@BlandBoy Well I'm not a professional musician, this is just a hobby. So I'm very happy to just "sound" like the Beatles... Besides, as long as you're gonna sound like someone, might as well sound like the Beatles!
Hi! I couldn't help but laugh when I read your comment and looked at your nick name ;). But you're right, the drums could be a bit louder. Thanks for listening!
I always have to listen to a song twice to know if I like it. And this song I like. Aside from my previous critiques, this song is awesome. And when i say awesome I mean I am adding it as a favorite to listen to it for the next month or until I get tired of it. I love good music. You have a talent. I encourage you to write more original songs. You have what it takes. Kudos!
Ok, I'm a musician myself and I'm as anal as they come. So here we go. First, the vocals, guitar, and overall feeling of the song are better than most songs on the radio. Great chord progression and all. But the solo just doesn't fit the song. Actually, the scale is not aligned with the rest of the song. The bass and drums are ok. I would really like to hear this song recorded professionally without a solo. But overall, 4/5.
That's a very useful critique, thanks! As a matter of fact, this song was originally without a solo as I felt it didn't need one. This is version #244 ;)
Fantastic! Great stuff. Love the vocals and guitar work. I followed this up with "Out The Blue" from "Mind Games". Nice coupling. Thanks for the post. Looking forward to more.
Love it! I appreciate any one who is creative and is true to their creativity. Now, I'm not a formal musician but, how about a little more "down beat" on the drum, something to even out (not replace) the "tinny sound of the cymbals". What I just said sound so novice! LOL. But, I hope you get what I mean. Other than that, I loved it, and can't get it out of my head. Thanks Dan, keep on creating love (music).
I've already posted on mg4150's channel, but I do it again. Your song is excellent, very sensitive and the melody makes me fly ! You've got a super voice too. Well done !
solo is very blues and smooth like it!
ace4dsl 1 year ago
Very Nice -:)
ThePhenotube 2 years ago
You know it's possible to be influenced by the Beatles without sounding too-much like them.
Unfortunately, this is not one of those times.
BlandBoy 2 years ago
@BlandBoy Well I'm not a professional musician, this is just a hobby. So I'm very happy to just "sound" like the Beatles... Besides, as long as you're gonna sound like someone, might as well sound like the Beatles!
dantheman9999 2 years ago
Awesome, but i think drums could of been a little louder in the mix.
LouddrummerO 2 years ago
Hi! I couldn't help but laugh when I read your comment and looked at your nick name ;). But you're right, the drums could be a bit louder. Thanks for listening!
dantheman9999 2 years ago
Being a Beatle fan too I really like this - keep wriying!
best
Dave
arnybarn 2 years ago
Super compo! la ou la vrai musique prend tout son sens!!!!!
tu devrais en faire plus que ca !! ta le talent la voix
J'ai hate d'entendre les prochaine!
ca rock!
PS: check mon nouveau video tu risque de connaitre la ''machine''' ;)
A+!
hayabusafmw 2 years ago
Merci! Tres gentil de ta part!! Je vais aller voir la "machine" a l'instant!
dantheman9999 2 years ago
you have a beatle voice!!! congrats, nice song. cheers.
walrus68 2 years ago
Good Tune Guitar sound really like Geroe Harrison.You are talented,gifted person ,!!!
GANBATTE!
lennymcca 2 years ago
I always have to listen to a song twice to know if I like it. And this song I like. Aside from my previous critiques, this song is awesome. And when i say awesome I mean I am adding it as a favorite to listen to it for the next month or until I get tired of it. I love good music. You have a talent. I encourage you to write more original songs. You have what it takes. Kudos!
XsamgX 2 years ago
Ok, I'm a musician myself and I'm as anal as they come. So here we go. First, the vocals, guitar, and overall feeling of the song are better than most songs on the radio. Great chord progression and all. But the solo just doesn't fit the song. Actually, the scale is not aligned with the rest of the song. The bass and drums are ok. I would really like to hear this song recorded professionally without a solo. But overall, 4/5.
Hope that helps.
