The notes are weird it like goes miner/major at random times.. And to be honest as the song was loading I said to myself " it's probably gunna have that kind of beat.." and, it did... Um sorry but, the song.... It's bad
@oxxmishy236 The majprity of Shcuberts work shifted between major and minor every other bar or so, its the difference between aving the chord witht the melody or against it, getting it right isn't easy.
I don't mean to be rude, but your voice is much, much better than your background music.
Part of the reason my songs are going in so many different directions is because I don't have a vocalist to work my tracks around. If you are interested in collaborating a few tracks together and seeing what we can come up with please let me know, have a listen to my latest tracks and let me know if my style is anything you'd like to be apart of. Thumbs up! :)
alot of rhyming going on. its not all about the word flow, its about the message u put across and it kind of felt like u were just trying to rhyme and make it sound catchy
keep them up, i love it when i get these great singers shared with me. and for all you people saying stop spamming. SHE'S NOT SPAMMING!!! all she is doing is trying to promote her music. some people LIKE ME like her voice and i am thanking her. for you other talentless morons, if you don't like her voice just don't watch her, simple as that.
As you asked in your mail, you wanted to promote your song on youtube, facebook or whatever, or leave a comment here. I think :1) most important : you have a very good voice 2) the song is okay... easy listening lounge and - i speak only for myself - maybe too clean or mediocre after 5 times. Use some more trip hoppy, dubby and/or jazzy stuff & use your voice in different way(s) and i would probably REALLY like your next song. 3) 1) is much more important then 2).
Vocals missed some feelings for the lyrics. Do remix and recrack the instrumentals that ruins the beat. For now, my impression is I will play and hear it ONCE and forget it. Always think of the listener...the point of pleasant and additive listening....forget your personal taste....think the taste of the unexasperated listening fan and attract consumers..You have to attract buyers.
I'm just really glad you took the time to spam me with this. How else would I have ever found it? You are really gonna make it girl, you have so much talent!
WOW! What an original song! "The good times were good, the bad times were so bad." You sure this isn't the new Rebecca Black single? Because you are easily up there in quality.
first thing. reverbs. nasty, cheap reverb plugs. particuarly on the drums. if they are acoustically recorded, the verb isnt doing the drums any favours. harmony tuning really needs to be immaculately tight. if you cant harmonise well with yourself, get someone else to do your harmonies for the balance in tone as well as pitch. and lastly.. phrasing.. think about how your going to space your lyrics out. peace.
...no her voice is not strong... its awfull. ITS TERRIBLE.. this is noobie made. total amateur song... i hate it.. SHAM ON YOU.. fuck off, you youtube-asshole. this is noobie....shut up, auch my ears.
@MrWonnabee You're entitled to your opinion, but do you have to be such a dick about it? Imagine you work really hard on something and some asshole deliberately searches for your video and takes the time to not write constructive criticism, but just to hate on it for no reason at all.
@LauraWarwick Im not an expert but i work in the music business and i actually look for new talent on the internet, my dad is a producer and manager or some big clients so i was just trying to give you a helping hand :) good luck with everything
@LauraWarwick sounds like a dub song, take a listen to tom cosm dub, king tubby, or spacemonkeyz.. you will hear the similiarities. i'm talking bout the instrumentals btw.
@skiddlecrumms well i can at least say that i would prefer, as a listener, that some delay and reverb would fit the mix PERFECTLY since the song CLEARLY has some kind of dub/reggae whatever feel to it. you can't deny that.
@hotnovel 1) There is so much reverb on her voice it almost sounds like there is an echo. 2) If you think delay would fit perfectly then you either don't know what delay is or have no sense of rhythm. 3) Reggae? Are you serious? How can a 4 on the floor beat sound anything like reggae?
I think the problem is you don't have any idea what you are talking about so this will be my last post.
