Wow, you're amazing. Not much crit I can think to give, sorry, but I have to say I completely agree with you; I don't understand how people can be so ignorant or indifferent.
that was good as it is imo, i can't see anything that needs changing.. though ofcause it depends on what u wanna get across, i got from it, fight now for what u believe or suffer the consequences of inaction. if thats what you wanted to get across, u suceeded, if not, then oh well, good poem nonetheless
i always wish i could write about things like this, cause i believe in what you said and i always have- but for some reason i cant, i feel blessed that i can feel power through your words- much love and respect and thank you for posting this-
I just cant get over how truly talented and amazing you really are.
Natalii84 2 years ago
This is brilliant..am just trying spoken word on my own page...well inspired so thank you..
LondonPoet 2 years ago
that was hot man keep it up
IsaiahMatthew1 2 years ago
Wow, you're amazing. Not much crit I can think to give, sorry, but I have to say I completely agree with you; I don't understand how people can be so ignorant or indifferent.
xredrosez 2 years ago
Frickin' amazing man! keep 'em coming
MooCow314 4 years ago
I must say that i have agree'd with just about all your poems, the way the world is heading is no place i want my kids to grow
Boon911 4 years ago
But I still have hope. We just have to change things ourselves instead of waiting for it to happen.
scamon01 4 years ago
Hope can often be hard to find in the land of the lost.
Boon911 4 years ago
A+ brotha
efeghali 4 years ago
Most excellen-tay!!!
sharonafox1 4 years ago
excellent kid lovin it, as good as it gets
cragsterlfc 4 years ago
that was good as it is imo, i can't see anything that needs changing.. though ofcause it depends on what u wanna get across, i got from it, fight now for what u believe or suffer the consequences of inaction. if thats what you wanted to get across, u suceeded, if not, then oh well, good poem nonetheless
BunmiHazzan 4 years ago
Thanks alot- that helps.
scamon01 4 years ago
this is TITE! keep on spittin rhymes bro, get the message stuck in their head, cuz the numbers dont seem to wake anyone up...
hifidijana 4 years ago
Thanks- that's the plan. Spread the video around- by all means.
scamon01 4 years ago
y think that this is o-k!
ivanpiol 4 years ago
intense...
curlycrush 4 years ago
That was deep. Let me try one. Chocolate is melty if it's hot.
scamon01 4 years ago
aaaaaaaahhhhh hahahahaha- my turn
the desert is dry unless the clouds release rain.
gueradesign 4 years ago
Wheels turn unless they're square.
scamon01 4 years ago
trees rustle, unless they're bare
gueradesign 4 years ago
ooh, ooh, my turn, my turn
err.. Food is good, unless it's bad
BunmiHazzan 4 years ago
great! reminded me of Sage Francis.
bubonicnate 4 years ago
i always wish i could write about things like this, cause i believe in what you said and i always have- but for some reason i cant, i feel blessed that i can feel power through your words- much love and respect and thank you for posting this-
love to your family-
Güera
gueradesign 4 years ago
i cant even stop watching it- makes my eyes water-
gueradesign 4 years ago