great job, i play peter in this play, im doing it at my school. i thought u both did great! there could be room for improvments but then again there always are things that can be better!
I would like to see Wachy's version - he is quite sure of himself.
I agree Peter was quite good. I like Jerry in the first part, not as much in the second, and I think he lost his way in the third. Some of this was direction.
What I liked was Jerry's sincere effort to connect with Peter. The other layers were missing.
But he has a nice base to start with. He should continue to work on this character - but lose the leather jacket.
I agree. Really good in the first part. I think the part of Jerry is very difficult because of the quick change of the interaction between the characters. It can be tough to move from one end of the spectrum to the other so quickly.
That said, you certainly weren't horrible. The performance at the end simply wasn't as good as at the beginning - and the beginning was very good.
Hmmm. This play is such an incredible piece of work. I liked the guy who played Peter... but I'm going to have to agree with mr. WachyXP. As someone who has played Jerry... I'm pretty disappointed.
ill see if i could tape us performing this i hope it turns out good.
jakefinn56 3 years ago
great job, i play peter in this play, im doing it at my school. i thought u both did great! there could be room for improvments but then again there always are things that can be better!
jakefinn56 3 years ago
I would like to see Wachy's version - he is quite sure of himself.
I agree Peter was quite good. I like Jerry in the first part, not as much in the second, and I think he lost his way in the third. Some of this was direction.
What I liked was Jerry's sincere effort to connect with Peter. The other layers were missing.
But he has a nice base to start with. He should continue to work on this character - but lose the leather jacket.
OyzukiMike 3 years ago
I agree. Really good in the first part. I think the part of Jerry is very difficult because of the quick change of the interaction between the characters. It can be tough to move from one end of the spectrum to the other so quickly.
That said, you certainly weren't horrible. The performance at the end simply wasn't as good as at the beginning - and the beginning was very good.
robing66066 3 years ago
Hmmm. This play is such an incredible piece of work. I liked the guy who played Peter... but I'm going to have to agree with mr. WachyXP. As someone who has played Jerry... I'm pretty disappointed.
improvmistress21 4 years ago
Thank you! I was horrible, no doubt!
But, hey it was enjoyable!
Peter has gone on to commercials and whatnot.
I'd love two things...to try it again with no late 20's "ego" involved...and to see your take on it!
I was a "last minute sub" for a much more experienced actor. I had limited training and a lot of guts. Better than nothing, I suppose.
Thanx for the comment!
mickeeteeze 4 years ago
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please, don't consider yourselves as professionals, this is not even close to the book =/
WachyXP 4 years ago
wow. well done
xekind 4 years ago