Speaking more is my biggest comment/suggestion/criticism, talk more throughout, less leaving the watcher simply...watching. No doubt these are going to improve with experience so i defininetely look forward to more ^_^
Firstly fantastic job, especially if its your first review. You can tell your a little nervous but i think you pull it off with your genuinely funny comments. At times you seem to be speaking as if the camera isnt even there which is awesome and where your funniest lines are xD
My only criticism are with editting really, think you needed to cut away sooner from the box opening bit heh, though it would have been fine if you`d simply spoken more.
Speaking more is my biggest comment/suggestion/criticism, talk more throughout, less leaving the watcher simply...watching. No doubt these are going to improve with experience so i defininetely look forward to more ^_^
QueenKupo 1 year ago
You wanted it, so here it is :)
Firstly fantastic job, especially if its your first review. You can tell your a little nervous but i think you pull it off with your genuinely funny comments. At times you seem to be speaking as if the camera isnt even there which is awesome and where your funniest lines are xD
My only criticism are with editting really, think you needed to cut away sooner from the box opening bit heh, though it would have been fine if you`d simply spoken more.
QueenKupo 1 year ago