don't want to criticise you, liked Chinese Food on Christmas, but this is as if you were led by your head, not by your heart... you understand? don't know how to put it into words...
I think that you wrote a beautiful song, both lyrically and musically. I wish you all the best in pursuing continued songwriting and, hopeful, publishing, sales, etc. This just is very well done!
Hey guys. That's very kind of you but this one didn't make it into the top 20. They only accept song that are broadcast quality, and this one just ain't. I'm hoping to re-record it sometime soon. Thanks for your support!
Wow! I love this! I think with some added instrumentation for dramatic build up this could definitely be an idol song! Cook and Archuleta could both sing this really well. Idk about Syesha, but she probably won't be in the top 2 anyway. You have a really nice voice too btw! I'd love to see some more songs from you.
okay, so i can't post the link, but google search american idol songwriter myspace, and there is a forum there that says how this whole competition caters to people who basically know someone on the show!! i was so mad, so i'm trying to tell other songwriters about it! maybe we can do something!!!! seriously, go look. then research for yourself. -Suzanne
sent vid respons. I wrote last year. Thought it might get more views since yours is so well liked. I entered my song i won't play second title for your love this year, but i didnt list it as an entry . GOOD luck this year. I think your song should get it. I really like it. Great job. Again the response I sent was last years entry for me so I hope you post it.
sent vid respons. I wrote last year. Thought it might get more views since yours is so well liked. I entered my song i won't play second title for your love this year, but i didnt list it as an entry . GOOD luck this year. I think your song should get it. I really like it. Great job. Again the response I sent was last years entry for me so I hope you post it.
As a hopeful songwriter myself (in the AI competion too!) I think your hook needs to be made more simple with regard to the words ie focus more on the words "you believed in me", and center the hook around that repition at least twice
Heard about you from the Land of Pure Gold and the Gotta Dance video. I just wanted to let you know your music (both melody and lyrics) truly touch my heart.
Hmm..perhaps. I hadn't thought about it, but we'll see. Scoring sheet music gets pretty tedious, but if there's interest, I'll do it. Also, I'm re-recording this song and I'm doing it right, so stay tuned!
I have to say, although this is not really my style of music, this is thousands of times better than anything I've ever heard on AI. You're very talented. The best of luck to you.
You are very kind, but I can't claim that voice as my own. That is the sexy voice of Graham Cochrane...ask any girl who went to JMU from 01-05 and she'll know who he is.
You two should team up more! Does Graham have other works or has he only sung your works? Any other songs of yours that he's performed that we could enjoy?
Graham and will do more stuff together in the future, but for now, you might be able to check out some of his stuff on his studio's website--just google 'Silversun Productions'. Graham does a lot of a Capella work.
could totally hear Jordin Sparks singing this! Not groundbreaking enough though. It's gotta be like a powerhouse moment. You've got such an amazing talent though!
wow this is a fabulous song! I'd rate that up in the tops along with many other songs that I like. you will definately be seen some day and everyone will listen to your songs. great piece!
The only sugestion i have is that, it got a bit boring with only a paino, i thnk you should start out with a paino, then build it up through out the whole song and end with full orcestra finale, and hey, maybe even through in a key change at the end.
But still it was AWSOME! and i think ( if you get the right equipments and intruments ) you really could go far
I have listened to your song a few times. I am sorry I took so long to make a comment. I truly enjoyed your song and singing. If you get a chance, please let me know what you think of my song. Thanks!
definatley fits the song, singing to the fans, even tho phil wasnt my favorite I think he could have sung this song perfectly. hmm maybe for his upcomming cd (oh you bet he will have one, this song would be perfect for him)
i expected a guitar solo, or some sort of crash guitar entrance, and yet keeping the soft rock feeling. i don't know, you could have made this a more rock-ish song. it sounds too much like a cheap, pop, boy-band kind of song.
If I had heard this song in the list of 20 that I heard last night, I would have given it higher marks than the highest marks that I gave (which was 5). I entered a song as well which I entered the weekend after they started taking submissions. My song should have made it; It could have beaten out at least 10 of the songs they chose. I think it's pretty obvious that they aren't running this contest like they run the singing contest.
The lyrics are good! I entered a song as well but chances are they will only listen to a couple hundred... maybe. I wonder who will make it. Good luck!
Your voice sounds good and your piano playing is exellent but where your at fault is your lyrics. They are not really meaningful or inspirational 4 the show.
i like your voice.. i wish david archuleta chose this song...
01seepee10 1 year ago
Beatiful!!!!! Is that you singing??? If it is you have a very good voice!!!! *v*
EmmUchiha 2 years ago
very pretty
smkaplan18 2 years ago
omg its amazing. i absolutley LOVE it (:
sarahjaneeox 2 years ago
I think the chorus is kinda weak.
