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From: lisarussellnyc
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  • I liked it alot..it was sincere and I love how the end she is all "its no fucking prom date"<3

  • Her hands shook so hard but it's her words what matter, and those were steady and real.

  • holy shit, that gave me chills.

  • this poem is tight and all but i wish my bf would call me a bitch he would come up missin

  • This poem was deep & her nerves just made it more real :)

  • Her hands are shaking

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  • Very nice

  • This gave me chills.

  • she was the most real with her piece out of everybody. nervous or not. this was dope.

  • this was great her nervousness was evident but she kinda kept it together poem was deep.

  • such a good poem. too bad about the performance

  • hey levi ... its lito... good job buddy!

  • Nice poem... her nervousness was so obvious but the words were very deep... the meaning of the poem came across nicely... great job

  • Wow, when she said "How many times he says I love you..." and so on, it was wow..

  • all that, and pretty 2:)

  • That was amazing!

  • This one is the best!!!!

  • great! really great.

  • I like how she changed the mars and venus line from what it is in reality...the saying goes women are from VENUS and men are from MARS, but she changed it up and said MEN from Venus and WOMEN from Mars, I like that she changed it to be what she wanted it to be, that or maybe she just wanted the line to flow. lol...either way it was good. This whole poem is deep and I really liked how the further she got into the more she got into it with her infliction and claimed her verbal and emotional POWER.

  • shed a tear on "fU"

  • Very good! Keep up the good work, your doin' great!

  • go girl

    i saw she was nervous

    but she was too dope

    not even nervousness could stop her flow

    do yu!

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