its ok too basic for me. the flow is nice but the lyrics are too basic and dont stand out. the video needs major work too I would use an iphone app if you want to keep it simple without a major budget. this is just all my opinion though im not hating I think this is a great start if this is your first song/video.
This is a good rap man, your on point with you flow and voice attitude. I would give the vid another shot though, just think of yourself as an actor when you do it. Just put your attitude in, either way keep up the good work.
Tell me how people are disliking this?!? It's got bars, a hook, a nasty ass sample and that real rawness hip hop is missing these days. Subd, keep doing it
@cupcetch aight but my dude you should just put a picture for the video, something well taken and it'll make it seem as your music sounds better because that video is not doing it. Really good song though. You want free beats, just HMU.
EVERYONE GO DOWNLOAD THIS MANS MIXTAPE SHIT IS ON POINTTT, just finished listening to all the tracks and i gotta say i was surprised when i heard it. this mixtape is so sick much love bro keep up the work
@soulj7sli7 if you want the mixtape the link in on my channel page where it say website and make sure you subscribe when you go there 2 iight =-) peace
not bad, i was about to diss the shit out of you with some of these inboxes of corny ass rappers that come in twice a week. what type of recorder do you use?
anybody who says this doesn't go hard probably listens to lil wayne, drake, new eminem etc... just because you faggot candy asses don't understand hip hop doesn't mean this doesn't go hard fucking idiot. this stays true to the original hip hop sound. how are you going to fucking hate on someone for that!?
You're not cut out for this... you can keep trying but this ain't cutting it. Zero originality, zero creativity, zero feeling or emotion.. it's just some guy with a microphone. With practice you can get better at your delivery and execution but if you don't have the heart or passion for music you're doomed to be a parody of whatever it is you're trying to be. Try writing something that actually has some thought and meaning instead of just bullshit.
@Sigrafix its sad that your so small minded to attack a man for being creative, i hope you die a horrible death and btw the trk is dope and the video is sik!
It's sad that you're so insecure that you can't take criticism. This guy, whoever he is, sent me a message that read: "CHECK OUT MY VIDEO.. TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK, GOOD OR BAD JUST LET ME KNOW"
And so I did.
Everyone has their opinion, that is mine, but for you to wish "a horrible death" upon me over something so trivial just shows what kind of ignorant piece of shit you really are.
Anyway, at the end of the day, it's just advice, do whatever the fuck you want to do.
Why the fuck are you just sat there on an awful greenscreen effect
TheGFXUniverse 1 day ago in playlist Uploaded videos
NICE WORK BRO :) WOULDNT MIND COLLAB WITH YOU LATER ON IN THE FUTURE
KidpornHoe 1 week ago
beat goes in
SanDelly 1 week ago
Dove in a rooftop
Dobydoves 1 week ago
Its ok
LiamAndShaneINC 1 week ago
i am none of those ya love but i still enjoyed your work so i am talken to ya keep it tight.....
doriangreirose 1 week ago
nice
superpizzaguy123 2 weeks ago
youtube and the trolls, hahaha! I love how quick niggas are to hate just because they have no dreams and accepted failure. lol
boywonderhype 2 weeks ago
its ok too basic for me. the flow is nice but the lyrics are too basic and dont stand out. the video needs major work too I would use an iphone app if you want to keep it simple without a major budget. this is just all my opinion though im not hating I think this is a great start if this is your first song/video.
anakin82030 3 weeks ago
cool like it
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youngdice6 3 weeks ago
its ok still
Jermainemanify 3 weeks ago
talk to me now talk talk to me NOW!
sheptropremix 3 weeks ago
your style s sick your video on the other hand sucks a bigg fucking dick
gchvjknxl 3 weeks ago
your style just not me
kawanie70 3 weeks ago
sick!!!
twist1128 4 weeks ago
amazing!!!!!! keep up the work. The video was ok though. Excellent flow
DwyaneMVPWade 4 weeks ago
It's Hard but the Visiual effects are killer
bigbblandon 1 month ago
STOP GIVING HIM FALSE ENCOURAGEMENT IT'S ONLY HURTING HIM IN THE LONG RUN TELL HIM WHAT HE NEEDS TO IMPROVE ON ... i say fluency
hdpvart 1 month ago
ayy homeboy killed it, i slept on him
meadowzmobb08 1 month ago
This is a good rap man, your on point with you flow and voice attitude. I would give the vid another shot though, just think of yourself as an actor when you do it. Just put your attitude in, either way keep up the good work.
MoneyManMarkOfficial 1 month ago 2
nice
dimtrikk 1 month ago
not bad..swag or no swag just keep it up..
jeff2v 1 month ago
This is hella lame stop rappin
dorionte 1 month ago 3
keep working!!good job cant wait to see more
bdizzleboi 1 month ago
hella weak and i stay in the bay and will say that shit to your face.
sharkkeepit55 1 month ago
thats me in the vid
squfucs 1 month ago
dog you straight alls i got to say is get yo swag right an you straight
daGunner74 1 month ago
your not good at makingg videos lol but your good bro
DjSluaghter713 1 month ago
Yo this isn't bad i'm not gonna lie. You gotta step your video game up though. But the beat and lyrics is tough. I'll give props when it's due.
midnyte802 1 month ago
is it me or there's gonna be a battle between you and KRS?