Sorry.
Janzah 2 years ago
beautiful<333
xEllykinzorsopz 2 years ago
this is good, just very unoriginal, but u are really good at singing(:
mileyluvergirl 2 years ago
I can definitly hear Adam Lambert sing this one when he wins.
1musicmom 2 years ago
This is not nearly origional enough, way to commercial & poor lyrics, but you have a good voice..
Igotbadjoints 2 years ago
don't want to criticise you, liked Chinese Food on Christmas, but this is as if you were led by your head, not by your heart... you understand? don't know how to put it into words...
Keytaster 2 years ago
Beautiful!
stuckinjelly 3 years ago
Great song!
1musicmom 3 years ago 2
yeah your right it's David Cook's vibe alright
vil7788 3 years ago
you are amazing!! I love all of your vids. They rock my soxz off
sabrarocks2688 3 years ago
great writing. best vocal performance i have heard from you
jayscripps 3 years ago
I really like this. I mean, obviously the one that won was amazing, but this definitely probably caught some attention with the judges.
xostarchickaxo 3 years ago
I think that you wrote a beautiful song, both lyrically and musically. I wish you all the best in pursuing continued songwriting and, hopeful, publishing, sales, etc. This just is very well done!
JESME 3 years ago
this is kinda like DC's vibe don't you think?
vil7788 3 years ago
i can definitely picture that!
BerLeigh 3 years ago
That was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lolabella09 3 years ago
This was a great song and you have a wonderful voice!
RickiesGal 3 years ago
this is very good! i like it!
keybladerofdeath 3 years ago
this is great!!!
starriefrenlove 3 years ago
good song!
maddie189 3 years ago
wasnt this one on the top twenty? i believe it was one of the four songs i thought actually deserved to be up there. everything else was crap.
xhwyj 3 years ago
Hey guys. That's very kind of you but this one didn't make it into the top 20. They only accept song that are broadcast quality, and this one just ain't. I'm hoping to re-record it sometime soon. Thanks for your support!
BrandonHarrisWalker 3 years ago
too bad either of the davids didn't pick this song!
jimmycheesman 3 years ago
archuleta could have done this really well
blessedspear 3 years ago
i agree! but the song he sang was a good one too!
jimmycheesman 3 years ago
Wow. I can imagine the top two singing this. ALL THE BESTTTT!!!
rYiOkUn 3 years ago
this is such a beautiful! do you know if you got into the finals for it?
jimmycheesman 3 years ago
i think i voted for yours
bringthenews 3 years ago
Wow! I love this! I think with some added instrumentation for dramatic build up this could definitely be an idol song! Cook and Archuleta could both sing this really well. Idk about Syesha, but she probably won't be in the top 2 anyway. You have a really nice voice too btw! I'd love to see some more songs from you.
PoPgosmyheart881 3 years ago
amazing amazing amazing
love the lyrics
they are awesome
now i just wanna hear the next winner
david cook sing it
:DDD
wordnerdaddict 3 years ago
Beautiful song!
mebsdeburple 3 years ago
this song needs to be on the radio...i don't normally like songs I haven't heard once or twice before...this one...wow
aquadino01 3 years ago
wow... i like it. Awesome =)
azone123 3 years ago
okay, so i can't post the link, but google search american idol songwriter myspace, and there is a forum there that says how this whole competition caters to people who basically know someone on the show!! i was so mad, so i'm trying to tell other songwriters about it! maybe we can do something!!!! seriously, go look. then research for yourself. -Suzanne
PopMagical 3 years ago
sent vid respons. I wrote last year. Thought it might get more views since yours is so well liked. I entered my song i won't play second title for your love this year, but i didnt list it as an entry . GOOD luck this year. I think your song should get it. I really like it. Great job. Again the response I sent was last years entry for me so I hope you post it.
StackeyB2 3 years ago
sent vid respons. I wrote last year. Thought it might get more views since yours is so well liked. I entered my song i won't play second title for your love this year, but i didnt list it as an entry . GOOD luck this year. I think your song should get it. I really like it. Great job. Again the response I sent was last years entry for me so I hope you post it.
StackeyB2 3 years ago
Beautiful song!!
"So everything before was just a prelude to
A beautiful symphony that plays to me through you" That line is just breath taking!
You have a great voice too.
