I'm slowly editing the next chapter right now while I wait for the rest of the lines to come in. I'm anticipating it should be out before Thanksgiving, but I'm the main seamstress for a production of Macbeth and it's getting the better of me X_X
Forgot to mention it earlier, but LOTE (Line of the Episode) goes to trolli as Scilla, the "I can't eat cock" line caused me to go into a drink spewing fit of laughter.
Everyone was awesome. dancergirl was fantastic as Bruche, and happygolucky got the perfect level of "horrible bitch" needed for Vermisse O. But god, who was that talentless hack who played Zizi and Keng? What a loser that guy was. ;)
I read through the whole script when you sent it to me, Aderu, but hearing it with the voices, and sounds, and music REALLY brings it to life, and it's awesome to wintess. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Always love listening to the ending bloopers, the cast sounds like they have a lot of fun
Poor little Tinny, Romeïn really is an asshole. Great job with the story, it's great, I was waiting to hear part two for so long. I can't wait until they actually build there plane.
Yay! It's up! I love this chapter. dancergirl and december were wonderful as Mme Bruche and Marin, respectively. Loved the scenes in the theatre. XD And happygolucky, you have, yet again, played the conniving little bitch. XD Love it. Just be careful not to get type cast! :o
The story's really pulling me in. To read it is one thing, to hear everyone in their parts is another. It's wonderful.^^
Ah... bloopers. they never cease to amuse me. XD Great job Aderu! Keep it up!
It's getting good!I'm really glad you did this!;D Hope there's more great accomplishments to come of you..
ZidanelovesGarnet1 2 years ago
great job. i really really love this story. can't wait for the next chapter.
RonRonsADork 2 years ago
when will more come out
GarnetsLostRefrain 2 years ago
I'm slowly editing the next chapter right now while I wait for the rest of the lines to come in. I'm anticipating it should be out before Thanksgiving, but I'm the main seamstress for a production of Macbeth and it's getting the better of me X_X
AderuMoro 2 years ago
btw its me princessgarnetxvi LOL
and yaaay
GarnetsLostRefrain 2 years ago
Such an epic ending. Well done, once again. This was very enjoyable.
MagonBarca 2 years ago
The litte girl is so brave! I think she so cool. One who fights back nasty big boy... I like romain... though I can empathize with timi.
=) =) =)
Emoyott 2 years ago
I like that insult!! "elbow greese", that was funny! it had a ring! xp
Emoyott 2 years ago
Awesome chapter good job everyone! :D Yes Romein,you ARE INDEED an asshole :D Poor Tinny,I feel sorry for her :(
Riku91 2 years ago
Wow. I'd just straight up murder her brother!
Linlee1000 2 years ago
Huh? o.o Oh wait... am I in the next one? I thought the lines I submitted were for this chapter. xD My mistake, hoho
GREAT job everyone. :3
Calenthedestroyer 2 years ago
The mistakes ... i mean the worng scripts are the AWESOME xD
SamioDaynilloAnnie 2 years ago
OMG...
you had a big story there...
I'm loving...
SciEdy should be together!!!
Go to hell her brother Ò.ó9
SamioDaynilloAnnie 2 years ago
this was really entertaining, the descriptions are so vivid
MichaelBalena 2 years ago
Forgot to mention it earlier, but LOTE (Line of the Episode) goes to trolli as Scilla, the "I can't eat cock" line caused me to go into a drink spewing fit of laughter.
Tacklevines 2 years ago
Ahaha, I love Clint Eastwood.
And Romein is still going to be an asshole.
I think whoever did Tinny's part did a good job capturing how children can inflate conflict enormously, and avidly express their own feelings.
Hbh128 2 years ago
WHEEEE! SO AWESOME! I can't wait for the next chapter!
XD Yes, Romain, you ARE an asshole.
SoraLover1994 2 years ago
Moar, And Ill continue to spell wrong until you meet my demands. Also, the next chapter needs more apple sauce. >.>
Other than that, these 2 chapters have been sooo much fun.
LogicalMadness 2 years ago
yay he's still an asshole XD
Fujikaya 2 years ago
Everyone was awesome. dancergirl was fantastic as Bruche, and happygolucky got the perfect level of "horrible bitch" needed for Vermisse O. But god, who was that talentless hack who played Zizi and Keng? What a loser that guy was. ;)
I read through the whole script when you sent it to me, Aderu, but hearing it with the voices, and sounds, and music REALLY brings it to life, and it's awesome to wintess. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Tacklevines 2 years ago 2
I loved this chapter! It was amazing, and the bloopers were hilarious!!
Keep up the good work everyone!!
dancergirl 2 years ago
lovely! i can't wait for the next chapter!
ScarletHue 2 years ago
AAAA AMAZING!!!
FinalFantasyNippon3 2 years ago
Always love listening to the ending bloopers, the cast sounds like they have a lot of fun
Poor little Tinny, Romeïn really is an asshole. Great job with the story, it's great, I was waiting to hear part two for so long. I can't wait until they actually build there plane.
DeusMarionette 2 years ago 4
Such a nice ending, nice sound effects and I liked how the characters interact with each other, you AderuMoro are the embodiment of literature ^_^
WolfsbaneRevolution 2 years ago
Yay! It's up! I love this chapter. dancergirl and december were wonderful as Mme Bruche and Marin, respectively. Loved the scenes in the theatre. XD And happygolucky, you have, yet again, played the conniving little bitch. XD Love it. Just be careful not to get type cast! :o
The story's really pulling me in. To read it is one thing, to hear everyone in their parts is another. It's wonderful.^^
Ah... bloopers. they never cease to amuse me. XD Great job Aderu! Keep it up!
JCTrance19 2 years ago 7
Hehehe, Sarit's typecasting is kind of my fault XD Vermisse's original voice actor never replied to me, so... *hums innocently*
AderuMoro 2 years ago