TubeWrite: Haiku * 2

[startoverdoitagain]

puppy

is that a pitcher of reid ?

[PuppyZwolle]

*Nods*

Yup it is.

[startoverdoitagain]

ok then

[MsWriteNow]

I like the video

it's clean, concise and cool

about me not true.

[PuppyZwolle]

It's true it's untrue

It was never about you

It's about bitching

<3

[jantheempress]

LOL I agree with cooksterz! Great job PuppyZ!

[PuppyZwolle]

The Jester is right?

For her kind words and insight

I thank the empress

[jantheempress]

the Empress is thankful

in return

glowing mildly

like firelies

orange yellow whirling wind

[cooksterz]

The arts are for loving

The man is not

Unless the woman is willing.

LOL :D Nice one

[PuppyZwolle]

So is yours. So sweet.

I love it when you take time

so I have a read.

[PuppyZwolle]

That IS a haiku.

So what you know about it

you have shown today.

[garypetersjr]

Take five syllables

The middle line is Seven

Then five more... Haiku!

[jaredknightcom]

YES!!! he really does support the arts!

[PuppyZwolle]

And he can know that

I visit him every day

to place a feather

[garypetersjr]

This is my comment

Haiku is fine for YouTube

But more corn, please.

[PuppyZwolle]

One corn for the man

Or would you like the whole cob?

You can't get enough.

[garypetersjr]

I am so honored

You offer me yummy corn

I say to you, "Shucks."

[ukp42]

Buson, Yosa. (1716-84).

At the over-matured sushi,

The Master

Is full of regret.

Pressing Sushi;

After a while,

A lonely feeling

A whale!

Down it goes, and more and more

up goes its t

[PuppyZwolle]

I have this picture

It formed in my head just now

of masses sushi.

I like a haiku

but to many is a crime

like to much sushi.

[ukp42]

great video much joy

entertain the mass of men

not forget women! =)

[PuppyZwolle]

Forgetting a male?

That I can. But a female?

Always on my mind

[dogpatchdebbie]

love your Haiku!

Excellent work Puppy:)

[PuppyZwolle]

Domo arigatto

[PuppyZwolle]

Heh heh, That was not even an I.

It was #1 from the list. :)

Can't read my own handwriting.

Thank the God of virtuality for the keyboard.

[PuppyZwolle]

A tribute is what

the true king deserves

Not this flawed haiku.

[PuppyZwolle]

The ear infection

I suffered the other day

is doing OK.

[PuppyZwolle]

When the spirit moves

I can feel my heart speaking

Only takes some peace.

[PuppyZwolle]

W00t!!

(that's poet speak for; thank you)