TakeMe2YourLeader 3 years ago
As a hopeful songwriter myself (in the AI competion too!) I think your hook needs to be made more simple with regard to the words ie focus more on the words "you believed in me", and center the hook around that repition at least twice
warioto 3 years ago
this is good.... you sound like the guy in snow patrol! among the songs for the competition...yours perhaps is the best!
shutuporillkillyou 3 years ago
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skcuslodi 3 years ago
Song is OK, but not good for the finale song. Lacks build up and does not evoke emotion.
heartstringsx 3 years ago
very nice song and voice. :)
justlittleome 3 years ago
Awesome!!!
sqtaurus 3 years ago
wow david archuleta would be amazing singing this song. i can already see myself crying hearing him sing it at the finale, after he's won.
colormylife4692 3 years ago
david archuleta can sing this song on the AI finale very beautiful song
juvecutiepie 3 years ago 2
I like this song a lot & you have a good voice!
poweke 3 years ago
I REALLY liked this song... You have a nice talent, and I hope they consider yours to be voted for =)
bandgeekpoet 3 years ago
woah i can totally see David Archuleta singing this..it would be absolutely amazing! :] This is a great song!
coolkay05 3 years ago 2
I could imagine Carly singing this! =]
xrubypazzx 3 years ago
David Archuleta would sing this song well ;-)
BrutalBubba 3 years ago 5
This is a really beautiful song, I really enjoyed listening to it! :)
~pepper
pepperbunbun 3 years ago
when will you find out if you've made it
Dante426426 3 years ago
Awesome Work--Best wishes to you!
sharlo64 4 years ago 2
Heard about you from the Land of Pure Gold and the Gotta Dance video. I just wanted to let you know your music (both melody and lyrics) truly touch my heart.
abrugirl 4 years ago
Hey Brandon,
Do you have a website? Girlfriend? And I'm hoping you'll be on the next AI...
Lana
lanaember 4 years ago
THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! You do silly AND serious! I had chills the whole time. It's your new friend, Kelly in L.A., by the way. :)
EvanW219 4 years ago
The real question - will you be making sheet music available for purchase?
posaune16 4 years ago
Hmm..perhaps. I hadn't thought about it, but we'll see. Scoring sheet music gets pretty tedious, but if there's interest, I'll do it. Also, I'm re-recording this song and I'm doing it right, so stay tuned!
BrandonHarrisWalker 4 years ago
I'd settle for a lead sheet - not a big reader, anyway :-)
posaune16 4 years ago
Dude, i love your music. It is just a matter of time before you get noticed and get a album.
bfs1494 4 years ago
yea i love your music...is there anyway that you can have this along with chinese food on christmas on sheet music?
baseballguru93 4 years ago
Did this singer sing in any a capella groups at JMU?
xcdan77 4 years ago
Yeah, he was in Project
BrandonHarrisWalker 4 years ago
you rock mr. walker! see you after winter break.
elliot948 4 years ago
I have to say, although this is not really my style of music, this is thousands of times better than anything I've ever heard on AI. You're very talented. The best of luck to you.
soulfly7x 4 years ago
Hey Brandon - Very nice. Graham does a great job too. I'm sure we will all hear alot more about in you in the future.
tlevitan 4 years ago
awsome
JTFilms07 4 years ago
Move over Justin Timberlake, here's to you Brandon. You have a beautiful sexy voice. Good luck.
rikigold 4 years ago
You are very kind, but I can't claim that voice as my own. That is the sexy voice of Graham Cochrane...ask any girl who went to JMU from 01-05 and she'll know who he is.
BrandonHarrisWalker 4 years ago
You two should team up more! Does Graham have other works or has he only sung your works? Any other songs of yours that he's performed that we could enjoy?
v3rnondotcom 4 years ago
Graham and will do more stuff together in the future, but for now, you might be able to check out some of his stuff on his studio's website--just google 'Silversun Productions'. Graham does a lot of a Capella work.
BrandonHarrisWalker 4 years ago
Although different from Graham's, Brandon has his own sexy voice, as evidenced in One Step Behind.
duanewilliams 4 years ago
Brandon,
Your voice is incredible. I hope you submit this song again for 2008 AI as it would be perfect.
Well done!
Pam Koons
pamkoons 4 years ago
Beautiful song but it needs some pizaze...could use some percussion but you have an amazing voice
nattiproductions 4 years ago
could totally hear Jordin Sparks singing this! Not groundbreaking enough though. It's gotta be like a powerhouse moment. You've got such an amazing talent though!
jaimelex 4 years ago
i love it
very touching
but could use some strings and building
xxxDi3xxx 4 years ago
wow this is a fabulous song! I'd rate that up in the tops along with many other songs that I like. you will definately be seen some day and everyone will listen to your songs. great piece!
GemmGemms 4 years ago
i love your voice. this song is beautiful and calming. awesome
lAuGhNsMiLe93 4 years ago
u rock mate!! love all your songs (i pissed my pants with chinese food on xmas!!! XD) i really think u´re talented... make more funny songs!!!
