Love this! Actually. I often pay a lot of attention the melody of many original songs (just because it's hard to write songs sometimes because you think you're just changing up another song's tune sometimes...) and this really kept me listening. Great work =)
This is the first time I've seen your videos and you know what, when I first saw this video, I didn't expect much. But after listening it, I was amazed. Lyrics = outstanding. Tune = unbelievably great. (i love the tune, hah.) Voice = amazing! After just this one video, I subscribed to you, and fell in love with your songs. Keep up the great work, JanaMVerdes!
This is truly amazing. The lyrics are unbelievable. And your voice seems to sound nice, the audio was messing up the clarity of your voice. But all I can say is amazing! If you went on like American idol id vote for you. Haha but seriously. Great job. Keep going!!! :D
hahahahaha dragon quest 2 xD its a video game. any i saw your post on craigslist!!! :D check out some of my vids if you wanna play together some time (:l
Time to go out on a nerdy Dragon Quest 3 limb and name the male sailor Eric and the waiting lover Olivia. Lovely song and it suits the ghost ship part of Dragon Quest 3.
Beautiful voice, as always, I might add; just don't make a habit out of making morbid songs, ma'am~
@Kencan72 wth? 1.i have no idea what dragon quest is. 2. ive never written a song remotely like this before 3. if i have inspiration for something, im going to write it regardless of what style it is 4. if this song is not to your liking, then the solution is obvious: dont listen to it.
1)The Dragon Quest reference wasn't something I expected you to get and it wasn't meant to be offensive. The song lyrics just relate to a scene in the game, so calm down.
2)Just because someone says "Don't make a habit out of-" doesn't mean you've done it a lot in the past. I'm pretty much just saying that I love hearing you sing happy songs. Whatever the type of song you've got a lovely voice. Goodness, someone must have had a bad day.
@Kencan72 "don't make a habit out of" means you're basically telling me not to do more songs like this. not exactly the nicest thing to say to someone who has worked on a piece of music for a couple of days. so of course im gonna call you out on it.
@JanaMVerdes ^_^ Then I should definitely pick my words more carefully; quite sorry. By no means did I say I didn't like the song; the fact that it fits and reminds me of an old game scene that I like means positive things. I find more pleasure in seeing you sing something happy and upbeat (that's just my personal + for you). Whether you're singing the "Cuppy Cake Song" or "Remembering Sunday" I'm loving your voice. So sing what you're feeling Ms. Lady.
(sailed away,took my heart on that boat when u didnt come back i thought it broke) It would have been better if it said, when u didn't come back my heart broke. Just an opinion but is still a great song :)
loved the song. you also have a great voice but anyways I just wanted to say you sounded great and I liked the song you wrote
TheSnowPrincess14 3 months ago
this is awesome, you have an fantastick woise :)
skrullaloff 4 months ago
AWSOME song I like it
jokerrns1 4 months ago
Cantaa muito *.*
MsBruhh123 6 months ago
You wrote this?!! Can you please come to Red Bluff I would love it if you could share your artisticness
Roachtrix 8 months ago
reminds me of The Hush Sound "Lighthouse"
Beautiful song
ABeautifulMess12 11 months ago
Love this! Actually. I often pay a lot of attention the melody of many original songs (just because it's hard to write songs sometimes because you think you're just changing up another song's tune sometimes...) and this really kept me listening. Great work =)
siLvsmiLes 11 months ago
This is the first time I've seen your videos and you know what, when I first saw this video, I didn't expect much. But after listening it, I was amazed. Lyrics = outstanding. Tune = unbelievably great. (i love the tune, hah.) Voice = amazing! After just this one video, I subscribed to you, and fell in love with your songs. Keep up the great work, JanaMVerdes!
dubuful 1 year ago
This is truly amazing. The lyrics are unbelievable. And your voice seems to sound nice, the audio was messing up the clarity of your voice. But all I can say is amazing! If you went on like American idol id vote for you. Haha but seriously. Great job. Keep going!!! :D
JasmineVanille 1 year ago
Really nice song. I love songs that tell a story.
