Very nice performance! This piece is beautiful, and you did a great job playing it. I love Chopin, he was such a great composer. I hope to learn this piece soon!
Good performance. This is probably all there was to perform this piece, but baby grands usually have a muffeled sound and a hard action. When you play a grand piano like a Steinway, the difference is like going from a Model T to a Lexus.
I think you did a very nice job, lovely lady. No one does Chopin perfectly - except Chopin himself. As with any cover piece, one can only hope to entertain their listeners with one's own interpretation of the score and try to help their listeners feel good from the music. I think you did that very well, as I have come away from your performance with a very warm feeling. Bravo!
overall a nice performance. I wish I could give you advice on how to improve, but you play these pieces better than I can at the moment... :-) Good job.
I loved your take on this peice, (no.3) its one of my favorite of the etudés. I would only suggest that in areas of repition you try to input differential dynamics to accentuate expression. No. 4 was really well done, only thing is vivacity. Check out Richter's interpretation, notice how he attacks the piano with such vibrance. You are a skilled pianist, keep up the good work!
No no Mr.Wenchington, I merely suggested that the pianist emmulate Mr.Richter's control of his instrument. Richter may not be the most astute follower in regards to dynamics, but his mastery and control of the piano is irrefutable. Thankyou for your concern for my stupidity.
My "Pretentious writing style" is a little device I call sarcasm. In plain speak, I don't much care for your opinions regarding my intelligence. I was trying to offer some advice to a fellow pianist to help her improve. I am shocked that you are willing to degrade your own intelligence by utilising such mean sprited words. I am sorry if my vernacular offends, but I am what I am.
Your advice was bad. My intelligence is not degraded by using mean "sprited" words. Your "vernacular" is made of mispelled words. Also, you used the word vernacular incorrectly, probably because you are dumb and are working off a strained definition due to your attempts at a pretentious writing style.
My advice was not bad, it just disagrees with.. well.... you didn't even have any. Can you even play the piano? You're right I am dumb, dumb enough to respond to an ignorant musical biggot who spends all his time insulting those who try to help other musicians. I mispelled repetition and emulate. Do yourself a favor, log off your computer, vent your frustrations and come to terms with your apparent lack of popularity. Seriously grow the fuck up. BTW I used vernacular properly. Google it.
You did not use vernacular properly. I am better at piano than you. You are indeed dumb. I don't need to give someone advice in order to disagree with ignorant advice.
Once again, yes I did, albeit sarcastically. You can't be better than me at piano because I've never heard you play, and you've never heard me play. This assumption is false and childish. I am not dumb, as I have proved countless times, and YES you do need to give advice in order for it to be disagreed with, other wise there would be no disagreement. My advice was not ignorant, your comment about my advice was ignorant. stop emberassing yourself. You've been wrong every time. How old are you?
Did you prove to me that you are were not dumb by spelling words incorrectly and having poor grammar, or did you prove you were not dumb by telling me you were dumb for talking to me? Maybe you just proved you were not dumb by explaining that i was "emberassing" myself.
I proved I was not dumb due to the fact that my arguments are logical. I sarcastically admitted I was dumb to fight with you, however I believe an apology is owed on my part. You are not a moron, and, I hate to admit it but are reasonably good with grammar. You get off on seeing people's reactions to your comments, and for that you have my respect. I enjoy this as well. However, untill you post a video of yourself playing piano better than me, I cannot accept that you are any better than me.
"'Go Fuckk yourself.' (I'll give you a hint, the mistake starts with a k) " Actually, the mistake starts with an F because "fuck" is not a proper noun.
You capitalized "fuckk," which should not be capitalized because "fuck" is not a proper noun. I was informing you of this because you told me "the mistake starts with a k," when it really started with the capital F. You misread because most likely because you are dumb.
Once again, fuck is a verb. You are right, it should not have been capatalised, I was agitated with you when I wrote it. I made the mistake not because of your false assumption that I am dumb, but due to my fallable human nature.
Yu, great job on the 3rd, but you need to put more feelings in it, a little more tempo variations would be a wonderful suppliment to it as well. Try playing it like you just had you heart broken, that's how it should really sound. Oh, also, you missed almost all the soft pedals. No big deal since you already had it memorized, take a look at the scores again, a 10sec fix.
No.4 needs to be faster, I think you are playing around 130, it should be 160. Aside from that, GREAT job 5/5 luv it!
