that was good.. But The Klingons have a hard time saying sorry to anything. But ofc comannder warfs time ther ewas some,,, Must be those Duross on the high counsil inn the Klingon EMpire them rude @#$%^#!@#$#@. . to bad the ship could not go to san fransico station from NX-01 times or even mars base. hmm I like it good story..
WELL DONE! This was the best looking original serious star trek short I've seen. I enjoyed the nacelle blowing off even though it probably would have needed to sustain more damage before it would detach.
GREAT job on the ships, they looked spectacular. Awesome Battle scenes. Nice Pan on the transporter scene. It was a good shot.
Some of the star trek consistencies we're off about ship strengths and the intro was too long but all things considered, it's great.
"Five five two mark one" does not exist in the navigational system of a starship. The highest bearing a man could give would be "three five nine mark five nije" ;) Although fictional Star Trek does have a lot of real tecnical background behind it ;) For effort this video gets 5/5 but since I am a hard core Trekkie I can't forgive inaccuracies and a bit of "lets just get done with the job" feeling I get while watching this video. Therefore 4/5 from me.
1) A Klingon bird-of-prey, even one contemporaneous to the Galaxy-class ship shown here, is not in the same leauge as a Galaxy-class vessel. A Galaxy-class ship outguns her six ways from Sunday, and twice on Monday.
2) The moment the captain ordered red alert, the shields would have been raised. Or they should have been, anyways. How that first Klingon volley impacted the Galaxy's hull and not the ship's shields is beyond me.
Nice...wish I could animate stuff anywhere near as good as this. Best I can do is draw stick figures on sheets of paper and flip them...even then it doesn't look good.
The only way the bird of prey would have had such effect on the challenger is with its shields down. They were caught by surprise though. Still the Galaxy class starship far mower powerful than the bird of prey.
not a bad episode for a fan series, don't give them so much grief, for their voice acting, like i said, not bad for a fan series, it is weird that a galaxy class ship would be doing out there to repair a communications relay, or whatever it was...
I think we're also forgetting the timeframe when this was done. 2001.
Technology was a lot different 7 years ago. So were the folks used in the series (the sheer concept of voice acting via the Internet was a new phenomenon).
At least three of the folks here have gone on to do major voiceover work. We all sucked starting out. =-)
BTW: Remember when the description of the clips stated that it's "amusingly trek'ish and amateur" then that's what you're going to get.
Why send a Galaxy battleship on this assignment? Are there no survey ships or Runabouts? The voice acting was poor at best, there were spelling errors in the captions and grammer errors. The models were of poor quality even considering the time of this things creation, especially the BoP. The music was ripped and didn't fit the scenes well and wasn't cut together well. The BoP seemed to fire torps from its disruptors and the sheild generator is on top of the center impulse unit. Awful crap.
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Wow your federation ship SUX. An all human crew? The Federation insignia is wrong. The voice acting is really bad. Your film needs work... better yet burn it.
well this is so ovious challengers sheild is a bubble and the ship is made of tin foil dude u are so dumb how does a 50 year old bird of prey match to a galaxy class star ship if u dount know wack about star trek then stay away please
And (not directed toward you) no one seeks to "investigate the reason why this happened." They investigate events, causes, etc., and discover reasons.
Well, its an odd story. The person who headed this project ended up doing more live action directing. As for the talent, one of them began the VAA, which is one of the largest boards for voice acting (amateur voice acting in particular) on the 'net. I ended up going to pro route and continue to do so. I have no clue what happened to the rest of the cast.
yeah, yeah, yeah... The idea was to test the storyboard, not adhere to ST canon. Though without shields the damage would have been pretty significant. =-P
this Is BULLSHIT!!!
peter555777444 5 months ago
I have to applaud the editing and the pace of the story. It's good work and you can see a lot of hard work went into it.
hughesms 8 months ago
Good job, but i have to say, your Captain and first officer...what are they? Zombies??? They really need to get some more sun... or Brains!
