dat jet dude, shud b a voice actor and he wud b a really good villain in live action, n dat Franky guy would b a tough right hand man(he's so quiet ) the dialogue is decent "ur betrayal will b ur death" lovd it. my god the music u picd is intense. sory 2 say but u did'nt live up 2 the music the choreography was slow n i didnt feel the impact. but i no u dudes will improve. this is ur 1st video n for that i think it was a good start.
The only thing I liked about this video was the narrator at the beginning. Sounds like the tenchu announcer. Anyways, I was expecting the choreography to be better but I was dissapointed. It was meh...
this is pathetic, i've seen some good amateur videos but not as horrible and irritating as this.... bad acting (retarded and not even close to convincing...) ... bad lighting (some scenes are sooo dark...) .... bad fighting choreography (what the hell.. a high school fist fight was even more fun to see than this....)... ridiculously retarded(yes, i really have to say this again..) plot........ i expected much...
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dude im sorry i know i cant expect much from ppl who dunno anything about making films but damn ive seen better choreographies from other amature film artist atleast do put more effort in those fight scenes they look so fake its not even funny
Try and put more effort into your comments... Use periods and try to form sentences next time. I guess I shouldn't expect much from someone who doesn't capitalize their I's.
choreography is not great, sorry to say, and the acting needs a lot of work. I actually like the ninja's voice. lol it's different. The filming is good, I like it. Don't know what tone you guys are trying to aim for, but it's seems like a serious kinda fictional story with the scenes being kinda comedy.
Oh, could I make a recommendation? For the fight scenes, make it seem like there is more contact being made. If you're actors have a lot of control, you can actually make physical contact as long as the person receiving the technique can flow in accordance with the technique itself- if you can train the actors in such, then you can pull off some KICKASS choreography!
I'm upset GRAND MASTERS I'm upset you didn't let me in on this GOODNESS!! Ya'll better call me up on the next one LOL!! I can help in the fight scenes you know I got the skills F. Yagami, JET 3000.
This movie rules..The camera angles..Yagami Fight scene..just Epic! Great job with the Camera Tony! Ha ha ha ha...I like Cobra Commander voice for Sho..Nice voice acting to..Ha ha ha..Too fucking good. Congrats to all involved.
A decent short flick. You need to have that girl play a bigger part- she's sexy + they say sex sells. In the sequel, make her have a much bigger role as a femme fatale or something... now that would be innovative (like she's secretly a kunoichi!)
These guys are very unconvincing screen fighters
squirilman009 6 months ago
was this suppose to be a comedy, though its not bad.
squirilman009 1 year ago
ahhh i love a good tekken entrance
Ubekla 1 year ago
oh shiit i didnt know yagami was in the movie..i am going to get em
BTrapster 1 year ago
Nicely done.
xonythebillygoat 1 year ago
OMG. This is f&cking great dude! This reminds me of the Tekken.. I don't know why.. Well, I love it, I faved and gave it 5 stars =)
KUSkaraokemeester 2 years ago 2
THE ACTING IS TERRIBLE!
THE STORY DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE!
and martial arts action is below average.
Overall It's so bad, that I actually like it.
Brenman999 2 years ago
dat jet dude, shud b a voice actor and he wud b a really good villain in live action, n dat Franky guy would b a tough right hand man(he's so quiet ) the dialogue is decent "ur betrayal will b ur death" lovd it. my god the music u picd is intense. sory 2 say but u did'nt live up 2 the music the choreography was slow n i didnt feel the impact. but i no u dudes will improve. this is ur 1st video n for that i think it was a good start.
vegavegeta84 2 years ago
why does sho sound like the Cobra Commander from G.I Joe?
BoricuaAjax 2 years ago
You just complimented the awesome voice acting of Jet3000... Heh heh.
To answer your question... NOBODY KNOWS. Hah.
FightersGeneration1 2 years ago
Dragon dude got owned. lol
Issun216 2 years ago
Wow, watching for he second time I'm really appreciating Yagami and Jet's performance.
The sequel should feature more of them :)
Really love Yagami's Turn Kick into low kick. Shame about choreography, it loses momentum too quickly. Wishing you all the best of luck in the sequel!
Isomnophilia 2 years ago 3
awesome check you out yagami kickin butt like we all know you can lol
NYClolita 2 years ago
REDEMPTION!!!!!!! nice job TFG crew.
crazycrazycrazyadam 2 years ago 3
this is a god video, nice music, good over all direction. well done, good god video.
vegavegeta84 2 years ago
love the intro, reminds me of tekken 4
Fr0stilcfr0LilcS 2 years ago
Good video. Sequel will be banging!!
jamhahaha 2 years ago 4
It turned out great! Love it
Blizzardskizzurb 2 years ago 2
Over 3000 hits tony!! Congrats!
Jet3000 2 years ago
needs some special effects.and better lighting and backgrounds.
ricardoredway 2 years ago
The only thing I liked about this video was the narrator at the beginning. Sounds like the tenchu announcer. Anyways, I was expecting the choreography to be better but I was dissapointed. It was meh...
shiranui 2 years ago
I sound like the Tenchu announcer, eh? haha...thanks :)
Jet3000 2 years ago
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i was even surprised to finish the whole thing while laughning my ass out... and a sequel? come on man... seriously?
painstalker00 2 years ago
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this is pathetic, i've seen some good amateur videos but not as horrible and irritating as this.... bad acting (retarded and not even close to convincing...) ... bad lighting (some scenes are sooo dark...) .... bad fighting choreography (what the hell.. a high school fist fight was even more fun to see than this....)... ridiculously retarded(yes, i really have to say this again..) plot........ i expected much...
painstalker00 2 years ago
Not bad. Not bad at all. Sequel!!! BTW would anyone happen to know what japanese location 0:07 is in? Please tell me!!!
