this is really... dry... i mean, wheres the blocking, wheres the verbing, and the beating. The only emotion i see is in Hermia, and even then there isn't all that much... if i may with some constructive criticism. The beginning scene is supposed to captivate an audience, make them want to stay, within the first two minutes i wanted to go find another video. Bring in some meaning with the scene, find out whats underneath the text instead of just memorizing and saying the lines.
aww man
i cant believe that in my school play (which will be this one) ill be playing 'demetrius'
i hope i dont have to be like that guy
Demonical100 5 days ago
this is really... dry... i mean, wheres the blocking, wheres the verbing, and the beating. The only emotion i see is in Hermia, and even then there isn't all that much... if i may with some constructive criticism. The beginning scene is supposed to captivate an audience, make them want to stay, within the first two minutes i wanted to go find another video. Bring in some meaning with the scene, find out whats underneath the text instead of just memorizing and saying the lines.
shabbycreek 4 months ago
L A M E. U call this acting?? rotflol it's memorizing lines, nothing more...
marcomariaz26 4 months ago
Memories
0c0r4s 5 months ago