HipHopMaintainer 1 month ago
nice old school beat..but your flow is tight !! keep up the good works...talk to me now,talk,talk,talk to me now..lol
a1b2c3787 1 month ago
ay this shit hard homieee !! lets collabooo !!
Traxx10492 1 month ago
yeah we need more of that ill rap. I got tracks for you to bro. Shit hard right here. This is in my favorites hotep
fortgreene31 1 month ago
you got something going..Keep cooking.
WETDREAMCARCLUB 1 month ago
not bad. more stage presence doe and itll be sick. and dawg.. get some real clothes haha
FlashyBandit 1 month ago
RAW video bro
XxGenesis619xX 1 month ago
This Great !
DiamondPrincessAnjie 1 month ago
thats classisc tho, just remake ur voice and stop makin videos LOL.
BlastaFable 1 month ago
Tell me how people are disliking this?!? It's got bars, a hook, a nasty ass sample and that real rawness hip hop is missing these days. Subd, keep doing it
hryniowski08 1 month ago
sick nasty flow, nas feelin to it. keep it flowin
MrSoulworldwide 1 month ago
shits kewl. keep doin what u doin n ima sub bcause u got some talent
1MrSEXY1 1 month ago
what's the beat called. this shit is good.
THEWAVEMODIFIERE 1 month ago
cool :D
hisgonish1212 1 month ago
u should sign me
liltwonne763 1 month ago
Subscribe to me and send your email so I can send you beats
AMTRAKZ 1 month ago
Pretty good man!
CalderonErnie 1 month ago
- ur flow and verses is sik wit it u koo-
umadghetto98 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
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umadghetto98 1 month ago
You can ride to this. The beat reminds of Talib Kweli and Common.
BooBooDooDoo 1 month ago
Nice
BooBooDooDoo 1 month ago
@BooBooDooDoo thanks make sure you subscribe
cupcetch 1 month ago
not bad
vinsanity227 1 month ago
@vinsanity227 thanks for checking it out make sure you subscribe
cupcetch 1 month ago
good shit go check mine out Young Monee-Gucci Gucci
MillionareMonee 1 month ago
@MillionareMonee i will check t out mkae sure you subscribe iigt =-)
cupcetch 1 month ago
dope!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2getmoneyproduction3 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
Video is bad :P But I would definently play this as background music for a video.
BradyDeuce 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
bad
BearJordans 1 month ago
nice vid:) like it
lordAngelsssz 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
nice rap
youngdro33 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
I like the beat
cherishheart1 1 month ago
@cherishheart1 thansk for checking it out make sure you sub and hit that like button iight peace
cupcetch 1 month ago
honestly the song is koo!!!!!!!!! but i dont really care for the video quality!!!!!!!!!! but props for doing something different
JuiceGassNation 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
i like it :), btw did you know you sound english when you say "talk"
MzKGeneration 1 month ago
@MzKGeneration thanks for checkin it out make sure you subscribe
cupcetch 1 month ago
u got a nice flow homie keep it up, check out my group(Blak Gangster Entertaiment) on my page and tell me what u think
BGE88 1 month ago
@BGE88 make sure you subscribe i will do the same
cupcetch 1 month ago
i like it your good at this
NikiWavez23 1 month ago
@NikiWavez23 thanks for checkin it out make sure you subscribe ok takes agian =-)
cupcetch 1 month ago
can somebody explain to me how i ended up here???
DDDDDarkSideBeats 1 month ago
YOUR GOOOD :)
5611bubu 1 month ago
@5611bubu thansk a make sure you subscribe and tell your friends =-()
cupcetch 1 month ago
not bad, youll get there!!
knockout755 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
Nice
Themerl6969 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
Scary at start dude.
Steve82798 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
its alright actually the hook was a lil weak -constructive criticism-- you can go big making good chorus and hooks just a thought
lilwynn24 1 month ago
@lilwynn24 thanks for the advicemake sure yousubscrihbe iight =-)
cupcetch 1 month ago
Lyrical sh-t bro, don't included real rappers unless it a sweet pun or punch lines, which you didn't really do
Soccerfanj 1 month ago
it was good
MegaMoses14 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
Nice
2500dodge1 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
Good song. Horrible Video
RalfiEDB 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
@cupcetch aight but my dude you should just put a picture for the video, something well taken and it'll make it seem as your music sounds better because that video is not doing it. Really good song though. You want free beats, just HMU.