@skiddlecrumms 1. Still it doesn't make itself clear enough to have an effect. 2 I know what a delay is and it would sound perfect. 2. Really? If you listen to for example Stenchmans remix of zzzonked it has a 4/4 kick drum but it's still dubstep. I didn't say it sounds like reggae but it has reggae influences, just listen to jamie xx or spacemonkeys and you will know that i know what im talking about. Cheers.
@excellerateurbreath waitwait... i'm dub? i didn't fucking say i didn't like i love the song but i think some clear delay to create an echo would fit MOTHERFUCKING PERFECTLY TO THIS STYLE OF MUSIC!! ok fuckit it's not dub reggae or ska or anything influenced, but i still think a clear dealy and some reverb WOULD BE GOOD AS FUCKING FUCK. i'm not talking about improving the singing i'm talking about adding some fucking effects on em. FFFFFFF
@hotnovel yes and that is completely based on opinion. The artist in question has her own opinion which is why she did not do as you suggested in the first place. personally I think adding that would make the music sound less natural. swearing doesn't make you smart it makes you look like a true moron.
@J4MZT3R the fuck, where did i say i didn't like it? the comments are made for comments and i just put my opinion out there, that's what the comments are for.
You have a lovely clean and airy vocal. I came here through a PM to one of the mixes (dubstep) of this song, and IMHO the original is better. It's a sort of calm blues ballad style, and that doesn't lend well to dubstep in general, which is mostly violent and dirty (twisting and warping sounds) and out of rythm.
I liked the song, but it's not the kind i would add to any of my playlists.
ehhhhhhhh.... i dont listen to this music.. but the singing is good
Tuqio 2 weeks ago
bad, bad, bad, and.... ummm... BAD
gdog124934gta3 3 weeks ago
Warwick <3 League of Legends :DD haha :)))
Smigoli 1 month ago
good job
constance163 1 month ago
" I cant let you go because you promised me the world?" I lied
mccscott45 1 month ago
oh iam so sorry i know if you dont like it why watch it someone sent it to me its just my oppinion i dont really like it
eand10 1 month ago
Is this autotunedd?
anyways, good job.........
HazelDimples 3 months ago
It's very different. Quite refreshing :D good job
Alariceleven 3 months ago in playlist Liked
I LOVE THIS SONG!!! Its so good you have an AMAZING CHOICE don't let anyone tell you different(:
simcrazy101 4 months ago
amzing love this song good job :)
xxxsophiepxxx24 4 months ago
Love this song... Good job.....
559mrbear 4 months ago
it describes my situation.
i ♥ this song !
ajcarm99 4 months ago
nicely done! what programs have you used to do it?
YooHeeYoh 4 months ago
@YooHeeYoh Windows Movie Maker for video.
thegameguystv 4 months ago
brilliant!
InvisibleLyn 4 months ago
I Love everything about this song, the words are amazing.
nicoleray143 4 months ago
WOW. Your boyfriend must have taken alot from you in that relationship?!!!!!
nickworld1 5 months ago
@LauraWarwick I would like to make a remix of your song.
Drifloon9843 5 months ago
ARE U A JUNGLING WARWICK?
Landistus 5 months ago
can you write in description the lyrics..?
mics261 5 months ago
Hi Laura!! Nice work :) keep it up!!!
Beccs986 5 months ago
i don't really like it i'm sorry.
LivHerMusic 5 months ago
Nice song!!
assunaheh 5 months ago
Meh not a bad voice but i cant take these lyrics seriously
pickle661 5 months ago
Why is the key so ... Not good...
The notes are weird it like goes miner/major at random times.. And to be honest as the song was loading I said to myself " it's probably gunna have that kind of beat.." and, it did... Um sorry but, the song.... It's bad
oxxmishy236 5 months ago 10
@oxxmishy236 The majprity of Shcuberts work shifted between major and minor every other bar or so, its the difference between aving the chord witht the melody or against it, getting it right isn't easy.
philibusterification 3 months ago
@oxxmishy236 You are totally right there, plus the lyrics are err...
WhiteSparrows 3 months ago
nice song ;))your voice is very good!
ritamorXD 5 months ago
Sorry, but the song is terrible.
