You fucking piece of shit. Take a beautiful song and absolutely trash it thinking you're so cool. Either write and do your own songs or throw that God damn guitar into a dumpster and jump in after it head first.
The playing is good and you have a really great, expressive voice. However, I don't like the vocalization of the song. I know you're probably trying to make the song your own... but I think your choice of vocalization hurts the performance.
With that almost Tom Waits-esque voice you have, should be able to really nail the loneliness and desperation of this song. I'd slow it down a little... use that wonderful voice to drive home the emotion of the song. Just my opinion... thanks for the vid
thanks for the feedback. constructive comments. i'll still figuring out how to make this my own, entirely. tell me more about what you mean about the vocalization. just slow it down?
disgrace
boubounia1 8 months ago
You fucking piece of shit. Take a beautiful song and absolutely trash it thinking you're so cool. Either write and do your own songs or throw that God damn guitar into a dumpster and jump in after it head first.
53moreHP 1 year ago
this is great , shup yu guys its a cover, this covers good, dont want to do an exact copy of simon!
this si good good goooood
SpiltSunlight 1 year ago
very expressive.
RJiminez51 1 year ago
I think its very cool !!! Very different!!!! Well done, you made it your own.
edknndy 1 year ago
What a voice! Love your take on this song......
tomtknox 2 years ago
Nice! You've got a very Tom Waits/Boss feel...well done.
Let me know what you think of my version: "The Only Living Boy in NY"
Thanks!
chris
DickWiseman 3 years ago
I kind of agree with Ceez. Like the playing style though, but I do think if you slowed it down it could be so powerful.
eyerockeyeroll 3 years ago
thanks for the feedback. maybe i'll give it a go a little slower. check out some of my other stuff.
aprice88 3 years ago
The playing is good and you have a really great, expressive voice. However, I don't like the vocalization of the song. I know you're probably trying to make the song your own... but I think your choice of vocalization hurts the performance.
With that almost Tom Waits-esque voice you have, should be able to really nail the loneliness and desperation of this song. I'd slow it down a little... use that wonderful voice to drive home the emotion of the song. Just my opinion... thanks for the vid
Ceeeeez 3 years ago
thanks for the feedback. constructive comments. i'll still figuring out how to make this my own, entirely. tell me more about what you mean about the vocalization. just slow it down?
aprice88 3 years ago
This is cool. I like it.
lprice9 3 years ago