I like how she changed the mars and venus line from what it is in reality...the saying goes women are from VENUS and men are from MARS, but she changed it up and said MEN from Venus and WOMEN from Mars, I like that she changed it to be what she wanted it to be, that or maybe she just wanted the line to flow. lol...either way it was good. This whole poem is deep and I really liked how the further she got into the more she got into it with her infliction and claimed her verbal and emotional POWER.
I liked it alot..it was sincere and I love how the end she is all "its no fucking prom date"<3
RiotGrrl45 10 months ago
Her hands shook so hard but it's her words what matter, and those were steady and real.
Infornographer 11 months ago
holy shit, that gave me chills.
funun2 11 months ago
this poem is tight and all but i wish my bf would call me a bitch he would come up missin
bettyboo123hottie 1 year ago 3
@bettyboo123hottie lol
lillunchin1002 6 months ago
This poem was deep & her nerves just made it more real :)
sadechachi 1 year ago
Her hands are shaking
password9319 1 year ago
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password9319 1 year ago
Very nice
doruhs15 1 year ago
This gave me chills.
theusedx0 2 years ago
she was the most real with her piece out of everybody. nervous or not. this was dope.
haaaaachuuuuu 2 years ago 15
this was great her nervousness was evident but she kinda kept it together poem was deep.
lookwotisaid 2 years ago
such a good poem. too bad about the performance
tttman2 2 years ago 2
hey levi ... its lito... good job buddy!
dafineni99a 2 years ago
Nice poem... her nervousness was so obvious but the words were very deep... the meaning of the poem came across nicely... great job
Envysible 3 years ago 11
Wow, when she said "How many times he says I love you..." and so on, it was wow..
geNIExxC 3 years ago 5
all that, and pretty 2:)
shameless792 3 years ago 3
That was amazing!
BEXamillion 3 years ago 4
This one is the best!!!!
tmking87 3 years ago 3
great! really great.
noelrocks66 3 years ago
I like how she changed the mars and venus line from what it is in reality...the saying goes women are from VENUS and men are from MARS, but she changed it up and said MEN from Venus and WOMEN from Mars, I like that she changed it to be what she wanted it to be, that or maybe she just wanted the line to flow. lol...either way it was good. This whole poem is deep and I really liked how the further she got into the more she got into it with her infliction and claimed her verbal and emotional POWER.
Happyone4 3 years ago
shed a tear on "fU"
galfeldman 3 years ago
Very good! Keep up the good work, your doin' great!
thebeautywithin678 3 years ago
go girl
i saw she was nervous
but she was too dope
not even nervousness could stop her flow
do yu!
nmu1 3 years ago 4