SaiefsStudio 5 months ago
"I don't care about all of the bruises"?
I can't enjoy that.
Otherwise i like the intro and background sounds, if you change the words it'd be ok. Good luck.
IdaSputum 5 months ago
WEll... the sound is kinda of strange... not my type.. but the letter is Good! keep going..
beapalencia 5 months ago
Good song and well done.
TheHenry1953 5 months ago
amazing....please check out my drum cover too
ndodrum95 5 months ago
amazing
daniela90044 5 months ago
muito bom !
daniela90044 5 months ago
<3
Deem7840 5 months ago
this is a really cool and groovy track! :)
TheRoseMarie1992 5 months ago
Your voice is amazing... :)
LyricsAngelxxx 5 months ago
Voice is great ... but the music/backing tracks seems to be lacking something.
laserdiscguy 5 months ago
Wtf!! Why the hell is she being compared to Rebecca Black?
tonyonyl 5 months ago
yuo sweetie, very good))) thank you for the sharing with me)) great job)
xx
Annie
CLOVERPROMO 5 months ago
omg this is crap like rebecca black i bet ur record company is ark
iEatNeonDinos 5 months ago
nice song
MANCBOY24 5 months ago
I Love it you did a good job on this is this all on the same Cd?...
arhold123 5 months ago
good look
nichiren280767 5 months ago
I love your voice. Very, very powerful.
I don't mean to be rude, but your voice is much, much better than your background music.
Part of the reason my songs are going in so many different directions is because I don't have a vocalist to work my tracks around. If you are interested in collaborating a few tracks together and seeing what we can come up with please let me know, have a listen to my latest tracks and let me know if my style is anything you'd like to be apart of. Thumbs up! :)
K31TH3R 6 months ago
this is awesome
lightningthief22 6 months ago
ur a great singer, but this song is... underdone
angel55676 6 months ago
@angel55676
agreed.
tunes slightly bare - could co with some kind of break in to something that people can groove to, not jsut sing too
skitzochav 6 months ago
love her voice <3
xYowYowCanGirlX 6 months ago
alot of rhyming going on. its not all about the word flow, its about the message u put across and it kind of felt like u were just trying to rhyme and make it sound catchy
iyuppie 6 months ago
whoever compared Laura to Rebecca black is going to get a spank...
cagednm69 6 months ago
i have 3 requests to you
1.try the next song with better lyrics that has a strong meaning and theme.....
2.please concentrate and make a good chorus lines in high pitch you know like bruno mars.....make it feelingful.
3.your high pitch here is (sorry if a blunt ) awful when i hears it first time in headphones please make your voice soft in high pitches
varun8866 6 months ago
great song and fantastic voice ;)
TheRomiyoo 6 months ago
Pretty good, keep it up
SRSLYlolWTF 6 months ago
She has a beautiful voice
toya2628 6 months ago
немного релакса!)
rapsodden 6 months ago
i have a track i need lyrics for ...and an amazing singer...shall i email you it?
priyahthewhite 6 months ago
great voice. ballin.
vipvinnyd 6 months ago
linda
lokosong 6 months ago
keep them up, i love it when i get these great singers shared with me. and for all you people saying stop spamming. SHE'S NOT SPAMMING!!! all she is doing is trying to promote her music. some people LIKE ME like her voice and i am thanking her. for you other talentless morons, if you don't like her voice just don't watch her, simple as that.
mullent169 6 months ago
@LauraWarwick can i get your number? :)
KyleWayne93 6 months ago
@KyleWayne93 420 :)
THESTRANGERWEIRDO420 6 months ago
@THESTRANGERWEIRDO420 i already use that one :)
KyleWayne93 6 months ago
niceeee
baiask8er1 6 months ago
Eargasm/Orgasm? Bothhhhhhh! :)))))
ChuckieLegoJR 6 months ago
nice beat
pricec88 6 months ago
As you asked in your mail, you wanted to promote your song on youtube, facebook or whatever, or leave a comment here. I think :1) most important : you have a very good voice 2) the song is okay... easy listening lounge and - i speak only for myself - maybe too clean or mediocre after 5 times. Use some more trip hoppy, dubby and/or jazzy stuff & use your voice in different way(s) and i would probably REALLY like your next song. 3) 1) is much more important then 2).
