Separate Ways: Someone Save Me; Chapter 17 Part 1

[themaddieshowgirl]

Carl sounds hot

[bethygoesrawrr]

Oft carls yum ;)

aha

[alikat1324]

Holy Ballss he ias smokin

[ShexyReject]

Good!! XD but I think Riley shuld'nt break-up with Nick.... (just my opinion) =)) I Love how Joe said "Guys? As in males?" Hahaha thats FUNNY!! Poor Joe XD

[marriedtonickjonas]

its funny cause i just watched britney:for the record and if you havn't heard of it its about britney spears and she let a samera crew follow her around for 60 days starting on the day of the VMA awards and on the show there is a biggg audition for who will be in her music video womanizer lol.

[ilovedyl5801]

"Guys? As in males?"

haha that boy!

ahh and YES YES YES

amillion times YES!

another set of fanfics :)

[ilovedyl5801]

yay

i love that song!!

lol love the chapter

post more soon

:D

[ilovemykoala]

nnnnnoooooooooooooo!!!

SHE NEEDS NICK!!! NEEDDDD HIM!!!!

=D

[Carpetsharks]

rlly good cant wait for more!

[MartuXa16]

Loved it... But come on... Poor Nick, if you are thinking in what I think you are thinking... lol (this was confuse :S)

More stories?! Yes! I loved all your stories until now, so of course I want to read more!

Keep uo the good work! xoxo

[opbwithapples96]

OMGG!! MORE PLEASEEE! i loveeedd it!!!!!!

ah, again more please ;]

Rachel

[argentinachika]

he issssss sooooooooooo HOT...with the capital 'H'....XD,,,, now i know y rilezz thought so 2!!!!!..lmaooooooooooo

Camiii♪;]

the next ep. on my seriess is up...

if u want to read it... im posting the other intro to the other stroy too!!!

[jonasgrlforevs95]

aaaaaaaahhhhhhh love it!!! ooh i wonder wat's gonna happen with riley..hmmmm

please post soon!!! love it!!!

Cassie.

[jonassfan360]

Well...that's not good, she can't fall for him! Listen to me! Nick! nick! and joe! back off! its her life...God i had to much pixie dust...