Butifarra 4 years ago
nice structure but i think it goes better with some build up half way esp at the 2nd verse. i dunno maybe with strings, perhaps?
joshcloudz 4 years ago
Most definitely. I'm hoping to re-record in the near future. I appreciate your comments.
BrandonHarrisWalker 4 years ago
love the song, wish i could have it as mp3 =)
tatze1986 4 years ago
awesome great song
BayareaKevin 4 years ago
zzz...
pianoan 4 years ago
WOW awesome vocie i listen 2 ur music all the time!!!
krnchristian1004 4 years ago
I thought that was AWSOME!
The only sugestion i have is that, it got a bit boring with only a paino, i thnk you should start out with a paino, then build it up through out the whole song and end with full orcestra finale, and hey, maybe even through in a key change at the end.
But still it was AWSOME! and i think ( if you get the right equipments and intruments ) you really could go far
Seriosly
miejajamie 4 years ago
I have listened to your song a few times. I am sorry I took so long to make a comment. I truly enjoyed your song and singing. If you get a chance, please let me know what you think of my song. Thanks!
JohnSMcCormick 4 years ago
definatley fits the song, singing to the fans, even tho phil wasnt my favorite I think he could have sung this song perfectly. hmm maybe for his upcomming cd (oh you bet he will have one, this song would be perfect for him)
ruhappytoseeme 4 years ago
this song would be perfect! i love the lyrics!
isrox13 4 years ago
I think both our songs were way better than most of the top 20. I truly don't believe they really listened to all the songs submitted.
JohnSMcCormick 4 years ago
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IMChrisThom 4 years ago
i expected a guitar solo, or some sort of crash guitar entrance, and yet keeping the soft rock feeling. i don't know, you could have made this a more rock-ish song. it sounds too much like a cheap, pop, boy-band kind of song.
amitgangrade 4 years ago
If I had heard this song in the list of 20 that I heard last night, I would have given it higher marks than the highest marks that I gave (which was 5). I entered a song as well which I entered the weekend after they started taking submissions. My song should have made it; It could have beaten out at least 10 of the songs they chose. I think it's pretty obvious that they aren't running this contest like they run the singing contest.
jsmyers24151 4 years ago
The lyrics are good! I entered a song as well but chances are they will only listen to a couple hundred... maybe. I wonder who will make it. Good luck!
mourningCaduceus 4 years ago
wow! that was so good!
jussssstin 4 years ago
Very cool
MWUDO 4 years ago
Best I've heard so far. Good Luck!
sgagos 4 years ago
Brandon, very nice. I also think your vocal has a very nice quality. You ought to try out for the singing competition as well.
EricTor1 4 years ago
Mike-P here again. Nice job, as always. Good luck on AI
p.s I'm still waiting for the socks song! :)
BOSOX9004 4 years ago
kinda boring
crazygirl97 4 years ago
It sounds good, but I was waiting for the song to "take off" and don't feel like it did
WestSideSunDance 4 years ago
Your voice sounds good and your piano playing is exellent but where your at fault is your lyrics. They are not really meaningful or inspirational 4 the show.
SupremeCt 4 years ago
what? the songs are more relevant to show than any other songs that made it to the 20
warioto 4 years ago
awesome you have my vote!
HiddenSecretsBand 4 years ago
Awesome job. You should be proud of what you've done here. I know i would be.
TonkaJay 4 years ago
Wow. Very nice. Best of luck to you!
GeneralW 4 years ago
***sanjaya sang the song bathwater better then the original,,,amazing.fenominal,he ownes it
he did everysong better then the original,, amazing.
ahed of his time,too good of a singer,for morons to get it at first listen.,,,,continu,,,
**cus some morons r used to a fat africangirl screeming ,or a uroguy trying to sing by wyning thru his nose,tryin to sing like an africanguy.
like blakeee and crisssy ,wyning nasalshit,,,wer sik of the same screeeming or wyningshit.
tthatsrightt 4 years ago
What are you freaking talking about?
schase10353 4 years ago
Brilliant. If you don't go far on AI, you will certainly find success on your own.
OutbackPuck 4 years ago
omg...beautiful, i hope to here it on american idol. you have sheer talent. im so glad you put this up, it is so wonderful
potterobsessedx10 4 years ago
Put this on myspace and let people download it! ILOVETHISONG
m4me 4 years ago
beautiful song, good luck. chances are high.
royalicecream 4 years ago
good luck dude - your great :)
craigemc 4 years ago
Just beautiful! I hope you win!
GreatGig1 4 years ago
Hell yea man, nice!
quicksiiver 4 years ago