XsamgX 2 years ago
That's a very useful critique, thanks! As a matter of fact, this song was originally without a solo as I felt it didn't need one. This is version #244 ;)
dantheman9999 2 years ago
Hey Dan!Thanks for sending this beautiful song!It made my day!
luv
Anni
paisleybabee 2 years ago
Great song.
eazylee369 2 years ago
it really sounds like a george harrison's song. great job!
psychodelya 2 years ago
that's really good! yeah, definitely george-like
tenaciousp97 2 years ago
Good, pleasant sound. I agree with those that said it has a George Harrison feel to it.
stevepwood 2 years ago
Ringo Starr said the same thing in an Anthology interview.
stevepwood 2 years ago
its really good and i agree it does sound like a beatle song.
zoeythedrummer 2 years ago
This is really, really fantastic. very refreshing. Love the lyrics and the deep bass sound you add to the mix. Keep it going!
LMN349 2 years ago
congratulations!!! great song...
Saludos desde Santiago de Chile, muy buena canción...estoy muy feliz de recordar a George Harrison en una voz como la tuya ...Felicidades...
jooorge2007 2 years ago
It's very Harrison-esque.
Good job ^_^
sabbymae 2 years ago
good job, good song
worthy of the Beatles
morriplant 2 years ago
very nice indeed!
nobloodyswearing 2 years ago
George-like, but an original sound nonetheless... nice!
hanniballecturer 2 years ago
Fantastic! Great stuff. Love the vocals and guitar work. I followed this up with "Out The Blue" from "Mind Games". Nice coupling. Thanks for the post. Looking forward to more.
45spindle 2 years ago
nice...it sounds beatly enough, but nevertheless original. great job.
gazuaman 2 years ago
great job sounds like something the beatles would sing
789pequignot 2 years ago
wow so good job!!!! amazing your voice
596456 2 years ago
enjoyed listening to your music and look forward to hearing more...this was especially nice!
nursesusiep 2 years ago
very good concratulations!!!
daracenak 2 years ago
Love it! I appreciate any one who is creative and is true to their creativity. Now, I'm not a formal musician but, how about a little more "down beat" on the drum, something to even out (not replace) the "tinny sound of the cymbals". What I just said sound so novice! LOL. But, I hope you get what I mean. Other than that, I loved it, and can't get it out of my head. Thanks Dan, keep on creating love (music).
TrickyWoo315 2 years ago
Yes, i agree, sounds like Beatles.i liked it. espeially the guitar solo-part
irinakobakhidze 2 years ago
I enjoy this song is pretty good, It's sounds like beatles songs
ClassicRock1992 2 years ago
pretty good!
ObeseStrayCats 2 years ago
Nicely Done ! :) i like it
0037LaCkEySpLuEy 2 years ago
wow, it's really nice! i like it! i think your a lucky man!!!!!!!!!!!!
joye25 2 years ago
Well done ;)
Sill3k 2 years ago
Thats good and I remember the Beatles first time round !!
nairda1945 2 years ago
very nice. keep writing
goofozor 2 years ago
You sing great, sound like john lennon and the song is so great is could have been written by beatles :D I love it.
ElizabethxPete 2 years ago
this song is real good. sweet and mellow.
great job.
revan664 2 years ago
GREAT JOB MAN!!! WHERE CAN I DOWNLOAD IT ,BUY IT,whatever sign me up
cicero5759 2 years ago
Thanks a lot man! If you want the mp3, just send me a message with your email and I'll send it to you :)
dantheman9999 2 years ago
Great song!!!
Good job,my friend:)*****
Pukrysa 2 years ago
great song ! very beautiful melodies and an vocal that reminds me a little bit of john lennon's voice ...awesome ! \o/
brunorockerr 2 years ago
I've already posted on mg4150's channel, but I do it again. Your song is excellent, very sensitive and the melody makes me fly ! You've got a super voice too. Well done !
Marseille5 2 years ago
Quel beau compliment! Merci mon ami!
dantheman9999 2 years ago
this is such a great song. you sound just like john! 5*
(1st)
LesPaulDude999 2 years ago
Hey thanks.. Robby (right?) I watched a couple of your videos... great stuff! I'm glad you enjoyed this song!
dantheman9999 2 years ago
yah its robby. thanks!
LesPaulDude999 2 years ago