nevermoregg 1 year ago
But how can u possibly be in love by five years old
VanessaNguyen13 1 year ago
Wow,keep it up:) this is great,guitar,tune,singing,lyrics,verses,AMAZING
VanessaNguyen13 1 year ago
impressive song :D
XDpwnmebobaXD 1 year ago
its very nice.. i like youre voice.. nice song .. congratulations.. go a head...
mahsrd 1 year ago
this takes true talent girl. I fell in love with this song
TheOthello43 1 year ago
wow, that's beautiful! I'm really impressed!
meyummybanana 1 year ago
I like this song a lot!!! Not gonna lie, this is one of your best songs. Do great things and don't ever change! Bring back the Lion's Mane!!! haha
GogogadgetYoh 1 year ago
Reverb nation . com is an amazing website for bands to sell music on and its free!!! :D
WaldoChief 1 year ago
Good job. Nice song. You need an iTunes account to sell/share your music. I would buy this one.
mikeqigong 1 year ago
Oh jana; perfection!
Sderoz07 1 year ago
hahahahaha dragon quest 2 xD its a video game. any i saw your post on craigslist!!! :D check out some of my vids if you wanna play together some time (:l
WaldoChief 1 year ago
beautiful voice, good singing, keep it up.
DustinTavella 1 year ago
Time to go out on a nerdy Dragon Quest 3 limb and name the male sailor Eric and the waiting lover Olivia. Lovely song and it suits the ghost ship part of Dragon Quest 3.
Beautiful voice, as always, I might add; just don't make a habit out of making morbid songs, ma'am~
Kencan72 1 year ago
@Kencan72 wth? 1.i have no idea what dragon quest is. 2. ive never written a song remotely like this before 3. if i have inspiration for something, im going to write it regardless of what style it is 4. if this song is not to your liking, then the solution is obvious: dont listen to it.
JanaMVerdes 1 year ago
@JanaMVerdes Oh my, coolage yourself, madame.
1)The Dragon Quest reference wasn't something I expected you to get and it wasn't meant to be offensive. The song lyrics just relate to a scene in the game, so calm down.
2)Just because someone says "Don't make a habit out of-" doesn't mean you've done it a lot in the past. I'm pretty much just saying that I love hearing you sing happy songs. Whatever the type of song you've got a lovely voice. Goodness, someone must have had a bad day.
Kencan72 1 year ago
@Kencan72 "don't make a habit out of" means you're basically telling me not to do more songs like this. not exactly the nicest thing to say to someone who has worked on a piece of music for a couple of days. so of course im gonna call you out on it.
& yes i had a bad day
JanaMVerdes 1 year ago 2
@JanaMVerdes ^_^ Then I should definitely pick my words more carefully; quite sorry. By no means did I say I didn't like the song; the fact that it fits and reminds me of an old game scene that I like means positive things. I find more pleasure in seeing you sing something happy and upbeat (that's just my personal + for you). Whether you're singing the "Cuppy Cake Song" or "Remembering Sunday" I'm loving your voice. So sing what you're feeling Ms. Lady.
>Seemed like a bad day for a few of us.
Kencan72 1 year ago
Loving it!
SimpleVeronica 1 year ago
Good song!
BB80MA 1 year ago
I actually like it better with "I thought it broke" It seems more like a goodbye than a loss.
yebba082089 1 year ago
Good one.
What was the inspiration for it?
MIKECNW 1 year ago
(sailed away,took my heart on that boat when u didnt come back i thought it broke) It would have been better if it said, when u didn't come back my heart broke. Just an opinion but is still a great song :)
04ray25number2 1 year ago
@04ray25number2 hahaha u know what? i thought the same thing after watching it. :P but thanks for the suggestion!
JanaMVerdes 1 year ago
@JanaMVerdes I actually like it the way it is. it can mean both the broken heart and boat... wonderful song Jana!
HaileISela 1 year ago
every time i listen to you , you make me want to sing. thank you. your awesome!
itscharlieeee 1 year ago
great acoustics in that room .... .
homercocktail3 1 year ago
No smile at the end. that stinks.
mrrandy1 1 year ago
Great job Jana! I like it!
GogogadgetYoh 1 year ago
Goosebumps (:
iLuckyluss 1 year ago
u have a beautiful voice :)
Eldiz1 1 year ago