On the No. 4: I usually hear this piece played faster, but I thought you played it good at that tempo. It was very musical, and your dynamics really made the piece. Great job!
chopin op.10 no3...i think you got a little bit harsh at the middle part...if you add more expression your playing will be more better... and the op.10 no.4 is good try make it more faster if can...this both songs are diploma songs...
great job! i'm a pianist myself, and i've been playing piano since i was 4. I do jazz and classical. I'll post some of my vids up as soon as possible (i just recently made an account, so i'm still new!) i think u played those pieces wonderfully!
oo you're pretty ;) nice playing too! can you tell me what grade this piece is cos i rly want to play it but and it doesnt seem too difficult...thx :)
and I don't really think that's an easy piece.. neither the No.3 nor No.4.. it's not just about the notes, it's about the feeling of it.. and my No.3 here is not really polished yet.. but No.4 here is polished better.
@unfairplay 3 is level 10 (advanced). i'm nowhere near that level but I can wing this one a little - if u love a piece enough u can sometimes manage stuff above your level so give it a go. The first third and last third are quite doable, the middle section is a little trickier, but u can play the 1st third as a stand-alone piece too
One of my all time favorite pieces next to moonlight sonata, although I play classical guitar. Your playing is marvellous but the handling of the camera isn't. Can you do a re-shoot, camera on a tripod instead? Not necessary to capture the whole piano (and that tall chair) : ) The audio just need to be a bit better (clarity) before we can judge your playing. Nice choice of outfit however!
Also, don't mind people telling you if you are playing it too fast or slow or whatever. That is something that you should not change because everyone prefers to play certain songs at a different pace. That just depends on YOU. Everyone else is just being a a-hole.
I agree that everyone would have different opnion, and I don't mind if anyone criticize me. Btw, this video has been up for a very long time already.. if I feel anything I'm already over w/ it. I've changed my way of playing piano, too. Thank you for ur time watching my video, tho. :) and Happy New Year~
They may say things like "that song was supposed to be played slowly or more rhythmically," but I don't find that true. How does everyone know that it was supposed to be played like that, the composer for the song is dead. Was those critics alive back then and is over 100 years old. NO. So don't believe them.
As long as you play all the notes right and make people feel good inside listening to it then it is perfect as is.
I hope its the fact that you guys can play the piano. but other than that, you folks are so mean, its so strange how you listen so closely to the mistakes and dynamics! It makes me sick! NO ONE is perfect!
To all you critics. Be constructive. However good or bad these people play be positive. This tune or melody whatever you want to call it is.... SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I am working my way thru em all. and I love em all
In 10-3, no part of the first theme needs to be hammered as you did. You lose control of the dynamics that way. You can achieve the crescendo in better ways. I like the middle part and the way you handled the first theme the second time. 10-4 was excellent. You played it at a sensible pace and didn't try to hurry it along like so many do.
More effective iif a tripod were used instead of handheld. Camera shake is distracting. You can connect an inexpensive mic from the camera to the piano, and experiment to hear which playback sound best.
1124755 - I wish I could say you have good sense. There is absolutely nothing wrong with how she played this. But you people just love to criticize because you're ingrates.
absolutely nothing wrong? Are saying she is a proffesional? ha. You must be one of those people who classify all music as great, no matter how bad it is.
I'm starting to begin to think you take all comments really personally.
I actually did think she did played really loudly (I'm thinking it's the recorder though), but it wasn't as if we're telling her she's a horrible pianist and we're all jealous cowards.
In the opening section of no3, you'll notice that many professional pianists lean back to extend their arms. This gives more control and helps the melody to sing without sounding forced.
those octave at 1:45 try to do more pianissimo. thats just me though.. i really liked ur 4th. i wish i could play like you did..one last thing at 3:50 on 3rd etude try to do it piano not forte. try something new :)
i loved your 4th but hated your 3rd :p (no offense) have a listen to Berezovsky's interpretations. i think the third would breathe better if you played slower.. like at 1:452:173:00 would be nice if it was a little slower just to build the theme. also the ending, drag it out around 4:15. make it so as your ending diminishes slowly not abruptly.
As for No4, very nice, there is a lot of slow or fast players but I can't see any good "people" players in youtube. Your the first one, who express this sheet perfect, you also understand your limit. I'm not too picky on notes, of course it should be no mistake, but your inside is very special~! that is what the audience really need.
Excellent performance, impressive No3 so far in youtube your the best, the nature way you express is perfectly match your personality, just the heavy part in the middle not very catchy, this might be related to your personality.
This piece was slightly better than the first, though incorrect timing became a larger issue. Watch the left hand - it was a bit sluggish.
