I thought your camera work was pretty good. Look at what you had to get across. You start with medium-low light in the bedroom scene, quickly change to a dark light environment in a cramped in claustraphobic look hallway and stairs chase scene, then move to bright daylight outside. You used several different perspectives for each scene and that's not easy working in a real house because it's so cramped. But you were able to carry it out and make it look unforced.
And your camera angles were a total mess...U have the nerve 2 criticise our angles...ures were atrosious < Yes, my spelling is bad. Well, this comment was left by the person who pulls apart every movie she watches...so pleze dont take full personal offence by any comments left by this user. Love Aimyyy
Lucky (and surprisingly) I thank you for the criticizem on this video. I believe this isn't one of my bests, it was rushed. Thank you, I hope it helps me in the future. One thing I would like to say is, is it possible to say the good things about the video when you criticizes. It does sound like I'm just trying to get praise (maybe because I am), but if you say the good points and bad points of a video it helps.
The reason for it is the director (i.e me) doesn't know what was good to repeat. He only nows whats bad, and might lose what is good in trying to improve the other points. It also might be more of a challenge for you, because I hear finding good points ain't easy. =P
I'm so glad I didn't take offense, except at the camera angles, because I love them so much.
People kickin' ure butt here mike XD!! You should have waited till thrusday and i would have been the monster for you...i have this awesome halloween mask!
you were filming with a home camera...o wait YOU WERE (which is so obv). Your sound was horrid, you had no music. your camera angles were a mess.... and you think you have the right to go around critising our, and other peoples video... ive never even seen you greenscreen because you dont even have one, and you say the our greenscreening is crap... you need to do something badly...
ok, lighting was a mess, there was no point in that video whatsoever you need some sort of letterbox to make it look good. you have no video treatment, which made it look like
Cool, another remake made!
pewmanfustudios 2 years ago
I thought your camera work was pretty good. Look at what you had to get across. You start with medium-low light in the bedroom scene, quickly change to a dark light environment in a cramped in claustraphobic look hallway and stairs chase scene, then move to bright daylight outside. You used several different perspectives for each scene and that's not easy working in a real house because it's so cramped. But you were able to carry it out and make it look unforced.
smokeysport2 3 years ago
Thank you for commenting. :)
STHsuperMovies07 3 years ago
The Fraggle one seems to have been taken down. I'd like to do my own re-imagining of this machinima style, if you don't mind.
themaltesebippy 3 years ago
Oh please do, I'd love to see it. Its amazing how many people are re-making this little video. Is it really that bad? :P
STHsuperMovies07 3 years ago
I don't think it was bad, on the contrary, I was inspired by it and also George's version.
themaltesebippy 3 years ago
And your camera angles were a total mess...U have the nerve 2 criticise our angles...ures were atrosious < Yes, my spelling is bad. Well, this comment was left by the person who pulls apart every movie she watches...so pleze dont take full personal offence by any comments left by this user. Love Aimyyy
RandomersRock 3 years ago
Lucky (and surprisingly) I thank you for the criticizem on this video. I believe this isn't one of my bests, it was rushed. Thank you, I hope it helps me in the future. One thing I would like to say is, is it possible to say the good things about the video when you criticizes. It does sound like I'm just trying to get praise (maybe because I am), but if you say the good points and bad points of a video it helps.
To Be continued...
STHsuperMovies07 3 years ago
The reason for it is the director (i.e me) doesn't know what was good to repeat. He only nows whats bad, and might lose what is good in trying to improve the other points. It also might be more of a challenge for you, because I hear finding good points ain't easy. =P
I'm so glad I didn't take offense, except at the camera angles, because I love them so much.
Thank you for your comment.
STHsuperMovies07 3 years ago
3)When you fall off your bed, you land on your back, in the next frame you are on your hands and knees.
4)You dont use the front door-which is the best route out.
5)You turned into a room at the front of your house and end up comeing through the back :S
To be continued...
RandomersRock 3 years ago
Ok, i always critizise things. Even hollywood blockbusters for their mistakes...hers my review of this video...
1)Who leaves their door open?
2)You walk past your bed...as we can see form the size of your room, and you still get it the side you walked past.
to be continued...
RandomersRock 3 years ago
I have to agree with Fraggle. Your hair is getting a little poofy.
But excellent work.
Cool stairs!
MyoclonicSlug 3 years ago
Yes there we go, ive posted the video i made as a responce, also i think george is making one 2 :D
VJGeorgeFraggle 3 years ago
lolz I wanna join in!!!!
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Um ja there was no point kthx
mrscienceandfriends 3 years ago
People kickin' ure butt here mike XD!! You should have waited till thrusday and i would have been the monster for you...i have this awesome halloween mask!
barbwireboy2 3 years ago
(Please Note: The Majority of My Comments are for pure LOLtastical Moments and are not to be taken Seriously.) :P
Directordelablonde 3 years ago
(No Offence Georgee) XD
Directordelablonde 3 years ago
1.Did You See Your Face In The Mirror Or Summit?? Is That What You Were Running From??
2.WHERE IT THE WORLD DID YOU GET THOSE GLASSES FROM... YOU LOOK LIKE A VERY BAD GEORGE ATKINSON IMPERSONATOR :S
3. What In The World Was That All About?
4.The Lighting Is Very Bad. Get A New Camera.
LOLterz.. Hope You Can Take Constructive Criticism!!
<3 Geee xx
Directordelablonde 3 years ago
you were filming with a home camera...o wait YOU WERE (which is so obv). Your sound was horrid, you had no music. your camera angles were a mess.... and you think you have the right to go around critising our, and other peoples video... ive never even seen you greenscreen because you dont even have one, and you say the our greenscreening is crap... you need to do something badly...
Also
GET A HAIR CUT
Lots of love
Fraggle :)
Fraggle01sfoc 3 years ago
ok, lighting was a mess, there was no point in that video whatsoever you need some sort of letterbox to make it look good. you have no video treatment, which made it look like
to be continued....
Fraggle01sfoc 3 years ago