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  • how do you do those hearts ??

  • Its nice knowing from both their point of views!

  • aww, I think i'm gonna love this story, I really love the doubled POV's

  • THIS IS ALREADY AMAZING!

    Lol I love storys with teh transition from hate to love :)

    and teh desk convo idea -Awesome!

  • oh i love this story i always love jemi storys! this is sooooo good and if anyone says otherwise they need to go to a mental hospital because they are nuts!

  • I do love Niley, in fact you can call me an obsessed niley pervert :) I love the idea of different POVs, and I would love to see something different, because I have never seen anything like it, and I am sure it will go well, because you are such an amazing writer!

  • I love this plot sooo much. I prefer not Niley but you're right....the writing has more of an impact on me. And your writing is AMAZING so I think everythign will be fine. I cannot wait for this as I know it will be great! I'm soo excited ye

  • Okay, this is too cute. I love Jemi and this is one of the cutest ideas I've ever read. Lol, when I read the whole "Hello :D" part, my mouth dropped and I was smiling for the longest of time. That had happened to me once before, but I don't think what I witnessed on the desk would have the same ending as this one might have. Haha, this is great. I really hope you continue <3

  • Haha i had a feeling that it was joe that wrote back :P

  • i absolutely find this plot adorable. it's the only story i've came across that actually makes sense. it's very simple, yet interesting at the same time. you should definitely continue this story. count on me to watch it. oh, and i love niley. it's funny how miley doesn't even notice nick.. or does she? O_o can't wait until the next one. i love jemi. :D <3

  • i loved it

    amazing

    :D

  • This is pretty awesome :D :D

    The real thing should be amazing :D :D

    i <3 jemi :) x

  • omg ! love this love this love this ;D

    i love your idea of making it in BOTH

    pov (: thats awesome. I love seeing

    it from two diff people's pov, so i understand stories a bit better xD haha.

    amazinggg :) i really love this plot (: can't wait for moreee. ;D

  • can't wait! I love this idea! =)

  • I love this plot so much! It's so creative! I should write on one of my desks in school and see what happens! haha :)

    And I love that you are doing two points of view. That way we can see how both of the characters are feeling.. :)

  • i love how you're doing two different point of views (:

    i dont think anyone else has done that, well at least the stories i read! great job<3

    cannot wait for it to actually begin!

  • i like the idea of diff. pov!

    but i cant wait.

    i like this idea tho,,.the plot...everything!

  • I really love the idea of the double POV thing. I always prefer knowing both sides to a story anyway and see how they match up, so I think I'm really gonna enjoy that. The plot is so cute too. I really am so excited for this story to start. I think it's gonna be amazing.

  • I like thedouble POV.

    The plot is somewhat predictable, but I still love these kinds of stories. You have to start it soon!

  • AWESOME! I LOVED IT!!!

  • They're going to become good friends and they dont even know who the other is... sooo cutee!

  • i like the double pov

    great job Judy

  • I love the double POV thing, its good to see the story from two different people:) Can't wait for more =)

  • aww this story is gonna be so interesting :)))

    i can tell x)

    and i am a nelena fan, but i really dont mind niley cuz it is a JEMI movie, so its only gonna have a little niley so whatever :)

    great episode :)

  • Ohh. It's kinda predictable. They keep on writing on the desk and get to know each other and fall for each other but they don't know who the other person is.

  • the double POV thing? I like it..

    the story makes more sense this way :)

    and i really didn't think that Joe could be a sweet guy, from when i was reading this in Demi's POV so the two POV's is definitly as good thing :) .. this was amazing :)

  • Gah. I seriously can't wait.

    End of comment. haha no. But I really like your idea of POV it makes us understand whats going on more in their heads. Explaining why its called POV :p haha

    About the NIley thing I honestly don't care. Though I prefer Nelena. Its a Jemi story what happens extra DOESN'T matter so the haters, Can screw them selves :))) OK enough of that, I just wanna say how AMAZING of an idea this is. Seriously I want to read a whole book of it. RIGHT now. But no... I have to wait.

  • haha I like it both showing the pov

    ohh and your making it niley :)

    Ilyy

  • I love the Double POV; just as much as i love this story. ;)

  • Awesome. Amazing. Loved it.

    Could you put the story in the description? It's easier for some people to read. But I like this way too. I loved the part with Demi and Joe! :)

  • that was amazing <3 It's actually the best idea to switch like that. It's easier to see who did what at that im so happy it's niley <33 not a nelena fan.

    And boy do I hate shakespeare I mean what kind of name is that? It's like shake and then a pear! WTF?

    loved it [again] no I adored it and all the love words in the dictionairy or whatever you spell it :)

  • hahahaha. this is awesome. (: it's really cool that you can soo what Demi thinks and on the other side with this video what Joe thinks. (: this is gonna be a great Jemi movie I bet (:

  • this awesome can wait for the movie:)

    I think demi is playing hard to get

    So they are gonna be writing in the desk haaa

  • Damn it! I'm already addicted to this!

    And I love the double point of view idea, cause usually they always make it the girl's point of view, & I'd really like to read a guy's. So, the idea is great!

    And I really can't wait for the actually movie to start!

  • I like the double point of view thing. (: It's like the book My Sister's Keeper in a way.. Kind of. Not really? I don't know. I kinda forgot how it went. Hahaha.

    I want to read this story alreadyyyy... not rushing you. Just stating it. :) As in implying that this story sounds really good.

  • I love it!!

  • please post the next part!!! you've got me hooked already! i loved it!

  • AWESOMEEEE

  • i can tell this is going to be a great story i like the double pov it helps us understand better

  • i hate shakespeare.. when i read that part i busted out laughing cuz we're reading merchant of venice in class today and i wanted to shoot myself... anyways:

    not to sound like a broken record but i loved it :)

    i actually like the double pov. refreshing, plus it just makes it more understanding. i really love the story so far you make me want to start writing on my desk..i just might. keep it up

  • haha, i have conversations on my desk too. ;D

  • Maybe you'll meet the love of your life through it xD

  • Wait mileys eyes are blueee..........Oh gawd i just noticed that im a dumbass

  • I think the whole double point of view thing is great :)

    And you've really got me hooked from this prologue already!

  • I like the whole point of view thing. It helps me understand it more. : )

    this seems like it is going to be a cute story i cant wait for the next one.

  • OH COME ON

    you stop then

    i HATE cliff hangers

    but still good

    I dont ♥ it (yet)

    BUT I like it

  • so perfect. i loveed it ♥

    cannot wait till the next part :)

  • i luved the way u did i think u realy out did urself for this story

  • this was amazing!(:

    im already lovin this movie :D

    cant wait till the next part!(:

  • more!:D

    "Hello :D"

    xD LMFAO!

    That was awesome!

    Please make it!

  • I love this plot. I love how it's not a typical "OMGZZ NERD GETS THE populaRRRr!!11!"

    It's original. Please keep going :D:D

  • Ahaha, cute (:

    I can't wait for the next one. I really liked how it was in a POV, that makes it more interesting :D

    Great job.

  • That was amazing ;)

    Really helps me understand his pov.

    Cant wait till it starts :D

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