You might need to practice this piece more slowly to be certain that you aren't hitting any incorrect notes, especially during the more dischordant passages - I heard a few.
Build during the climax!
Good luck - I can see that you've worked hard, and I'd love to see your future videos.
Music is not about being physically attractive and so far no one has given you an honest analysis of your pieces. You're off to a good start, but there are a lot of rough patches.
That being said, here is some constructive criticism from a fellow pianist and classical enthusiast:
This piece is meant to be played legato without a pedal. That is its beauty. I fear that your technique would fall apart without the support of sustain - I would suggest putting the piece aside for a few months until you are a bit more well-prepared. Try some other Chopin pieces, some Burgmueller, whatever it is that you need to isolate some of your problem areas - your teacher will be able to help you.
I'd also recommend getting some guides and books explaining about the Chopin etudes - how they were written and intended to be played.
Be careful about the notes on the left hand during the 'poco piu animato' passage...
Finally, I'd suggest working on your actual performance - dynamics, phrasing, emotional subtleties, etc. This is a very large aspect of the song in its more reflective moments.
I sort of disagree with this. Although I agree you should have the technique and the legato smooth enough so that it sounds pretty good without a pedal, I also feel that the pedal adds a degree of ambience and connectivity that is needed.
I wish you can create the legato not simply with the pedal. By that I mean your wrists should be calm and your fingers should rest close to the key. I see your hands lifting too much and it seems very busy. My teacher told me this is a "double-note legato" exercise and he stresses it a lot.
i forgot to add. i realized that i was playing a certain part too slow, but i'm gonna fix it. so you can disregard my video response until i make the new one
by watching how you played etude op.10 no.4 i think you could play no.3 better than what you did. not that it wasn't good but there was some robato misssing in one part. it was crucial in that specific phrase. but i'll give you 5 :)
I have to agree, I just noticed that I already responded on this several months ago but now I think some more rubato would help in part A, it sounded a little too "metronomish". I also know a lot of people complain about too much rubato in this piece but I think it's good if used in moderation. Then again, whadda I know? :-)
I like your interpretation of #3, tempo and use of dynamics is better than some of the "pro's" I've seen on here that just pound and whip through. I thought #4 was well done too, I'll never try that one! You may have some overall polishing to do but it still sounds really good. Yeah, you're a cutie too!
the pedal i think was pretty good, it just blurred a little in one or two parts, so maybe try to tap it more often in the song, because without a pedal it would sound...very empty.but too much and it sounds groggy..so just tap it less in some parts, especailly when it says con bravura, tap it faster
u're beautiful and u play very well. brilliant combination! :P nicely played, maybe with some abuse of the pedal in the no.3, but u did a very nice job. Congratulations!
no 4 was a favourite at college with my teacher Irina.You are very sensitive and neat finger work.Have you tried no 2 op10? that was another favourite.By the way Argerich plays this so super fast you can hardly believe it.Good luck.
Thanks for sharing your very enjoyable playing with us.
In the first "A" of the ABA sections of no.3, I feel that you could give it a more hesitating feeling with your rubato. It sounds slightly too smooth and easy to me. I always picture it as someone bidding farewell and looking back longingly. If you could build up more of the "tristesse" feeling in the first "A" section, the release of passion in the "B" section would make more sense.
10/4 try not to like float above the keys, u gotta play each note, and not skip any and it has to be a full note, sounds like ur like just floating on the notes:) just a suggestion cuz I learned that etude, and it was painful, but it paid off, very ncie 10/3 btw, good playing
10/3 was very good! Natural feeling, phrasing, rubato. Nothing overdone. 10/4: I like it quite a bit faster and more furious, but you're technique is probably not quite up to that yet. Still, well played.
It's better to see sweet girls playing piano than ugly girl playin piano well.She's playing good!And a thing I like very much on her is that she plays not faster that she can.That is self-control!It is very well balanced!
If you think of Etude no. 3 as having the sections "A, B, A": It's probably a matter of taste, but the "A" section sounds a bit metronomic. Perhaps a more distinct separation of the melodic phrases would add a "singing" quality to it.
icic... well.. i think everyone has different taste of listening to the music... but i agree with u that i think i used too much pedal at some parts... However, i can't play No 3 without pedal at all coz that'll sound weird to me..
Very nice performance! This piece is beautiful, and you did a great job playing it. I love Chopin, he was such a great composer. I hope to learn this piece soon!
-Vanessa
soccerchick24913 10 months ago
Thanks for posting. №4 was great!