UFCaveman 10 months ago
The commander has the best voice acting abilities!
knasroll 1 year ago
"Charging there Torpedo bay?" What.
axer03 1 year ago
Nice post, thanks, but I have a question, why does every engineer in starfleet have a scottish accent?
lcmorgan1221 1 year ago
this is pretty cool... for a fan made series
iBorg13 1 year ago
Interesting video for the most part. Though was it just me or did it look like the "Captain" was wearing mascara?... oO
Plus he looked a little too young to be Captain.
pettdog78 1 year ago
that was good.. But The Klingons have a hard time saying sorry to anything. But ofc comannder warfs time ther ewas some,,, Must be those Duross on the high counsil inn the Klingon EMpire them rude @#$%^#!@#$#@. . to bad the ship could not go to san fransico station from NX-01 times or even mars base. hmm I like it good story..
darian1968 2 years ago
brilliant
freid001 2 years ago
Star Trek, the Original Series, would have killed for special effects like these. ;-)
Nice job !
Idefilms 2 years ago
WELL DONE! This was the best looking original serious star trek short I've seen. I enjoyed the nacelle blowing off even though it probably would have needed to sustain more damage before it would detach.
GREAT job on the ships, they looked spectacular. Awesome Battle scenes. Nice Pan on the transporter scene. It was a good shot.
Some of the star trek consistencies we're off about ship strengths and the intro was too long but all things considered, it's great.
Would love to see a part 2
kennethgallop 2 years ago 2
has to be one of best videos i have ever seen a bit slow thow but othere wise best ever.
fuzzyrock78 2 years ago
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Lame get a fkn life.
boxa1500 2 years ago
Not bad seemed kind of slow motionish
flyguyus 2 years ago 3
"Five five two mark one" does not exist in the navigational system of a starship. The highest bearing a man could give would be "three five nine mark five nije" ;) Although fictional Star Trek does have a lot of real tecnical background behind it ;) For effort this video gets 5/5 but since I am a hard core Trekkie I can't forgive inaccuracies and a bit of "lets just get done with the job" feeling I get while watching this video. Therefore 4/5 from me.
holodock 3 years ago 5
That was just stupid. Let me point out why:
1) A Klingon bird-of-prey, even one contemporaneous to the Galaxy-class ship shown here, is not in the same leauge as a Galaxy-class vessel. A Galaxy-class ship outguns her six ways from Sunday, and twice on Monday.
2) The moment the captain ordered red alert, the shields would have been raised. Or they should have been, anyways. How that first Klingon volley impacted the Galaxy's hull and not the ship's shields is beyond me.
FuckYouLetMeLogIn 3 years ago
better vocab usage like "we are also here to asertain why it has been adrift for the past 3 days"
blowtup 3 years ago
Nice...wish I could animate stuff anywhere near as good as this. Best I can do is draw stick figures on sheets of paper and flip them...even then it doesn't look good.
lisento 3 years ago 2
The only way the bird of prey would have had such effect on the challenger is with its shields down. They were caught by surprise though. Still the Galaxy class starship far mower powerful than the bird of prey.
jkeelsnc 3 years ago
this is one of my favorite videos
TrekkieAtlantis 3 years ago
Nice!!!!
I look forward to the next episodes
gonereallyfunny 3 years ago
Great display of animation talent, it's not perfect but what is. You deserve a lot more credit than the bad comments you have on your video.
thechekov1701 3 years ago
not a bad episode for a fan series, don't give them so much grief, for their voice acting, like i said, not bad for a fan series, it is weird that a galaxy class ship would be doing out there to repair a communications relay, or whatever it was...
Jshaw71 3 years ago
I think we're also forgetting the timeframe when this was done. 2001.
Technology was a lot different 7 years ago. So were the folks used in the series (the sheer concept of voice acting via the Internet was a new phenomenon).
