting, which normally has 20-30 people, you don't use a mic. But this was videoed at a division contest final in front of 250 people, so all the contestants were miked.
mosman34 3 years ago
The speaker has great technique. And this is a great speech. But how come the speaker is miked up? I thought the thing about Toastmasters is that you must speak without a mic. This way you really have to project your voice. The mic is doing at least 10% of the work for the speaker. Somebody please explain this situation....
CocoCruise 3 years ago