MrFortepianist 1 year ago
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KevinR3i 1 year ago
good job! :) you play beatifully
iloveclams 1 year ago
Too bad the quality of the video isn't good because we can already hear you wonderfully played !
很好听!
Darekakun 1 year ago
muito bonito!
canakim 2 years ago
I am trying play this piece after watching your video!
You are very beautiful!
Luv your pics on your modelling website too, especially that sensual purple dress!
mortonbaychestnut 2 years ago
Good performance. This is probably all there was to perform this piece, but baby grands usually have a muffeled sound and a hard action. When you play a grand piano like a Steinway, the difference is like going from a Model T to a Lexus.
klaaaan 2 years ago
I think you did a very nice job, lovely lady. No one does Chopin perfectly - except Chopin himself. As with any cover piece, one can only hope to entertain their listeners with one's own interpretation of the score and try to help their listeners feel good from the music. I think you did that very well, as I have come away from your performance with a very warm feeling. Bravo!
yesuluvme 2 years ago
nice expression girl .
abdulalh 2 years ago
大変技巧的に難しい曲が弾けるのはすばらしいです。すごいと思いました。
ststkg14 2 years ago
lジョオskコアk
ghbinder 2 years ago
かわいいですね。音がずれているのが残念。
JPNpatriot 2 years ago
ありがとう
grimace753951 2 years ago
i really love Chopin's Tristesse. Wish i could play it too.. great job XD
carlescapist 2 years ago
overall a nice performance. I wish I could give you advice on how to improve, but you play these pieces better than I can at the moment... :-) Good job.
kspags 2 years ago
I like it a lot. The grace notes were done nicely. Normally people rush through that and I don't know why. Great job!
diesel828 2 years ago
simplemente extraordinario!!! cuanto daria yo por tokar asi!!!
lo maximo!!
jacoloza 2 years ago
I loved your take on this peice, (no.3) its one of my favorite of the etudés. I would only suggest that in areas of repition you try to input differential dynamics to accentuate expression. No. 4 was really well done, only thing is vivacity. Check out Richter's interpretation, notice how he attacks the piano with such vibrance. You are a skilled pianist, keep up the good work!
music653x 3 years ago
You are stupid if you suggest learning from richter.
WENCHINGTON 2 years ago
No no Mr.Wenchington, I merely suggested that the pianist emmulate Mr.Richter's control of his instrument. Richter may not be the most astute follower in regards to dynamics, but his mastery and control of the piano is irrefutable. Thankyou for your concern for my stupidity.
music653x 2 years ago
I am neither concerned for your stupidity, nor your pretentious writing style.
WENCHINGTON 2 years ago
My "Pretentious writing style" is a little device I call sarcasm. In plain speak, I don't much care for your opinions regarding my intelligence. I was trying to offer some advice to a fellow pianist to help her improve. I am shocked that you are willing to degrade your own intelligence by utilising such mean sprited words. I am sorry if my vernacular offends, but I am what I am.
music653x 2 years ago
Your advice was bad. My intelligence is not degraded by using mean "sprited" words. Your "vernacular" is made of mispelled words. Also, you used the word vernacular incorrectly, probably because you are dumb and are working off a strained definition due to your attempts at a pretentious writing style.
WENCHINGTON 2 years ago
My advice was not bad, it just disagrees with.. well.... you didn't even have any. Can you even play the piano? You're right I am dumb, dumb enough to respond to an ignorant musical biggot who spends all his time insulting those who try to help other musicians. I mispelled repetition and emulate. Do yourself a favor, log off your computer, vent your frustrations and come to terms with your apparent lack of popularity. Seriously grow the fuck up. BTW I used vernacular properly. Google it.
music653x 2 years ago
You did not use vernacular properly. I am better at piano than you. You are indeed dumb. I don't need to give someone advice in order to disagree with ignorant advice.
WENCHINGTON 2 years ago
Once again, yes I did, albeit sarcastically. You can't be better than me at piano because I've never heard you play, and you've never heard me play. This assumption is false and childish. I am not dumb, as I have proved countless times, and YES you do need to give advice in order for it to be disagreed with, other wise there would be no disagreement. My advice was not ignorant, your comment about my advice was ignorant. stop emberassing yourself. You've been wrong every time. How old are you?
music653x 2 years ago
Did you prove to me that you are were not dumb by spelling words incorrectly and having poor grammar, or did you prove you were not dumb by telling me you were dumb for talking to me? Maybe you just proved you were not dumb by explaining that i was "emberassing" myself.
