It was fun seeing the costumes, and you did well at making a clear beginning, middle, and end with the narration. Might have been nice to hear from someone at the party, but this worked fine. I think it could have used a little more variety in photos--you have a lot of the midrange and couple wide shots...maybe some more detail shots? Overall, pretty good. Tells a fun story.
Nice!
CultClassicAngel 2 years ago
It was fun seeing the costumes, and you did well at making a clear beginning, middle, and end with the narration. Might have been nice to hear from someone at the party, but this worked fine. I think it could have used a little more variety in photos--you have a lot of the midrange and couple wide shots...maybe some more detail shots? Overall, pretty good. Tells a fun story.
14smeisner 2 years ago