ok ok lolz wow i can write stories too but i dont like putting them up on youtube and stuuf i have lots of stories with me included and b5 lolz but sometimes i think i cant write stories like they wack or somthing lolz
hey i love your books wow they are auesome i even read why did he do this to me bryan story wow that was a very godd story i just think ur the best well keep it up lolz
DAM that was getting good i no ur tired of hearing this but dam u how u gon leave ME hanging on da good parts GOSH! lol loved it chia cant wait for more
lolx patrick would cut someone for some skittles lmao
BonitaPrettyBonita 1 year ago
LOL!!! im SOOO gonna try the skittles thing now...but first i have a to get a bf.....lol
littlelisamenda 2 years ago
i wonder why he wants to meet her dad and brother
flygirls64 2 years ago
i loved it but thar is to much kissing a lot of it
coololivia1 3 years ago
oooo who sings this song?
shatinalaresha 3 years ago
yolanda adams.
BeeFiveProduction 3 years ago
ok thnx
shatinalaresha 3 years ago
LOL PATRICK MADE ME LAUGH
Patrickslovergurl 3 years ago
ill see lolz
rockyschic 3 years ago
ok ok lolz wow i can write stories too but i dont like putting them up on youtube and stuuf i have lots of stories with me included and b5 lolz but sometimes i think i cant write stories like they wack or somthing lolz
rockyschic 3 years ago
Ohhh well that's how i was until i actually put it up sooo try it !
BeeFiveProduction 3 years ago
well it is lolz and becoming a laywer is good too lolz soo you a big fan of b5 rite i know i sure am lolz
rockyschic 3 years ago
Yupppp; sureee am ! : D
if not i wouldn't be makinggg theseee stories about themmm ... lol
BeeFiveProduction 3 years ago
oh im so sorry my bad but wow you are a real intresting writer is that wat you want to become cuz if not you should lolz
rockyschic 3 years ago
nah i don't want to become a writer;
i wanna be a choregrapher or lawyer actaully ... lol
i honestly never thought my writing was that goood ...
BeeFiveProduction 3 years ago
OK, I meant 2 type YEARS, and not ears! Mi bad!
jenice13 3 years ago
HA HA! He said he had manly thing.. ooh Patrick.. lolz That was good, but I'm 25 ears late, as usual! lolz Keep it up!
jenice13 3 years ago
dat was getting good
cant wait 4 pt 10
essence1660 3 years ago
hey i love your books wow they are auesome i even read why did he do this to me bryan story wow that was a very godd story i just think ur the best well keep it up lolz
rockyschic 3 years ago
hey, Thanx ;
but i didn't make a story called:
"Why did he do this to me? Bryan story"
That's somebody elses story ...
BeeFiveProduction 3 years ago
DAM that was getting good i no ur tired of hearing this but dam u how u gon leave ME hanging on da good parts GOSH! lol loved it chia cant wait for more
nelli718 3 years ago
oh n i wouldnt mind seeing Patricks Manley things =D (wink wink) lol
nelli718 3 years ago
haha ... nah i actually like it when you say i leave you off at good parts ... i don't know why thoughhh ... lol
haha me either girl ... manly things ... lol
BeeFiveProduction 3 years ago
aww so cute..finally they kissed now the next step is dating lol
xoxlilmissunshinexox 3 years ago
this is one of the best stories u made well this one comes in second after b5 story i gotta get her but i cant wait until u make part 10!!!
babygirl22331 3 years ago
aw that was cute they finally kissed
MissKellyBreeding196 3 years ago
Patrick has "Manly" thinqs!??
Oh snap Pat i see yOu! O_o
This sOnq was On that Movie Honey
at the end..Hehe Is there Skittle Commercials?
Cause i DOnt see None..I WOuld eat the T.V!
They Finnally ...tOuched Lips! i wOuldnt
say swipped spit cause they didnt...Did they?
xD .......Skittles and Kissin Patrick with
it! is a DREAM Come true..well i wish it
wOuld cOme true! =O Arggg
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
... lol
Yeha thereee is oneee it's for the light skittles though not the regular kind ...
nah they didn't swap spit .!
That's a DREAM of mineee to girl im waitinggg to come trueee ... lol
BeeFiveProduction 3 years ago
i c skitle comercials once n a while but their pretty stoopid
n girl thats my dream 2 woaaaaaaw
Sexyaskiki 3 years ago
aww they finally kissed cant wait 4 the next chapter!
breedingwifey123 3 years ago
thank goodness they know they like eachother why jasmine tryin 2 front love ur stories can't wait for part 10
Bryanwifey100 3 years ago
THANX GOD they kissed lol...love your stories!!!!
lacrossebabe6 3 years ago
haha luvin it=) cnt wait 4 prt.10
LilMissTink09 3 years ago
well wen i looked there was only 9 comments so here it is lol i luv ur stories keep go n
keyarah1996 3 years ago
wow lol dis was gud
smartprincess101 3 years ago
that was great
Baby34Rocks 3 years ago
aww how cute more
allwaysDizzyBear 3 years ago
spongebob is watz up!!!!
but hurry hurry hurry and put the next one up!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!
lol
marjksf 3 years ago
Finally dey swapped spit lol
gud story
b51wifey13245 3 years ago
that was so good keep goin
blackcherrypie3 3 years ago
DANG ITS ABOUT TIME THEY GET TOGETHER CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT Part
angelasweet3 3 years ago
loved it
B5loved 3 years ago
Omggg that was so good .
Finallyyy !!!!
lmaooo .
omg keep on going !
OneToughCookiee 3 years ago
finally they kissed!!!
i cant wait to see what happens in the next one
NonoBabieex3 3 years ago