WENCHINGTON 2 years ago
I proved I was not dumb due to the fact that my arguments are logical. I sarcastically admitted I was dumb to fight with you, however I believe an apology is owed on my part. You are not a moron, and, I hate to admit it but are reasonably good with grammar. You get off on seeing people's reactions to your comments, and for that you have my respect. I enjoy this as well. However, untill you post a video of yourself playing piano better than me, I cannot accept that you are any better than me.
music653x 2 years ago
Also in, "I am not dumb, as I have proved many times," proved should be proven.
WENCHINGTON 2 years ago
Actually proved, and proven are both acceptable past participles of prove. Nice try though.
music653x 2 years ago
"'Go Fuckk yourself.' (I'll give you a hint, the mistake starts with a k) " Actually, the mistake starts with an F because "fuck" is not a proper noun.
WENCHINGTON 2 years ago
Wrong again moron. Fuck in this sentence would be the verb. Your self (being you) is the pronoun. Another mistake on your part.
music653x 2 years ago
You capitalized "fuckk," which should not be capitalized because "fuck" is not a proper noun. I was informing you of this because you told me "the mistake starts with a k," when it really started with the capital F. You misread because most likely because you are dumb.
WENCHINGTON 2 years ago
Once again, fuck is a verb. You are right, it should not have been capatalised, I was agitated with you when I wrote it. I made the mistake not because of your false assumption that I am dumb, but due to my fallable human nature.
music653x 2 years ago
*...misread most likely because you are dumb.
WENCHINGTON 2 years ago
See, you made a mistake too. I believe the expression is "shit happens."
music653x 2 years ago
wow that's great! keep up the good work :-)
dreampianist 3 years ago
Yu, great job on the 3rd, but you need to put more feelings in it, a little more tempo variations would be a wonderful suppliment to it as well. Try playing it like you just had you heart broken, that's how it should really sound. Oh, also, you missed almost all the soft pedals. No big deal since you already had it memorized, take a look at the scores again, a 10sec fix.
No.4 needs to be faster, I think you are playing around 130, it should be 160. Aside from that, GREAT job 5/5 luv it!
HawaiianTropicZone 3 years ago
Hey girl you're so adorable!
What's your race? Japanese Chinese or Korean?
YangyStyle 3 years ago
Thank you, I'm Chinese.
grimace753951 3 years ago
4:10
penguinshin 3 years ago
Same as previous comments, No.4 needs some more ferocity :)
trigalg693 3 years ago
great job! esp. no.4 =D
pehx 3 years ago 2
you played it really musically well. no 4 could go faster, but i don't think that its a big deal since it was played so well otherwise.
aardvark2468 3 years ago 2
wow so pretty
pppli 3 years ago 7
Yes, and the music is not bad either.
narfanoid 2 years ago
@pppli She's a model.
KevinR3i 1 year ago
On the No. 4: I usually hear this piece played faster, but I thought you played it good at that tempo. It was very musical, and your dynamics really made the piece. Great job!
farmgirl717 3 years ago
really good :D
spritebiscuit 3 years ago
great job! I'm playing this one too
canadagirl18 3 years ago
mm
constructive critism:
the opus 10 no. 4 should be a lot faster~
good job
alanna382 3 years ago
could be better
good job overall
ernesttehemo 3 years ago
I am learning #3 too, it is a very nice piece. Even Chopin said he couldn't write a such pretty melody anymore after this one... nice play.
rayforu 3 years ago
Plays very well.
How long are you studing piano?
x1zu3x 3 years ago
fucking good!!
kTkickkers 3 years ago 2
this piece reminds me of rain. how it starts out soft then pours then softens.
musicenthusiast86 3 years ago 2
pretty well played but i personally like the faster versions of no. 4 more. Good Work THough.
Greeeetz^^
ultimativePwnage 3 years ago
sweet! ur asian. um thats all i have to say, and it was really good and fast towards the end.
californiansteven 3 years ago
chopin op.10 no3...i think you got a little bit harsh at the middle part...if you add more expression your playing will be more better... and the op.10 no.4 is good try make it more faster if can...this both songs are diploma songs...
weiping2020 3 years ago
great job! i'm a pianist myself, and i've been playing piano since i was 4. I do jazz and classical. I'll post some of my vids up as soon as possible (i just recently made an account, so i'm still new!) i think u played those pieces wonderfully!
bluematrix109 3 years ago
oo you're pretty ;) nice playing too! can you tell me what grade this piece is cos i rly want to play it but and it doesnt seem too difficult...thx :)
unfairplay 3 years ago
thx...
