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From: JonasHouse09
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  • omg so awesome!!!!! what does the paper say??? aaaaagggghhhh!!!!!!!

  • pokemonwarrior10134

    Shhh! Don't tell robin!

  • what does the note say

  • oh the scream thing now makes lot of sense!

    cause i do tend 2 yell at the computer while reading this lol

    like now, i m completly puzzled botu wht the note could say =)

    whos it from?

    y is she fainting?

    thois story is 2 addictive lol

  • Thats funny that if she fainted because of the note and she wasnt really dehydrated what would the doctor think? Interesting. (: i love your stories and i also love how you said about nothing going on in Nicks 'life' it made me laugh after stressing something was wrong through the whole chapter, and im also please she didnt really chuck out the CDs she'll keep them i hope...and great if the note is from Joe explaining everything but somehow i think it may be from her mum, dont know why (:

  • whoah what did the paper say? PS do you want any comments or subs or comments and subs for the next chapter? If yes, how many? (Not in description box)

  • i love your storys lol i look forward to seeing what you write when i get home from school :D poor Robin i wonder wats wrong

  • an intern at a hospital is called a resident just so u know

  • lol i liked the first theres nothing going on in nicks life, awesome chapter loved it

  • @xxxmonkeyful

    Hey, I'm checking in with all my subscribers. How is life going for you? Or are you dead and reading on some computer someone left near your grave?

    Like my failed attempt to be funny?

    Well just checking in to say, keep up on Murdered, because things are about to get interesting. Keep commenting too, I have noticed some of you who commented a lot near the beginning are not commenting as much. So please check on back up.

    Happy Holidays!

    -France

  • life is great for me, and lol no im not dead.. i dont think, thanks for asking, cant wait for more chapters,o and Merry Christmas 2 u 2=}

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