TheBSideDJ 6 months ago
YUSSSSSS
Sunshine553 6 months ago
Great work
FinalFantasyJarhead 6 months ago
<3..
exoida 6 months ago
GET OUT OF MY HEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD!
elliottkwong 6 months ago
Nice
ajene1000 6 months ago
u got a really nice voice i liked it
spoof257 6 months ago
the main tune reminds me of this track from that old, old SSI game, Dark Sun: Shattered Lands
krononomikon 6 months ago
Awesome
MrBlondinul 6 months ago
reminds me of the bitch from portishead just a bit speedier. can deffo sing, not my cup of tea tho.
MurdaZen 6 months ago
the dubstep one is better but still good
HelloNothole 6 months ago
Smooth and calm, I like it. It's relaxing.
NecromancerJennyfer 6 months ago
the lyrics didnt really match the tone... and i think your voice could do a lot more than what you did with it here...
Whatbecomesofme 6 months ago
booo
Colliemang 6 months ago
@Colliemang bies.
Xmaza69 6 months ago
Hmm, nice voice for ear, really nice :)
Morisato4 6 months ago
That was really good. Love your voice.
Xstofer95 6 months ago
Wasnt my favorite but has potential of growing on me. I would like to hear more of just bassful beats from u :) good job tho
hurleyjsd88 6 months ago
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AnimeDonut 6 months ago
no really... it describes my affaire exactly
slapdula 6 months ago
't sucks... lyrics remind me of my girl though
slapdula 6 months ago
This is really good :)
OogieBoogieSTK 6 months ago
ive never heard such a type of music... strange... i dont even know what to write :)
this voice could be good to jazz as well ;)
mg4994 6 months ago
nom nom nom nom =D
nskpsycho 6 months ago
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TheMazithra 6 months ago
hmm, not really my type of song, but its good :)
marcz4100 6 months ago
Good job Laura. Another great track. Way better than the dubstep one.
YouEssEssArr 6 months ago
spokojny i skompresowany utwór......pozdrawiam...
JORGASINSKI 6 months ago
Nice one! o:
000IDaveI000 6 months ago
very good song ;)
hack3rSR 6 months ago
cool
GENIUS73972 6 months ago
Good music - lower the voice to more sensual , not to agressfull like this - I think it would fit better to the music .....
No doubt !... You are talented !!!!
a1864aa 6 months ago
@a1864aa coming from the guy who wrote 'aggressfull'
YouEssEssArr 6 months ago
Vocals missed some feelings for the lyrics. Do remix and recrack the instrumentals that ruins the beat. For now, my impression is I will play and hear it ONCE and forget it. Always think of the listener...the point of pleasant and additive listening....forget your personal taste....think the taste of the unexasperated listening fan and attract consumers..You have to attract buyers.
cass2chk 6 months ago
Great should b a dnb song her voice is great 4 dub and dnb
brandond0825 6 months ago
jazzy pop srry not my kinda thang!! but its not bad @ all !!
fuelyournews 6 months ago
Nice! This is really good.
decode117 6 months ago
so so
PERUTECHNO 6 months ago
i like the lyrics though. it sounds like my life right now :\
hummer69420 6 months ago
it should be dubbed :)
hummer69420 6 months ago
beautiful voice.
xxKillerMillerxx1 6 months ago
nice
Dashing0073 6 months ago
u have a great voice :)
CrazyDiva22 6 months ago
you have a very beautiful voice^^
DjRaymonology 6 months ago
I wish I'm losing you
thesickbeat 6 months ago
Wow!!!!
fgerardohost 6 months ago
I'm just really glad you took the time to spam me with this. How else would I have ever found it? You are really gonna make it girl, you have so much talent!