but I don't know what grade it is...
and I don't really think that's an easy piece.. neither the No.3 nor No.4.. it's not just about the notes, it's about the feeling of it.. and my No.3 here is not really polished yet.. but No.4 here is polished better.
grimace753951 3 years ago
grade 7-8 piano
shinjitsu2 3 years ago
@unfairplay 3 is level 10 (advanced). i'm nowhere near that level but I can wing this one a little - if u love a piece enough u can sometimes manage stuff above your level so give it a go. The first third and last third are quite doable, the middle section is a little trickier, but u can play the 1st third as a stand-alone piece too
kozanstatue 1 year ago
GREAT
bubylugo88 4 years ago
Beautiful!!
un saludo de Chile...
Muy hermoso
Bye
fcapalma 4 years ago
impossible not to cry when you play that ! Thanks... kiss
amidunet 4 years ago
Please marry me!
billisnowy 4 years ago
One of my all time favorite pieces next to moonlight sonata, although I play classical guitar. Your playing is marvellous but the handling of the camera isn't. Can you do a re-shoot, camera on a tripod instead? Not necessary to capture the whole piano (and that tall chair) : ) The audio just need to be a bit better (clarity) before we can judge your playing. Nice choice of outfit however!
flying8speedistra 4 years ago
Also, don't mind people telling you if you are playing it too fast or slow or whatever. That is something that you should not change because everyone prefers to play certain songs at a different pace. That just depends on YOU. Everyone else is just being a a-hole.
asdfedc 4 years ago
Thank you, so nice of you saying these~~
I agree that everyone would have different opnion, and I don't mind if anyone criticize me. Btw, this video has been up for a very long time already.. if I feel anything I'm already over w/ it. I've changed my way of playing piano, too. Thank you for ur time watching my video, tho. :) and Happy New Year~
grimace753951 4 years ago
Your welcome. I noticed that it was a year old after I commented... oh well, better late than never I guess. Anyways you play well. ~Happy New Year~
asdfedc 4 years ago
They may say things like "that song was supposed to be played slowly or more rhythmically," but I don't find that true. How does everyone know that it was supposed to be played like that, the composer for the song is dead. Was those critics alive back then and is over 100 years old. NO. So don't believe them.
As long as you play all the notes right and make people feel good inside listening to it then it is perfect as is.
asdfedc 4 years ago
Everyone is just being mean because they suck and is trying to act better than everyone (including you).
That or they all think you are cute so they just want to put you down. Don't worry, it was great. Way better than how I play it.
asdfedc 4 years ago
I hope its the fact that you guys can play the piano. but other than that, you folks are so mean, its so strange how you listen so closely to the mistakes and dynamics! It makes me sick! NO ONE is perfect!
sppe769 4 years ago 2
傳說的pcc 才女~
hiphopxiha 4 years ago
To all you critics. Be constructive. However good or bad these people play be positive. This tune or melody whatever you want to call it is.... SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I am working my way thru em all. and I love em all
danceposa 4 years ago 4
In 10-3, no part of the first theme needs to be hammered as you did. You lose control of the dynamics that way. You can achieve the crescendo in better ways. I like the middle part and the way you handled the first theme the second time. 10-4 was excellent. You played it at a sensible pace and didn't try to hurry it along like so many do.
TomBarrister 4 years ago
More effective iif a tripod were used instead of handheld. Camera shake is distracting. You can connect an inexpensive mic from the camera to the piano, and experiment to hear which playback sound best.
SalPedi 4 years ago
çok koftisin kızım çalış biraz.öyle kolay yerleri romantik takılarak olmaz zor pasajları sıçtın batırdın
chopincan 4 years ago
The beggining seems too loud. Still, you have good qualities.
1124755 4 years ago
1124755 - I wish I could say you have good sense. There is absolutely nothing wrong with how she played this. But you people just love to criticize because you're ingrates.
YGYGYGYGYGYGYGYGYGYG 4 years ago 2
absolutely nothing wrong? Are saying she is a proffesional? ha. You must be one of those people who classify all music as great, no matter how bad it is.
1124755 4 years ago 2
this is a free country you know, everyone has a right to play a song the way they feel it should be played.
sppe769 4 years ago
YGYGYGYGYGYGYGYGYGYG-
I'm starting to begin to think you take all comments really personally.
I actually did think she did played really loudly (I'm thinking it's the recorder though), but it wasn't as if we're telling her she's a horrible pianist and we're all jealous cowards.