At least three of the folks here have gone on to do major voiceover work. We all sucked starting out. =-)
BTW: Remember when the description of the clips stated that it's "amusingly trek'ish and amateur" then that's what you're going to get.
Yoda117 3 years ago
One word: ...
AdmiralQuince 3 years ago
Shitty voice acting.
hopkins88 3 years ago
stfu the lot of ya im glad this vid is outdated
FLAME4564 3 years ago
If the Galaxy class was that weak, the Federation would have been wiped out long ago.
It was like watching the shitty battle between Enterprise-D and the old Klingon BoP from the Generations movie.
billyboyjennings 3 years ago
Why send a Galaxy battleship on this assignment? Are there no survey ships or Runabouts? The voice acting was poor at best, there were spelling errors in the captions and grammer errors. The models were of poor quality even considering the time of this things creation, especially the BoP. The music was ripped and didn't fit the scenes well and wasn't cut together well. The BoP seemed to fire torps from its disruptors and the sheild generator is on top of the center impulse unit. Awful crap.
Gammaclipper 3 years ago
Grammar and spelling issues.. Otherwise okay.
FireRupee 4 years ago
Offly high yield torpedo the klingons had...must of bought them from quark.
alphathewolf 4 years ago
and also if in a fire there are a fire suppresant systems
sgacabouse 4 years ago
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Wow your federation ship SUX. An all human crew? The Federation insignia is wrong. The voice acting is really bad. Your film needs work... better yet burn it.
CaptCape 4 years ago
Better Yet, lets all Burn You, CaptCape. You Need Work And You SUX. Your Personality Needs Work And so Do your social Skills
freakfreak12345 4 years ago 6
Dude, the video really isn't that great. And neither are your insulting capabilities, just so you know.
CaptCape is right. Harsh, but right.
The idea for the video was fine, but it could use some revision.
FireRupee 4 years ago
well this is so ovious challengers sheild is a bubble and the ship is made of tin foil dude u are so dumb how does a 50 year old bird of prey match to a galaxy class star ship if u dount know wack about star trek then stay away please
sgacabouse 4 years ago
you spelled honor wrong. It's not honnor
Enn1Gma 4 years ago
LOL no, its Honor.
MuggyFuzzball 4 years ago 2
lol MuggyFuzzball, it's also not capitalized.
And (not directed toward you) no one seeks to "investigate the reason why this happened." They investigate events, causes, etc., and discover reasons.
FireRupee 4 years ago
I think their shields were down when transporting the crewmen when she was first hit by the Klingons. Otherwise yeah i want me a tinfoil ship too.
wheresthomas 4 years ago
pm2324 IS A BIT OF A DOUCHEBAG
pitandstaff 4 years ago
is the Challenger made out of fucking tin foil?
IAm1Sheep 5 years ago
very nice, did yalls ever go anywhere with this?
jome8989 5 years ago
Well, its an odd story. The person who headed this project ended up doing more live action directing. As for the talent, one of them began the VAA, which is one of the largest boards for voice acting (amateur voice acting in particular) on the 'net. I ended up going to pro route and continue to do so. I have no clue what happened to the rest of the cast.
Yoda117 5 years ago
Very Good. Wow that was fantastic.
spoonmonkey14 5 years ago
It was good, though the Captain's "accent" was done poorly.
JakarSunset 5 years ago
LOL! That's what was asked for... though I do agree if it was supposed to be something other than one intentionally made different.
Yoda117 5 years ago
Significant! but come on!! warp nacells!! sheesh!
costellog83 5 years ago
What a load of fucking wank... like a bird of prey can do that much damage to a galaxy class! complete shit son!! BG
costellog83 5 years ago
yeah, yeah, yeah... The idea was to test the storyboard, not adhere to ST canon. Though without shields the damage would have been pretty significant. =-P
Yoda117 5 years ago
Not bad, not bad at all
qlet 5 years ago