benaolson 6 months ago
WOW! What an original song! "The good times were good, the bad times were so bad." You sure this isn't the new Rebecca Black single? Because you are easily up there in quality.
benaolson 6 months ago 17
@benaolson "You sure this isn't the new Rebecca Black single? Because you are easily up there in quality."
haha I don't know if thats supposed to be a complement or an insult...
pickle661 6 months ago 6
@pickle661 Im in the same thought process on that one lol
ManticFilly 6 months ago
@pickle661 More of an insult shes way better
a1180994 5 months ago
@benaolson Id like to see you do any better
joetri10 6 months ago
This is my favorite!... :)
MrDrawingguy 6 months ago
love it!!
TheNoddy08 6 months ago
great job keep it up
sepalk01 6 months ago
first thing. reverbs. nasty, cheap reverb plugs. particuarly on the drums. if they are acoustically recorded, the verb isnt doing the drums any favours. harmony tuning really needs to be immaculately tight. if you cant harmonise well with yourself, get someone else to do your harmonies for the balance in tone as well as pitch. and lastly.. phrasing.. think about how your going to space your lyrics out. peace.
feedingear 6 months ago
nice
RoPEK123xd 6 months ago
Great Job Don't Listen To Haters!!!!
jblover1252001 6 months ago
Lol its just such a bad song is the only thing haha
ConsistentSniper 6 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
I love the music video, thanks
Intimattichannel 6 months ago
You have a gorgeous voice, very smooth and natural sounding
tawari6 6 months ago
Super awesome my friend, and thanx for sharing:)W
willy350z 6 months ago
she's pretty. but not enought o be famous
ketamineocean 6 months ago
Love your voice!
wachnathan 6 months ago
I love the song
secretstuffish 6 months ago
...no her voice is not strong... its awfull. ITS TERRIBLE.. this is noobie made. total amateur song... i hate it.. SHAM ON YOU.. fuck off, you youtube-asshole. this is noobie....shut up, auch my ears.
MrWonnabee 6 months ago
@MrWonnabee You're entitled to your opinion, but do you have to be such a dick about it? Imagine you work really hard on something and some asshole deliberately searches for your video and takes the time to not write constructive criticism, but just to hate on it for no reason at all.
tawari6 6 months ago
SING IT!!! STRONG VOICE going somewhere. I felt this one @headchange
KnuSound 6 months ago
Like the beat!
annemijnia 6 months ago
Your really great! I think you should try cover pixie lott x
XCourtneyShannonX 6 months ago
duie
espin4dk 6 months ago
@LauraWarwick Im not an expert but i work in the music business and i actually look for new talent on the internet, my dad is a producer and manager or some big clients so i was just trying to give you a helping hand :) good luck with everything
HEREtodayGONEtomoo 6 months ago
love it! <3
LenetteMusicVideos 6 months ago
KEEP DOIN UR THING THIS SONG IS GOOD NO MATTER WAT
rafeisbest 6 months ago
I love the beat
Desy242 7 months ago
LOOOOOL Warwick <--- league of legends LOOOOOOOL
dcledroit 7 months ago
@dcledroit looool david :)
warwick rules :)
RedFireDragon77 7 months ago
Your really good at singing ............ you need a top comment!!
like if you agree
debbie98deborah 7 months ago
good voice and lyrics.. but it was good if you could make the song...trance :) it was awesome :)
DeejayoD3smo 7 months ago
credo
SuperCattv 7 months ago
the vocals r so fucking dry, this is a dub song you should put more reverb and dealy on there.
hotnovel 7 months ago
@hotnovel It's not a dub song!