RayDubMusic 2 years ago
GREAT VID!
SOLIDOLDSNAKE1 2 years ago
The choreography and acting could have been better, but I really enjoyed this nonetheless. Hope to see the sequel.
sixsicksixes 2 years ago 2
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dude im sorry i know i cant expect much from ppl who dunno anything about making films but damn ive seen better choreographies from other amature film artist atleast do put more effort in those fight scenes they look so fake its not even funny
utumaru 2 years ago
Try and put more effort into your comments... Use periods and try to form sentences next time. I guess I shouldn't expect much from someone who doesn't capitalize their I's.
FightersGeneration1 2 years ago 4
Or know how to spell for that matter. haha
squirtlepower 2 years ago 2
why would they need him to retrieve blueprints to their own hideout ???
lurkzie 2 years ago
Maybe they were moving their base of operations to avoid being caught by the authorities.
StriderReborn 2 years ago
choreography is not great, sorry to say, and the acting needs a lot of work. I actually like the ninja's voice. lol it's different. The filming is good, I like it. Don't know what tone you guys are trying to aim for, but it's seems like a serious kinda fictional story with the scenes being kinda comedy.
Keep it up, always like short movies.
pcmacro 2 years ago 2
First thing that came to mind was either Final Fight or Street of Rage. This was pretty good. Also cool to see FYagami in it too.
KMV90 2 years ago 2
reminds me of streets of rage ^_^
breaktube 2 years ago
Thats Frankie Yagami alright.
DevinHades 2 years ago
cool vid! hi mr. yagami!!
sasukeisdbest 2 years ago
that ninja voice is funny as hell
Zukents 2 years ago 2
Chris Latta voice...well, trying at least... haha
Jet3000 2 years ago
I enjoyed everything except the voice acting.
Rattlehead415 2 years ago
Oh, could I make a recommendation? For the fight scenes, make it seem like there is more contact being made. If you're actors have a lot of control, you can actually make physical contact as long as the person receiving the technique can flow in accordance with the technique itself- if you can train the actors in such, then you can pull off some KICKASS choreography!
Just some food for thought...
thosestupidkids1 2 years ago
Thanks, will remember that for next time!
Jet3000 2 years ago
Word
thosestupidkids1 2 years ago
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thosestupidkids1 2 years ago
Dark Dragon...Next film will be EPIC. No deadlines and more time to choreograph...and you plus Ron Kazama are slated to be in it, too.....DORYA!!!
Jet3000 2 years ago
I'm upset GRAND MASTERS I'm upset you didn't let me in on this GOODNESS!! Ya'll better call me up on the next one LOL!! I can help in the fight scenes you know I got the skills F. Yagami, JET 3000.
darkdragon99 2 years ago
this is reallly good hey isnt yagami from tfg in this 5 starz
shinobi300 2 years ago
REDEMPTION!!!!!!!!!!
lol I'm totally ready for a sequel now. Though I would say work on the lighting of the especially dark scenes! Otherwise it was a cool watch!
EbbFlowe 2 years ago
Haha, nice video, the camera angles are awesome xD
ZeroDragon 2 years ago
great video 5 stars!!
striderhiryu22 2 years ago
You can be proud of this video, but even more proud of your friends. Pay them some beers.
jacarto 2 years ago 2
did you see that!? he sidestepped that claw!
kongchho 2 years ago 2
I saw... That was a good sidestep. Tekken 5 style.
FightersGeneration1 2 years ago
YAY TONY!
gfhrsbsgroupie 2 years ago
Even after three years, the intro script holds up...nice one!
BCob66 2 years ago
This movie rules..The camera angles..Yagami Fight scene..just Epic! Great job with the Camera Tony! Ha ha ha ha...I like Cobra Commander voice for Sho..Nice voice acting to..Ha ha ha..Too fucking good. Congrats to all involved.
judodarkfist 2 years ago 3
Hey! This was awesome! xD Jet and Yagami definitely showed their training here. Great movie!
QuietCannon 2 years ago 2
Don't misunderstand me It's a cool film but does Sho really have to sound like Cobra Commander? lol
StriderReborn 2 years ago
I did 2 takes for the voices..One was 'normal' ninja voice...then Tony requested I read the lines again....in Starscream Voice...hahaha I tried...
Jet3000 2 years ago
Well Interestingly enough the guy who did the voice of Starscream in the original Cartoon Also did Cobra Commander's voice too. haha
StriderReborn 2 years ago
A decent short flick. You need to have that girl play a bigger part- she's sexy + they say sex sells. In the sequel, make her have a much bigger role as a femme fatale or something... now that would be innovative (like she's secretly a kunoichi!)
thosestupidkids1 2 years ago 5
THe sequel will have plenty of hot girls in it...I promise!
Jet3000 2 years ago 6
hahaha i love captain dragon!! :)
Almostazn12 2 years ago 5
I got my laugh on. Great artwork. 5
Anathema2 2 years ago 3
Oh there were many many laughs! Thanks! Everyone did an awesome job... Nice work TOny!
Jet3000 2 years ago 5