I was creeped out by Ms. Cope's TOO YOUNG internal dilemma...but then Edward just totally one-upped her in the creep department. Distressing that so many immature girls actually like this crap. I shudder to think how their relationships will end up.
*shudder* I think this is one of the worst chapters to date. Edward is such a fucking creep. How the fuck is him forcing Bawla into his car romantic? How is him being such a needy psycho romantic? How about threatening her? FFS. People that find this romantic have issues.
the fuck? why does a vampire teen boy give a crap about the make up industry? Jesus that line was such a clear opinion insert from Meyer it managed to stick out from the rest of the sea of fail.
Oh Bella, now I have another reason to hate you. Pissing on the children who actually are forced to be adults at a young age to care for family. Actually, it'd be Meyer who should be getting the hate. But seeing as Bella is her self insert, hate the sue, hate the author, score.
And if I had a guy do that to me? I'd be screaming my head off and fighting, when a guy doesn't take NO for an answer and drags you to a car, no just, no. Meyer is just... fucked up man.
Edward: a creepy alien-like vampire stalker who's insanely jealous, over possessive, abusive, and sexist. So how's he the ideal boyfriend and how come women are attracted to this guy? If the Twilight series is based on Meyer's sexual fantasies then she got issues
@purplecrocodile1 Hey, now. It's hard to be consistant with things like honorifics, characters, and plot when you're trying to write and masturbate at the same time like poor ol' Stephie. :(
Am I the only reminded of 'Perfume: Story of a Murderer' when he goes off about her scent?
TheManeatingchicken 2 months ago
I was creeped out by Ms. Cope's TOO YOUNG internal dilemma...but then Edward just totally one-upped her in the creep department. Distressing that so many immature girls actually like this crap. I shudder to think how their relationships will end up.
SlashFirestorm 3 months ago
3:15 made me start humming 'Walk in the Rain'...and then you actually played it. <3
Kupochama 5 months ago 2
*shudder* I think this is one of the worst chapters to date. Edward is such a fucking creep. How the fuck is him forcing Bawla into his car romantic? How is him being such a needy psycho romantic? How about threatening her? FFS. People that find this romantic have issues.
Great job reading though, as always.
Velox415 5 months ago
the fuck? why does a vampire teen boy give a crap about the make up industry? Jesus that line was such a clear opinion insert from Meyer it managed to stick out from the rest of the sea of fail.
AlicesTeaCup 6 months ago 3
Oh Bella, now I have another reason to hate you. Pissing on the children who actually are forced to be adults at a young age to care for family. Actually, it'd be Meyer who should be getting the hate. But seeing as Bella is her self insert, hate the sue, hate the author, score.
And if I had a guy do that to me? I'd be screaming my head off and fighting, when a guy doesn't take NO for an answer and drags you to a car, no just, no. Meyer is just... fucked up man.
YamsRyu 6 months ago 8
"How old are you, Bella?"
...
PEDOPHILE
JosephineAWESOME 6 months ago 3
Edward: a creepy alien-like vampire stalker who's insanely jealous, over possessive, abusive, and sexist. So how's he the ideal boyfriend and how come women are attracted to this guy? If the Twilight series is based on Meyer's sexual fantasies then she got issues
Kolbatsu 6 months ago
"Her heart sped up." HOW WOULD EDWARD KNOW THAT?! THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE EDWARD'S POV, MEYER, YOU DUMB CUNT! ARGH!!!
nicolebmoviesFTW2 6 months ago
@nicolebmoviesFTW2 He's got super hearing powers, remember?
manwithoutabody 6 months ago
@manwithoutabody Oh, right. Deadward has so many Gary Stu powers, I lose track sometimes. XD
nicolebmoviesFTW2 4 months ago
So...wait. Is Mrs. Goff an actual character, or is SMeyers giving a shout out to her fanfiction writing hero Tara Gillesbie or something?
FytexFayt 6 months ago 19
Hmmm... Ms. Cope or Mrs. Cope? Just the sudden changes in her honorific titles make her a way more compelling character than either Bella or Edward.
Also, Cowboy Bebop reference FTW
purplecrocodile1 6 months ago 16
@purplecrocodile1 Hey, now. It's hard to be consistant with things like honorifics, characters, and plot when you're trying to write and masturbate at the same time like poor ol' Stephie. :(
nicolebmoviesFTW2 6 months ago 6