I have to say I'm in agreement with Shave. Camera angles need work, more interesting shots need to be put into it. Some vechicle action would be nice. One thing that stands out in my head (not in the good way ), the spartan wearing pink armour. Pink kinda stands out a bit too much. Also I don't think you should rely on that to differentiate between the male and female characters. Just look at RVB, Tex is a good example.
Yea this was done before I made the plan for it, originally this was to have a narrator talking but the voiceactor never responded back again. And the spartan characters all have their own custom design on their armor because of their project.
ok listen this isnt "i hate you n00b!"criticism its constructive criticism: it had great potential but very very boring the camera angles were very weak i had no idea what point you were trying to get across it i just made no sense at all
I have to say I'm in agreement with Shave. Camera angles need work, more interesting shots need to be put into it. Some vechicle action would be nice. One thing that stands out in my head (not in the good way ), the spartan wearing pink armour. Pink kinda stands out a bit too much. Also I don't think you should rely on that to differentiate between the male and female characters. Just look at RVB, Tex is a good example.
OSAquilas 3 years ago
Yea this was done before I made the plan for it, originally this was to have a narrator talking but the voiceactor never responded back again. And the spartan characters all have their own custom design on their armor because of their project.
Guyver89 3 years ago
loved it 5/5
8lu3d3ath 3 years ago
ShaveTheStache 3 years ago
it will make sense when the narrated version is released I'm just waiting on the voice actor to send me the audio files
Guyver89 3 years ago
Wow... that is so cool... was some of that with Halo2 for Vista? Awesome. And YAY for pink Spartan with Purple insignia... whoo hoo!!
TaiChiKnees 3 years ago
nope halo 3
Guyver89 3 years ago
cool man nice job
RiotKingsProductions 3 years ago