I've listened to this again and again! I enjoy your reading so much. I especially love how you've infused a note of humour into the phrase "how quickly she is growing old!" It's delicately done and adds so much depth to the line.
Many thanks. I thoroughly enjoyed this and listened several times. There are some minor discrepancies between the audio version and the words that appear on the screen; which is the definitive version?
It's more likely to be my reading that's imprecise. I expect you can find a more reliable version on the web. If you read the comments on my channel page and those attached to "Autumn Song" by W H Auden, recently posted, I delve into reasons why.
I had no idea this existed. I am utterly delighted.
First, because it is good poetry.
Second, because while it starts by scolding Marvell for his rudeness and arrogance, it also criticizes women who do in fact descend to "coyness", which is really what Marvell was on about: the ones who say neither yes nor no, but dance around the point wasting both parties' time.
I also like the way she answers his "quaint" wordplay with her own "snatch" of verse. :-)
However, to be fair to Andy, some of the words he used might have changed their meaning with time. "Coyness" might have been a desirable attribute in those days and associated with honour and virginity - or what Milton called, "Sweet. reluctant amorous delay"
I've listened to this again and again! I enjoy your reading so much. I especially love how you've infused a note of humour into the phrase "how quickly she is growing old!" It's delicately done and adds so much depth to the line.
Thanks so much.
thetanzi 1 year ago
great thing, i really enjoyed. thanks so much for posting
SuperNongrata 1 year ago
Many thanks. I thoroughly enjoyed this and listened several times. There are some minor discrepancies between the audio version and the words that appear on the screen; which is the definitive version?
janaltus 2 years ago
It's more likely to be my reading that's imprecise. I expect you can find a more reliable version on the web. If you read the comments on my channel page and those attached to "Autumn Song" by W H Auden, recently posted, I delve into reasons why.
SpokenVerse 2 years ago
I had no idea this existed. I am utterly delighted.
First, because it is good poetry.
Second, because while it starts by scolding Marvell for his rudeness and arrogance, it also criticizes women who do in fact descend to "coyness", which is really what Marvell was on about: the ones who say neither yes nor no, but dance around the point wasting both parties' time.
I also like the way she answers his "quaint" wordplay with her own "snatch" of verse. :-)
doctorpsycho1960 2 years ago 2
However, to be fair to Andy, some of the words he used might have changed their meaning with time. "Coyness" might have been a desirable attribute in those days and associated with honour and virginity - or what Milton called, "Sweet. reluctant amorous delay"
SpokenVerse 2 years ago
Very very well done!
king7wood 2 years ago
IM his great great (couple more) Grandaughter.
Keylimeepiee 2 years ago
Then you must mean Andrew Marvell rather than A.D. Hope. I hope you have inherited some of his talent.
SpokenVerse 2 years ago
absolutely brilliant!
Makes me which Marvell was around to enjoy it.
Thanks for posting.
amorymorton 2 years ago
Absolutely brilliant!
shtabba 3 years ago
Enjoyed this ... thanks, SpokenVerse. I'd never heard of A D Hope before. A very amusing poem and read well.
AgingFishwife 3 years ago