Johnathon's audition for Zombie Shark with Snakes for Legs

[ChrisWales22]

This movie is fucking retarded

[whitehawkfinn]

I think this "movie" is a complete joke.

[badasssssshile]

was that ment to be some wired scots lol Good charactor nice

[SomethingAwfulYT]

I'm not convinced :colbert:

[Spuggysparkle]

I enjoyed your audition, you have excellent potential...did you have a cold??

[JonnyStarwind]

Actually, I was having a bit of a runny nose.

[gosherilyn]

really cool but you should have dived into it a bit more. But I liked definetly

[lismrrs]

I think you were not prepared enough. I would love to see it with the script being learnt! Why not make another audition?

[earlpalmer]

just a pointer buddy. try and learn the script before filming an audition, it will come across so much better. sorry but this came across as being read, not being acted. good luck in the future

[Richardgwm]

I offer this as a genuine positive criticism.

I didn't buy it. This is some highly emotional dialog. It needs to be much bigger. This is a man about to kill himself. The emotion is intense. It should be huge.