The vocabs good the rhyme schemes good at times. If I'm honest though... you need to get into the beat more. At times it just sounded like it was on the wrong instrumental. It didn't feel right.
got your comment bro, computer warrior lol . no no im no braveheart just know what i like and what i dont and this is shitty , and who ever is "trying" to rap this sounds like a complete wigger. the lyrics, god ..... dont get me started, heard better lines our of my arse
got your comment bro, computer warrior lol . no no im no braveheart just know what i like and what i dont and this is shitty , and who ever is "trying" to rap this sounds like a complete wigger. the lyrics, god ..... dont get me started, heard better lines our of my arse
got your comment bro, computer warrior lol . no no im no braveheart just know what i like and what i dont and this is shit, and who ever is "trying" to rap this sounds like a complete wigger. the lyrics, god ..... dont get me started, heard better lines our of my arse
got your comment bro, computer warrior lol . no no im no braveheart just know what i like and what i dont and this is shit, and who ever is "trying" to rap this sounds like a complete wigger. the lyrics, god ..... dont get me started, heard better lines our of my arse
@694ben im far from a wigger, you dont know me or anything about me, far enough you dont like it, im writing about my life experiences ive had and situations ive been through, you need to stop all your negativity, its quite sad.. and dont call me bro, were not related prik..
OH and FUCK THE HATERZ
magiknbarz 4 months ago
The vocabs good the rhyme schemes good at times. If I'm honest though... you need to get into the beat more. At times it just sounded like it was on the wrong instrumental. It didn't feel right.
But nuff respect. Keep doing you thing.
All for the cuase that is grime.
magiknbarz 4 months ago
@magiknbarz thanks alot for the constructive criticism. safe mehn il work on it
San9618 4 months ago
Heavy barz u got there!
Respect for upload :)
09MiSsTiiNG 4 months ago
@09MiSsTiiNG thanks for the positive feeback..
San9618 4 months ago
akala sbtv now thats a tune pal
694ben 5 months ago
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got your comment bro, computer warrior lol . no no im no braveheart just know what i like and what i dont and this is shitty , and who ever is "trying" to rap this sounds like a complete wigger. the lyrics, god ..... dont get me started, heard better lines our of my arse
694ben 5 months ago
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got your comment bro, computer warrior lol . no no im no braveheart just know what i like and what i dont and this is shitty , and who ever is "trying" to rap this sounds like a complete wigger. the lyrics, god ..... dont get me started, heard better lines our of my arse
694ben 5 months ago
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got your comment bro, computer warrior lol . no no im no braveheart just know what i like and what i dont and this is shit, and who ever is "trying" to rap this sounds like a complete wigger. the lyrics, god ..... dont get me started, heard better lines our of my arse
694ben 5 months ago
got your comment bro, computer warrior lol . no no im no braveheart just know what i like and what i dont and this is shit, and who ever is "trying" to rap this sounds like a complete wigger. the lyrics, god ..... dont get me started, heard better lines our of my arse
694ben 5 months ago
@694ben im far from a wigger, you dont know me or anything about me, far enough you dont like it, im writing about my life experiences ive had and situations ive been through, you need to stop all your negativity, its quite sad.. and dont call me bro, were not related prik..
San9618 4 months ago 2
this is wiked man!!
ptomsu91 5 months ago