RalfiEDB 1 month ago
yEP, vid is bad, but song is sweet ;) peace
jjjuchasss 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Your flows pretty good but that videos trippy mane"
zane505135 1 month ago
Your flow is pretty smooth but the videos pretty Trippy Mane
zane505135 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
i likes dat.....creative
cookajuan 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
Nice bro, im following every song your realise ;)
Off to tell this to my friends :D
fanwwe99 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
Great bars keep it goin we should colab
AMTRAKZ 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
I Approve
VegaKnowsViTo 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
This was very good, everyone make sure to check me out also! :) #KingApproved!
KingReveal 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
nice work keep it up
jnharri11 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
Nice flow... alright chorus... good song.
Product933 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
str8 up dis nice homie....i liked
muphsa1000 1 month ago
ill
nevahmind 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
nice nice
RiptheKidd 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
I don't like the video but good
TheCmart12 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
nice
DPcountsMONEY 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
EVERYONE GO DOWNLOAD THIS MANS MIXTAPE SHIT IS ON POINTTT, just finished listening to all the tracks and i gotta say i was surprised when i heard it. this mixtape is so sick much love bro keep up the work
djmp1 1 month ago 2
@djmp1 thanks for checking out the mixtape one love
cupcetch 1 month ago
@djmp1 make sure you subscribe 2 =-)
cupcetch 1 month ago
niice iight lol
breekwhal 1 month ago
niice video! dont really like rap but i like some of the lyrics..."look like you got your dick caught in your zipper" lmfao
JungleFeverNight 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
Alright
marcain123 1 month ago
haha loving th video
fatsbreakdown 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
This Is Sick, lol.. Goood Job ! ( :
CookiesnCream386 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
i like the lyricsmand the beat a lot but the vid doesnt really make sense
wolfgangsoldier 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
nice work bruh
death5092 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
THIS SHIT IS REAL!!!!
2000MOBBIN 1 month ago
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2000MOBBIN 1 month ago
good music but vids kinda dumm
NorthSkateEvo 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
A lyrical heavy hitter with a unique flow. I can't wait to hear your mixtape .....
soulj7sli7 1 month ago
@soulj7sli7 if you want the mixtape the link in on my channel page where it say website and make sure you subscribe when you go there 2 iight =-) peace
cupcetch 1 month ago
dis some 90s type shit step yo game up
Mellox420 1 month ago
i like this
TheFlichika 1 month ago
damn, man I feel it!!!
awesome stuff ;)
MsShadowica 1 month ago
not bad, i was about to diss the shit out of you with some of these inboxes of corny ass rappers that come in twice a week. what type of recorder do you use?
Hyper131 1 month ago
nice work! very creative ;)
yurHighhNess408 1 month ago
@yurHighhNess408 thanks make sure you hit that like button on the video and subscribe if you havent already peace
cupcetch 1 month ago
Aight ND is back and popping! Joint is Fire ya heard! keep banging out hits, we out here listening! and oh yeah F them haters!!!!!!
dukesara 1 month ago
@dukesara thanks for the love =-)
cupcetch 1 month ago
anybody who says this doesn't go hard probably listens to lil wayne, drake, new eminem etc... just because you faggot candy asses don't understand hip hop doesn't mean this doesn't go hard fucking idiot. this stays true to the original hip hop sound. how are you going to fucking hate on someone for that!?
thatsfornoobs 1 month ago
illlllllest beat
thatsfornoobs 1 month ago
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cupcetch 1 month ago
@cupcetch done man ;p
thatsfornoobs 1 month ago
lol
209supermario 1 month ago
ma niggeh straight up this dont go hard
rizzybitch 1 month ago
this kcooo
mxsoysauce23 1 month ago
@mxsoysauce23 tahnsk for checkin it out make sure you like the video iight =-) that means click that like button
cupcetch 1 month ago
uh hell no
MsSexy101xoxo 1 month ago
This entire song/video is one big cliche.
You're not cut out for this... you can keep trying but this ain't cutting it. Zero originality, zero creativity, zero feeling or emotion.. it's just some guy with a microphone. With practice you can get better at your delivery and execution but if you don't have the heart or passion for music you're doomed to be a parody of whatever it is you're trying to be. Try writing something that actually has some thought and meaning instead of just bullshit.
Sigrafix 1 month ago
@Sigrafix its sad that your so small minded to attack a man for being creative, i hope you die a horrible death and btw the trk is dope and the video is sik!
skitzos314 1 month ago
@skitzos314
It's sad that you're so insecure that you can't take criticism. This guy, whoever he is, sent me a message that read: "CHECK OUT MY VIDEO.. TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK, GOOD OR BAD JUST LET ME KNOW"
And so I did.
Everyone has their opinion, that is mine, but for you to wish "a horrible death" upon me over something so trivial just shows what kind of ignorant piece of shit you really are.
Anyway, at the end of the day, it's just advice, do whatever the fuck you want to do.
Sigrafix 1 month ago
LOL
HeyitsBri97 1 month ago
@HeyitsBri97 hope that lol means you liked it and are going to subscribe =-)
cupcetch 1 month ago
nice
sonnyheymans 1 month ago
@sonnyheymans thanks for the love make sure you subscribe iight =-)