The Marlowe Files 04: The Case of the Dubious Date

[Piecopter]

Lol isn't Marlowe off battlefield bad company 2?

[JayeMichael]

Well, the repeated exits worked well for the classic comedies. To bad this wasn't one of them, huh?

As to the bland--I'll have to try harder for the next one. Looking back, the ending could probably have been a quarter the length and still worked.

Thanks for the feedback.

[smcmorland]

Good but it ended a bit blandly - too much time wasted watching Sharon sitting doing nothing I felt. Also why was the running out the door in a panic bit repeated several times?

[JayeMichael]

Thanks. Unfortunately, it's been a while in coming and further episodes will continue to be sporatic.

He also looks at himself as a PI. Thus, working with the police is an unavoidable evil (especially when they want him for murder) rather than a first choice in actions to take.

[jhgf88]

Thanks, very funny. I love that he's trying to fit in as Sharon. He could have told the cops - sorry but I don't date cops. Lots of girls feel that way,