LauraWarwick 7 months ago 9
@LauraWarwick sounds like a dub song, take a listen to tom cosm dub, king tubby, or spacemonkeyz.. you will hear the similiarities. i'm talking bout the instrumentals btw.
hotnovel 7 months ago
@LauraWarwick btw i'm not talking about dubSTEP
hotnovel 7 months ago
@LauraWarwick souds pretty much like it... if it wuz a organ instead of a piano xP
SjokkoladeBolleMusa 6 months ago
@hotnovel This isn't dub retard.
skiddlecrumms 7 months ago
@skiddlecrumms do you even know what dub is dickcheese?
hotnovel 7 months ago
@hotnovel Yes, I do, and this isn't it. This is just contemporary.
skiddlecrumms 7 months ago
@skiddlecrumms well i can at least say that i would prefer, as a listener, that some delay and reverb would fit the mix PERFECTLY since the song CLEARLY has some kind of dub/reggae whatever feel to it. you can't deny that.
hotnovel 6 months ago
@hotnovel 1) There is so much reverb on her voice it almost sounds like there is an echo. 2) If you think delay would fit perfectly then you either don't know what delay is or have no sense of rhythm. 3) Reggae? Are you serious? How can a 4 on the floor beat sound anything like reggae?
I think the problem is you don't have any idea what you are talking about so this will be my last post.
skiddlecrumms 6 months ago
@skiddlecrumms 1. Still it doesn't make itself clear enough to have an effect. 2 I know what a delay is and it would sound perfect. 2. Really? If you listen to for example Stenchmans remix of zzzonked it has a 4/4 kick drum but it's still dubstep. I didn't say it sounds like reggae but it has reggae influences, just listen to jamie xx or spacemonkeys and you will know that i know what im talking about. Cheers.
hotnovel 6 months ago
@hotnovel Oh, and I might throw in that there is delay on her vocals already. It is heavy at 2:20.
skiddlecrumms 6 months ago
@hotnovel you're retarded the vocals are great. you're dub!!!!!!!! don't post anything if you don't like it
excellerateurbreath 6 months ago
@excellerateurbreath waitwait... i'm dub? i didn't fucking say i didn't like i love the song but i think some clear delay to create an echo would fit MOTHERFUCKING PERFECTLY TO THIS STYLE OF MUSIC!! ok fuckit it's not dub reggae or ska or anything influenced, but i still think a clear dealy and some reverb WOULD BE GOOD AS FUCKING FUCK. i'm not talking about improving the singing i'm talking about adding some fucking effects on em. FFFFFFF
hotnovel 6 months ago
@hotnovel yes and that is completely based on opinion. The artist in question has her own opinion which is why she did not do as you suggested in the first place. personally I think adding that would make the music sound less natural. swearing doesn't make you smart it makes you look like a true moron.
excellerateurbreath 6 months ago
@excellerateurbreath i'm not going for smart, i'm going for frustrated.
hotnovel 6 months ago
@hotnovel if you don't like it don't comment or watch it.
J4MZT3R 6 months ago
@J4MZT3R the fuck, where did i say i didn't like it? the comments are made for comments and i just put my opinion out there, that's what the comments are for.
hotnovel 6 months ago
@hotnovel haha
decode117 6 months ago
@hotnovel tbh fuck you?
kingduffy22able 6 months ago
@kingduffy22able if it makes your day better, fer sure buddy.
hotnovel 6 months ago
@hotnovel fuk u man suk a fat cok bich
iGhOstFaCeX 6 months ago
@iGhOstFaCeX oh man, that really got to me :/
hotnovel 6 months ago
You have a lovely clean and airy vocal. I came here through a PM to one of the mixes (dubstep) of this song, and IMHO the original is better. It's a sort of calm blues ballad style, and that doesn't lend well to dubstep in general, which is mostly violent and dirty (twisting and warping sounds) and out of rythm.
I liked the song, but it's not the kind i would add to any of my playlists.
gulllars 7 months ago
Didn't like it sorry
jazszy 7 months ago
a great sound as always. I do love the sound of all of it. You have a great voice to take on any form of mood... love it
ocossa 7 months ago
THANK YOUUUUUUUU
gio380800 7 months ago
I want to make a kickass remix but im scared that something will happen to my computer.
markthebest2 7 months ago
Very, VERY impressive. Outstanding in fact... :)
MrDrawingguy 7 months ago