good work, the only mistake you made is when you wrote "The first Colombus ship", instead of "The first Colombus trip". But the message is good: we must learn the lesson of all great men of the past, of the present and of the future - no matter the colour of their skin-, they had (have and will have) just great ideals that won't ever die. And their example must show us the right way. This is the great Vision of Stevie.
good work, the only mistake you made is when you wrote "The first Colombus ship", instead of "The first Colombus trip". But the message is good: we must learn the lesson of all great men of the past, of the present and of the future - no matter the colour of their skin-, they had (have and will have) just great ideals that won't ever die. And their example must show us the right way. This is the great Vision of Stevie.
heaven17 3 years ago
supersandra - this is a great video!
dgvelkgrove 3 years ago