It was just a note of suggestion. :/
I still like it. XD
I wish I could the piano though...
sweetechocolat 4 years ago
In the opening section of no3, you'll notice that many professional pianists lean back to extend their arms. This gives more control and helps the melody to sing without sounding forced.
nostromissimo 4 years ago
those octave at 1:45 try to do more pianissimo. thats just me though.. i really liked ur 4th. i wish i could play like you did..one last thing at 3:50 on 3rd etude try to do it piano not forte. try something new :)
misotoma 4 years ago
i loved your 4th but hated your 3rd :p (no offense) have a listen to Berezovsky's interpretations. i think the third would breathe better if you played slower.. like at 1:45 2:17 3:00 would be nice if it was a little slower just to build the theme. also the ending, drag it out around 4:15. make it so as your ending diminishes slowly not abruptly.
misotoma 4 years ago
As for No4, very nice, there is a lot of slow or fast players but I can't see any good "people" players in youtube. Your the first one, who express this sheet perfect, you also understand your limit. I'm not too picky on notes, of course it should be no mistake, but your inside is very special~! that is what the audience really need.
qnz123 4 years ago
Excellent performance, impressive No3 so far in youtube your the best, the nature way you express is perfectly match your personality, just the heavy part in the middle not very catchy, this might be related to your personality.
qnz123 4 years ago
No. 4:
This piece was slightly better than the first, though incorrect timing became a larger issue. Watch the left hand - it was a bit sluggish.
You might need to practice this piece more slowly to be certain that you aren't hitting any incorrect notes, especially during the more dischordant passages - I heard a few.
Build during the climax!
Good luck - I can see that you've worked hard, and I'd love to see your future videos.
Hope this helps,
Y
yooniecorn 4 years ago
Music is not about being physically attractive and so far no one has given you an honest analysis of your pieces. You're off to a good start, but there are a lot of rough patches.
That being said, here is some constructive criticism from a fellow pianist and classical enthusiast:
yooniecorn 4 years ago
No. 3:
This piece is meant to be played legato without a pedal. That is its beauty. I fear that your technique would fall apart without the support of sustain - I would suggest putting the piece aside for a few months until you are a bit more well-prepared. Try some other Chopin pieces, some Burgmueller, whatever it is that you need to isolate some of your problem areas - your teacher will be able to help you.
yooniecorn 4 years ago
I'd also recommend getting some guides and books explaining about the Chopin etudes - how they were written and intended to be played.
Be careful about the notes on the left hand during the 'poco piu animato' passage...
Finally, I'd suggest working on your actual performance - dynamics, phrasing, emotional subtleties, etc. This is a very large aspect of the song in its more reflective moments.
yooniecorn 4 years ago
I sort of disagree with this. Although I agree you should have the technique and the legato smooth enough so that it sounds pretty good without a pedal, I also feel that the pedal adds a degree of ambience and connectivity that is needed.
josh1167 4 years ago
Hi, wonderful work. I'm doing the No 3 as well.
I wish you can create the legato not simply with the pedal. By that I mean your wrists should be calm and your fingers should rest close to the key. I see your hands lifting too much and it seems very busy. My teacher told me this is a "double-note legato" exercise and he stresses it a lot.
hppeng 4 years ago
i agree
bhokka 4 years ago
that was awesome but there was a weird buzzing in the background......but still great!!
purelyevil97 4 years ago
I'm impressed.
TheCrazyHairPianist 4 years ago
i forgot to add. i realized that i was playing a certain part too slow, but i'm gonna fix it. so you can disregard my video response until i make the new one
farah73 4 years ago
by watching how you played etude op.10 no.4 i think you could play no.3 better than what you did. not that it wasn't good but there was some robato misssing in one part. it was crucial in that specific phrase. but i'll give you 5 :)
farah73 4 years ago
I have to agree, I just noticed that I already responded on this several months ago but now I think some more rubato would help in part A, it sounded a little too "metronomish". I also know a lot of people complain about too much rubato in this piece but I think it's good if used in moderation. Then again, whadda I know? :-)
flyurway 4 years ago
hot and brilliant, something you dont see to often :-)
aidengrandfield 4 years ago
Oh wow... that was amazing. You played it quite well =)
StarburstLover 5 years ago
I like your interpretation of #3, tempo and use of dynamics is better than some of the "pro's" I've seen on here that just pound and whip through. I thought #4 was well done too, I'll never try that one! You may have some overall polishing to do but it still sounds really good. Yeah, you're a cutie too!
flyurway 5 years ago
I dont see any floating with 10/4 - seriously. Despite the bad recording quality it is a quite good approach and
I'll be very satisfied with myself when I play this etude as clear as you!
