I would say work on,Your pitches, Pronounciation,Not over emphasizing some words,Harmony,And some parts are wounds like you guys are yelling some parts, idk if it's from overemphasizing it.Oh in the background, the harmony line it needs to go lower on the higher parts because it sounds like she can't reach it or something. Go in your range so it doesn't sound so strained. Sorry not to be mean or anything but I used to take vocal lessons and being taught by a strict band director strict critism.
you guys just need to get the lyrics right that`s all, because it`s sounding a bit strange because of the wrong lyrics, your stressing to much on some words
the harmony at some parts arent very good. and it sounds like youre pushing your voice to reach a note or something, thats making you off-key. and some of your words are overpronounnced. im not being mean, just giving some constructive criticism from an experienced choir student :)
You guys are pretty good and this song is a nice song to sing too. But yeah, I guess some more vocal and harmonizing training/practice, although I can't sing myself, but anyways good luck, and thanx for sharing.
you need to be more relax~
sitinursyafiqah93 1 year ago
generally well done i suppose^^
but u sure u gonna sing SM song for SM audition?? heard that u shouldnt do that..
but anywaez, hwaiting~!!
starxdreamz 3 years ago
Are you serious? .___.'''
ArieKawaii 3 years ago 5
I would say work on,Your pitches, Pronounciation,Not over emphasizing some words,Harmony,And some parts are wounds like you guys are yelling some parts, idk if it's from overemphasizing it.Oh in the background, the harmony line it needs to go lower on the higher parts because it sounds like she can't reach it or something. Go in your range so it doesn't sound so strained. Sorry not to be mean or anything but I used to take vocal lessons and being taught by a strict band director strict critism.
BurnSakuraBurn 3 years ago
practice korean pronounciation more and rhythms. ur in tune - other than that, it's good! good luck!
snsd5 3 years ago
you guys just need to get the lyrics right that`s all, because it`s sounding a bit strange because of the wrong lyrics, your stressing to much on some words
azngurldbsk1 3 years ago
the harmony at some parts arent very good. and it sounds like youre pushing your voice to reach a note or something, thats making you off-key. and some of your words are overpronounnced. im not being mean, just giving some constructive criticism from an experienced choir student :)
methoi 3 years ago
need to get your ears checked.
koreanxchunsa615 3 years ago 6
u guys sound very good together!
jaejoongluverxoxo 3 years ago
i think that the first voice was a bit deep for this song...
second voice was more fit for this type of song ^^
the first voice sounded a bit nasal?
kanginGF418 3 years ago 2
You guys are pretty good and this song is a nice song to sing too. But yeah, I guess some more vocal and harmonizing training/practice, although I can't sing myself, but anyways good luck, and thanx for sharing.
AznSao9 3 years ago
O_o...
Saranghae321 3 years ago
You guys got much better.
^^
keep it up,
and you'll be really good!
Do vocal practices everyday,
and itll add up.
^^
kustar147 3 years ago
You guys got much better.
^^
keep it up,
and you'll be really good!
Do vocal practices everyday,
and itll add up.
^^
kustar147 3 years ago
good voice !but you need practice more !
yoonhyo 4 years ago