@KillTheRevolution Thanks for your comment. I agree. And this video isn't intended to make anyone a Christian -- it is addressed to My fellow Christians...
Constructive criticism - Message was excellent. Typography was well done. Voice talent was good, yet problematic. The pacing of the narration and some of the inflection choices distracted from the message. Primarily the pacing. Keep up the good work!
Hmmm...Would be easier to demonstrate than to express in a comment, but I'll give it a shot! The best word for the vocal pattern/pacing issue would be "halting". At times, the narrator spoke in a halting fashion. i.e. "It's...great...thatyou...feed the hungry" There are other instances in the clip where that pattern occurs. I understand why the narrator did it, but there are more effective and clearer ways to make the dramatic emphasis for which he was striving. Does that make sense?
Giving the same message that Jesus gave is Law??? dgkirch, I think maybe you've gotten hold of a baaaad translation. The gospel message of the New Testament is consistently the same throughout, starting with the first words uttered by Jesus himself at the beginning of his public ministry: "Repent, for the kingdom of heaven is near." (Matt 4:17)
I genuinely do not at all see what you see here. The kindest thing we can do as we feed the hungry, etc. is to first and foremost proclaim the Gospel. Without the Gospel, these works become law and are but dross. With the Gospel, such things are a sweet aroma.
Trying to impact the world apart from the Gospel is law.
Feeding them both bread and the Bread of Life is the Great Commission.
@dgkirch1@dgkirch1 Space is constrained here, and YouTube wont let me include the URLs, but you might want to read the two blog posts I wrote that are related to this article. Go to website shown at the end of the video, and youll land at my blog. The two articles to look for are:
The mysterious case of the disappearing Gospel
The power of the Gospel
But in short, yes this was really a Law message, but a Law message *about* the proclamation of the Gospel.
@dgkirch1 I would encourage you to read how adamant the entire NT is about explaining how if you change the gospel into something else, it isn't the gospel anymore. (Especially Galatians, where they just wanted to add one little requirement). What DreadPirate is doing here is telling people to remove those added requirements so that the gospel is clearly heard.
what church does preach the real and true gospel??
waylo4526 1 year ago
A.Men!!
dogsmumm 1 year ago
This video isn't going to make anyone a Christian.
KillTheRevolution 1 year ago
@KillTheRevolution Thanks for your comment. I agree. And this video isn't intended to make anyone a Christian -- it is addressed to My fellow Christians...
DreadPirateMedia 1 year ago
You mean, it's not going to make YOU a Christian.
terriergal 1 year ago
A point that the catholic church definantly needs to hear and the people need to understand with the utmost urgancy
MrMatthew1180 1 year ago
Constructive criticism - Message was excellent. Typography was well done. Voice talent was good, yet problematic. The pacing of the narration and some of the inflection choices distracted from the message. Primarily the pacing. Keep up the good work!
ShuriRyuKa 1 year ago
@ShuriRyuKa Thank you! That's helpful. Would you be willing to comment a little further on the pacing issue?
DreadPirateMedia 1 year ago
Hmmm...Would be easier to demonstrate than to express in a comment, but I'll give it a shot! The best word for the vocal pattern/pacing issue would be "halting". At times, the narrator spoke in a halting fashion. i.e. "It's...great...thatyou...feed the hungry" There are other instances in the clip where that pattern occurs. I understand why the narrator did it, but there are more effective and clearer ways to make the dramatic emphasis for which he was striving. Does that make sense?
ShuriRyuKa 1 year ago
Yes, that makes perfect sense and is very helpful. Thanks :-)
DreadPirateMedia 1 year ago
Giving the same message that Jesus gave is Law??? dgkirch, I think maybe you've gotten hold of a baaaad translation. The gospel message of the New Testament is consistently the same throughout, starting with the first words uttered by Jesus himself at the beginning of his public ministry: "Repent, for the kingdom of heaven is near." (Matt 4:17)
SolaSisters 1 year ago
dgkirch1,
I genuinely do not at all see what you see here. The kindest thing we can do as we feed the hungry, etc. is to first and foremost proclaim the Gospel. Without the Gospel, these works become law and are but dross. With the Gospel, such things are a sweet aroma.
Trying to impact the world apart from the Gospel is law.
Feeding them both bread and the Bread of Life is the Great Commission.
Lisa4given 1 year ago
a very apt title. The gospel certainly disappeared in this message, being wuickly changed into law.
dgkirch1 1 year ago
@dgkirch1 @dgkirch1 Space is constrained here, and YouTube wont let me include the URLs, but you might want to read the two blog posts I wrote that are related to this article. Go to website shown at the end of the video, and youll land at my blog. The two articles to look for are:
The mysterious case of the disappearing Gospel
The power of the Gospel
But in short, yes this was really a Law message, but a Law message *about* the proclamation of the Gospel.
DreadPirateMedia 1 year ago
@dgkirch1 I would encourage you to read how adamant the entire NT is about explaining how if you change the gospel into something else, it isn't the gospel anymore. (Especially Galatians, where they just wanted to add one little requirement). What DreadPirate is doing here is telling people to remove those added requirements so that the gospel is clearly heard.
terriergal 1 year ago