SSgtMerubio 5 years ago
I used to play this.... but not as good as this one... guess i should pay more attention with more practice.
nieacharm 5 years ago
A few mistakes here and there (learn how to use the pedal babe seriously it-too much drowns the song), but a being cute hottie I forgive you!-lol
shelim23 5 years ago
Absolutely amazing job. I love it.
yacom1118 5 years ago
I love it keep up the great work. Theres something different the way you play. I like it ^_^.
simonwong101 5 years ago
it's a wonderful performance!
arnobody 5 years ago
I could learn from this. I've got a recital in a few months and I have a feeling I'll be playing no. 3.
SX04 5 years ago
Thank u guys so much for the comments... they are all very helpful!!!
grimace753951 5 years ago
piano sucks, go banjo!
Dare1986 5 years ago
Very good. However, more contrast in your dynamics would produce a livelier effect. Stacatto should be more distinct at the beginning.
supersimpson2001 5 years ago
(For #4)
supersimpson2001 5 years ago
the pedal i think was pretty good, it just blurred a little in one or two parts, so maybe try to tap it more often in the song, because without a pedal it would sound...very empty.but too much and it sounds groggy..so just tap it less in some parts, especailly when it says con bravura, tap it faster
Peekerboo 5 years ago
u're beautiful and u play very well. brilliant combination! :P nicely played, maybe with some abuse of the pedal in the no.3, but u did a very nice job. Congratulations!
admeneses 5 years ago
Love your touch and feeling. Too bad the sound is so bad. Please do more and under better production settings.
serengetibob 5 years ago
no 4 was a favourite at college with my teacher Irina.You are very sensitive and neat finger work.Have you tried no 2 op10? that was another favourite.By the way Argerich plays this so super fast you can hardly believe it.Good luck.
chad410 5 years ago
well done.
Ravel87 5 years ago
Very nice. I've got a way to go on that one yet, especially the tricky bit in the middle!
franknhonest 5 years ago
Thanks for sharing your very enjoyable playing with us.
In the first "A" of the ABA sections of no.3, I feel that you could give it a more hesitating feeling with your rubato. It sounds slightly too smooth and easy to me. I always picture it as someone bidding farewell and looking back longingly. If you could build up more of the "tristesse" feeling in the first "A" section, the release of passion in the "B" section would make more sense.
msiu 5 years ago
10/4 try not to like float above the keys, u gotta play each note, and not skip any and it has to be a full note, sounds like ur like just floating on the notes:) just a suggestion cuz I learned that etude, and it was painful, but it paid off, very ncie 10/3 btw, good playing
achilless 5 years ago
10/3 was very good! Natural feeling, phrasing, rubato. Nothing overdone. 10/4: I like it quite a bit faster and more furious, but you're technique is probably not quite up to that yet. Still, well played.
suremate 5 years ago
You play really good. I liked better how you played the second piece.
iruiz 5 years ago
u r right.. coz i practiced the 2nd one much longer than the 1st one. I think that's why.
grimace753951 5 years ago
It's better to see sweet girls playing piano than ugly girl playin piano well.She's playing good!And a thing I like very much on her is that she plays not faster that she can.That is self-control!It is very well balanced!
parule 5 years ago
You're good. Great playing.
Sorry about the butchered english in my other comment, i haff to zpeak az zuch when reffer to da epic Zepp.
EmmDoubleEw 5 years ago
awesome job i love #4
matrix6419 5 years ago
If you think of Etude no. 3 as having the sections "A, B, A": It's probably a matter of taste, but the "A" section sounds a bit metronomic. Perhaps a more distinct separation of the melodic phrases would add a "singing" quality to it.
ccaml 5 years ago
thanks~~ but what does "rezpec da legz" mean?
grimace753951 5 years ago
You're not supposed to use the pedal during #3. The legato effect is supposed to be achieved with the hands alone.
playadom 5 years ago
icic... well.. i think everyone has different taste of listening to the music... but i agree with u that i think i used too much pedal at some parts... However, i can't play No 3 without pedal at all coz that'll sound weird to me..
grimace753951 5 years ago
hahaha u haff discovered da pervertednezz of da zepp
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EmmDoubleEw 5 years ago
HAHAHAHAHA REZPEC DA LEGZ
datruzepp 5 years ago
great skills
Jageye 5 years ago