Feda Hamimi, urdu ghazal fasle gul he saja he maikhana

[Urdulife]

very nice try guys . You are not native urdu- punjabi speaking but very good try........

[khanooch12]

salamuna, fida muhmad jan ka yawa khabara sta pa faida wakam.shayed lazh darta azar arsawonki wi. kho biaa hum da mashar wror pa hesiat darta wayam .ta sha tellent awe zoq laree awe der sha awaz laree. kho wos la da kam umar yee , kawalai see ka ghat swee bia ba darta deera mushkila wi khpal pa naturali awaz bandi koshish wa ka . da nashenas copy ma kawa ma da hagah style ta za , ka nee bia ba darta graana wi